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Serina


Sipping iced coffee, penning pony tales, and spreading love—embracing the sweetness of existence, one adventure at a time! (CLOSED) Kofi! Commissions!

Comments ( 56 )

Interesting........I want to see where this goes

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SRY CLOPPY! I just got all excited i just had to! :raritystarry:

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Whats Regidar? :rainbowhuh:

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:pinkiegasp: IM SRY I DIDNT SEE IT LOL! :rainbowlaugh:
and maybe I've already finished it i just need to decide when to publish it. :duck:

Comment posted by Hyper-Insomniac deleted Dec 11th, 2012
Comment posted by Hyper-Insomniac deleted Dec 11th, 2012

1783363 You can help me edit it then I'll send you the link :derpytongue2:

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O.M.G. i will be so disappointed if he doesn't come and comment on my story him being the top commentator and all! :raritycry:

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... GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME :raritystarry::pinkiehappy::yay:

1783859 Lol yeah he better get his ass over here!:pinkiegasp:

WOOOOOOT!!!
Homo Pony Action!!

Finally a good story with two males...my body is tingling :rainbowlaugh:

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Totally agree!!!!!! :rainbowwild:

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and thank you? tingling is a good sensation i hope! :duck:

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Very much so. There aren't enough authors who can do Male on Male clop or are willing to do so.
THANK YOU :rainbowlaugh:

Well done! This story was a huge turn on!
A bit rushed...

But also it was pure excellence
Love it

"Soarin groaned and dropped his head in his hands." Ponies do not have hands. :flutterrage:

Great story! I loved reading it. Thumbs up!:heart:

this is great! keep up the good work:pinkiehappy:

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oops looks like i missed that one! my bad!!! :twilightblush:

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Heya :)
I saw this pop up in my notifications and figured I'd give it a read, since I had some time on my hooves. I think you did a pretty good job overall - thumbs up!
I do feel the story could use some polishing passes in the dialog, some of the descriptions and progression, but nothing to be discouraged about. If you want, I can send you more specific stuff in a PM. Definitely keep writing! I'd be happy to see you put up more.
:heart:

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I believe you just molested the emoticons box... OH WELL :derpytongue2:
I wov ponies faces :pinkiehappy::rainbowwild:

Make a sequel! :D

I really hope you're planning on a sequal for this,fucking loved it:heart::heart::heart::heart:

Man this story was awsome and cute i really want to see more of those two also...

Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel :pinkiecrazy:

When he grew quite

Quiet?

The End???:twilightangry2:
There aren't many Thunderlane fics out there so...I demand you make more of this!:flutterrage:

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Hmmmm... Yesh i will do that, but I'm working on 3 other fics right now so probably after christmas :rainbowwild:

So for now darlings enjoy what comes out :duck:

1816551 Oh i will *Takes of pants*


Can you tell me what the pairings are in the fics?

Love the clop with a plot well what I consider a plot and also love the song it really fits and yes continue this paring plz:raritystarry:

Please, please carry on with this pairing. I love it.

Oddly enough, I actually liked this. Interesting paring :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

It was very sweet and I liked it. Well done.

what did i just read....i loved it i mean im not gay but you got to draw the line on just SxM and take a walk down MXm lane.

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I will just gotta get a few other stories done and I'll start on it :rainbowwild:

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Awww thanks you guys!!!! :raritystarry:

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Hahahaha thanks :rainbowlaugh:

I love this story!!! i just wish you would extend it please :fluttershysad:

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I will but I'm working on other stories right now on top of school so it's taking me ages. :facehoof:

I'm gonna kill the friend who recommended this to me. I'm not gay. I have a girlfriend, what the actual fuck is this?

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Well it's called clop and it's a romance fanfciton between 2 stallions who are in the show called my little pony. Need I explain more? :duck:

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when you say things like that it just screams closet homosexual, Just saying

Soooo..., why haven't you made a sequel yet?:trixieshiftright:

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School, other stories, and life. :unsuresweetie:

its a great story it would be a huge shame to end it there plus i really want to know what happens with the romantic side of the story.
please do wright more of this

This is great. We need more SoarLane.

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Geez, I cannot believe I tried to make that joke. I guess acting too serious with a joke on the internet isn't allowed anymore. Anyway, yes, I enjoyed it. :rainbowlaugh:

Edit - I also don't know why I didn't favorite this before.
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lol, not bad, an interesting shipping, I don't think I've seen Soarin and Thunderlane shipped together before. One or two oversights in language use...you said everyone a few times instead of everypony but not bad.

Ermm...one question....is this Anthro? because you make many references that sound as though they're bipedal not quadrupedal? For example Soarin backs off with 'both' his hooves raised...so how does he remain standing? At the beginning of the clop Thunderlane leans back exposing himself...again how does he remain standing if they're not Anthro?

Anyway...keep writing :raritystarry:

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