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Serina


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Don't have time to read it right now but the short and straight to the point introduction makes me add this to favor for later.

This should be interestin.

I like the concept, I'm going to read this in a bit. :twilightsmile:

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Okey Dokey :pinkiehappy:

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I think it is but then again i wrote it :rainbowwild:

*took of his glasses* dear Serina, you are a naughty naughty filly... and you deserve every thing what will come on you...

*stands up from his armchair* and... *pulls out a Box under the table* you... *opens the box* will... *takes a wipe and handcuffs out of it* love it...

:pinkiehappy: *thump up + fave...* well i already follow you so... watch out... :duck:

1861764 I've read it... I like it! Some parts were kinda hard to read but I'm liking the AU thing you've got going on here. I can honestly say I really want to read the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Oh good lord that was hot.

WHY SO MANY DOWNVOTES??:flutterrage::flutterrage:

Well back to the comment...it was steamy and hot as hell, tough the elevator part seems like it was rushed or something less romantic...i mean yeah the whole fic was about how they craved for each other in their minds but i dont know like it was off

Anyways good hot clop fic :twilightsmile:

Just wondering, why do you have mentions of both Prince Solaris and Celestia in the same story?

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I do? oh great 3 hours of checking and i still screw up something! :raritycry:

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Idk haters? :duck:

This fic single-handedly turned me gay...

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Sorry Im busy with writing and listening to Ke$ha :duck:
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whats awkward about 2 stallions having sex? wait..... :rainbowlaugh:

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Hope you're happy! :pinkiehappy:

1862449 i know what you mean Bro, i know what you mean...

1862561 OW NOWIIIIIESSSSS!!! :fluttercry::fluttershbad:... *sigth* aw... well next time... :twilightsmile:

P.S. *reads a very exciting word*: Incomplete... :D...

Really hot clopfic, a few grammar and punctuation errors but brilliant nonetheless we'll done:raritywink:

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That picture! :rainbowlaugh:

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Considering i didn't know what an adjective was until 9th grade I think I'm doing all right :pinkiehappy: I still have a lot to learn though :rainbowwild:

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Yup there's more to come :raritywink:

Hm... thought it would be a bit more romance and a bit less... fucking around, hohoho... anyway, i'm out. i've never been a fan of clop fics. I'll not give it a dislike or a like because both would be unfair of me to give.

1865648 Oh God I laughed so hard at that truely thank you.

Really hot! I look forward to future chapters.:heart:

My only complaint is that's it became confusing if it was pony or anthro a couple times.

:raritystarry: This was so hot. You have a gift for making really erotic scenarios, imagery and characters.
I know everyone else said it already but goddam was this sexy. Loved it.
Grammar needs work. And I got confused about some of the actions the characters were making.
You even somehow managed to write this with very little use of any dirty words. That deserves like a medal or something.
So hot it bursts the thermometer. It gets a fave. :heart:

Boner.....what are you doing?!.....Boner........STAHP

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aw thanks! I've been really bleh lately with writing but today I am bound and determined to get at least one of the stories I've been working on done. Or at least 90% done. :rainbowdetermined2:
Also I'm getting help with my grammar so hopefully it'll be better soon :pinkiehappy:

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Yeah I see that now. I probably need to go back and fix a few things. Sometimes I get in these writing moods and I forget I'm writing about ponies. :twilightblush:

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:rainbowlaugh: lol you okay?

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I understand. It's just something to keep in mind. :twilightsmile:

Very nice :P

One thing I noticed is that you mentioned Celestia's name. Since I'm going by the assumption that this is 63'd, you might want to change that to Solaris.

this NEEDS to be a full story

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I'll try to go back. Find it and fix it up! :pinkiehappy:

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It will be it'll just take time :rainbowwild:

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Ooooh nice. I have a few myself :raritywink:

Just wondering if there's a chance of you continuing this anytime soon?

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I'm working on chapter 2. I should be busting out chapters when summer comes around school is just drowning me right now. :twilightsmile:

2457076 Alright i can't wait because "fuzzy hoofcuffs" who wouldn't want that.

good lord celestia someone got creative

Holy sweet Jesus, this fic is amazing. I can't believe I read this in the car with my family right next to me. And a Dominant caramel will be etched into my memory because I write Caramac.. Awesome fic

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Just a wee bit... :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks! And I imagine that was an awkward situation.... :rainbowlaugh:

2765593 Yes but I had a blanket so I managed

Why is this on hiatus? Frankly for the past 3 months I've been trying to work on it and no inspirational writing comes to me. That means until further notice I will work on it only when I really feel like it and where I don't feel like what I've written so far sucks. :facehoof:
It may take some time but I'll eventually finish it. I just believe the stories I've written recently express my writing skills and are more fun for me to write than this one. So I wish to put more of my time and work into those stories for now.

That was awesome

I didn't know this was going to be a on going series. I thought it was a one shot

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hahaha sorry. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! :raritystarry:

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Nope. I'm actually trying to finish the whole story so I can post one chapter a week before I take it off of hiatus.:twilightsmile:

4552144 May I ask for a completion percentage or an estimate of when you might be done?

Glad i found this story again. totally gonna like and read again

Will this ever be completed?

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