TipsyTwilight
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Well i liked it, kinda funny too.
i can imagine spitfires face soooooo vividly lol
Hilarious at the end right there.
Quite good. Short clopfics are really hard to pull off, and this worked. It was short and funny and a little bit cute, and grammatically correct as far as I paid any attention, excerpt style where I picked out purposeful fragments.
Your mother and I are so disapointed in you, Miss Twilight.
2169930 Forgive me father
2169715 Good! Thankya
2169797 Thankya! :3 It was quite fun
I laughed.
Soarin' X Anything is a win in my book, he can ship with anything. Thumb and fave given.
I... I tried...
I truly tried...
Dat ending.
Hmm. Well. This was pretty good. I spotted a few errors, and I felt like it was a little rushed, but otherwise it was great. Sexy and humorous. Dat Soarin. (Yeah, you can use his name without the apostrophe if you want.)
Have my like!
2170100 Thanks!
2170468 It was fun, but gosh writing this was hard
2170501
...Pun intended?
Ya sure know how ta end a story
Someone says it's funny, and it ain't mane 6 shipping between eachother, might as well read it.
Sounds like a friggin' funny college, THAT WAS A FUNNY STORY.
What was Spitfire thinking when she came in? I don't know what to think about the ending.
2170515
It sure is now!
2170550 glad you liked it! Thank you
2170567 hope you liked it!
:3
This was good. Nothing spellbinding, but a good little one-shot nonetheless. And I love the characterizations of Soarin and Thunderlane here—almost like a male FlutterDash.
2170021
You mentor's father is not however and demands you drink more vodka
Damn... Wish I was Spitfire so I could have seen that!
2170647 Characterization and the fact that I liked them was what made it doable. Writing porn is hardddd
2170853 Sounds like a plan. ;)
2171982 I got to the end... and realized that them walking into the wrong showers would be a decent way to end. :3
2173685 good come over to my castle then (it's still mine dammit! I know you refer to it as celestia's castle bit it's mine) and come to the the room in the kitchen guarded by two gaurds (one night and one solar) and tell them "Gregory Rasputin"
"and he beared his neck almost by instinct" -> "bared"
"what had been it’s target all along" -> "its"
"Soarin’s tongue doing it’s best" -> "its"
"He almost lost his balanced on the slick floor" -> "balance"
"praying that whoever it wasn’t hadn’t heard or noticed." -> "was"
2322819 Oh you. It's not even that bad.
Alternate ending Spitfire: boys what ar u doing Sorin:nothing. Thunderlane: yep just letting sorin suck my cock. look on spits face --->
Giggity.
Boys... you should both should known what would happen if I catch you two screwing around with each other... without me. Now bend over you two..."
4270170 YES. THIS.
I NEED A SEQUEL