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Damocles23
I write what makes me happy. Hope it makes you happy as well!
Damocles23
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A really sound start so far, I think. Little errors, which I like. I would also bet that Twilight Sparkle is the "mysterious pony".
me gusta
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I really need to stop reading clopfics. Still wondering as to who it was.
This is, aside from grammatical errors, genuinely good writing. It's not often you get a good author willing to write clop, but I welcome it. I'm also inspired to read your other story, consider yourself watched!
I agree it has to be Twi- or Flutters!?
I'll keep track of this, not sure if I like it or not though, I try to read at least a few chapter before judging a story. There are a few grammatical errors, mostly involving tense, that you should pay more attention too. Other than that, this story looks like it can be good.
I made a bet with one of my friends this would happen.... damn, I was right.
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About the dream thing or the sex?
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I meant that someone would right a 50 shades of Grey spinoff on FiMFiction. Even more specifically with Rainbow Dash.
"Soarin releases his load into my mouth.It is so much and so thick that I have to chew it a little before swallowing it."
"I have to chew it a little before swallowing it."
"chew it a little before swallowing it."
.................................... what the.................. is that even............
no, you know what? i dont even wanna know.
that aside, good job so far. I'm tracking this shit.
I say it's either fluttershy, Twilight, or (for some reason I thought of this immediatly) Rarity
1008066 IMHO, TAW is my favorite clop writer; she (yep, female) writes very well, and writes all sorts of clop too so pretty much whatever you like is there somewhere.
good threesome scene, although the "royal horn" thing threw the erotica out the window and shot it with a cannon (a creepy one, no less!)
OH and this fic was pretty good too. Kinda had a brain fart at the dream, completely forgetting that this was a clopfic.
*all of the above are opinions*
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Well, it was a dream! And, as far as i know, dreams can get more deranged as they go on
Holy shit you are right about AC/DC. It's amazing for anything involving clop, teen humor or action. I pretty much had Spellbound on loop for the last chapter of stuff I wrote.
Romance par excellence btw, though I think the clop in this chapter needs some cutting. I could be wrong, I'm not good at putting criticism into words that mean things.
Excellent, I'm sitting here just a bit Thunderstruck over the whole thing.
I do notice minor spelling errors and things of that ilk but you have conveyed an excellent story!
must be very good music
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Palmer is a really talented artist. A bit of alternative but very entertaining!
This is truly amazing so far I hope you continue this
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Already working on chapter 4 and another couple of projects.
Do you watch presshearttocontinue??? It's just that you used terri-bad and she says that a lot
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Actually no...I really don't know what that is! I use terri-bad pretty often when i write. Apparently i think it's funny
1017385 she does gaming newz on presshearttocontinue and coffeh time on dexteritybonus. Coffeh time is like a vlog she does on YouTube. I thought you watched her because you used terri-bad in one of pinkie's dialogue :( but it's ok, you're still jawesome /)(^3^)(\
>Damocles23 Great to hear
I listen to skrillex, and i have never ever read anything like this.... i like it
i love this man, Rainpie? pinkdash? what ever this is keep it up
I was listening to Bjork while reading. It was somewhat fitting.
"Drunken butterflies go to war in my stomach"
Gods I love that sentence.
you my good sir are a douchebag
1102716 What you said. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_shock.png
This story is getting, some deepness in it. Rainbow cares about her marefriend, Pinkie doesn't want to reveal who took her in the first time, and Rainbow doesn't know how to cook.
I could never think that you are a douchebag sir, instead, you are making this story richer every chapter.
Keep going. And here, have an eagle:
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Thank you!
You sir are the douchiest douche bag in the world
and good day to you
"Especially Snowflake. I could take on Thunderlane, but…Snowflake?" THIS sentence is when i realized which pony Snowflake is... i thought he was just a loud backround OC you created for this story at first. but when i got here, it hit me like a ton of bricks... i couldent stop laughing for a good 15 minutes.
also just to clarify and make sure I'm not laughing at nothing, snowflake is the HUGE white pegasus who yells YEAH! all the time correct?
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Yes!
what the hell did I miss?
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Chapter 4 I guess.
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Nah, i reread it and i know whats goin on
Yay!!! New chapter, haven't read much pinkiedash so I'm trying to get on the band wagon again.
I can understand the emotion that this kind of story can elicit in people, especially when it takes this kind of turn. I don't like to see anypony upset either but it makes for a richer experience overall. Keep up the writing very enjoyable to read so far.
Beutiful.
Really, I mean it.
Only, with me being the grammer nazi I am, have to point some stupid grammatic errors.
Whoops! You need some space!
There's another one, but I'm lazy.
Have a nice month!
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Ack! Always one that gets away
Glad you liked it, though.
Hahaha!!!
I'm even weird down there. - pinkie pie
My god that was magnificent!
sweet and adorable + clop?
favorite!
PS: I like how you can write longer chapters of up to 5k+ words even without clop. Sign of an autor who really thinks about his work.
>every 34 pages
>34 pages
>34
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE
Manly tears were shed tonight
, and for all those who down voted this... The pits of tatarus awaits you 
YAY! Closure! Now I demand more. IMEDIATLY!
That was a great ending
It always sucks when a good story ends, but this ending was pretty good. Nice job.
I noticed a few typos in this chapter and the last one, for example "until I have proofs" should probably just be "until I have proof." Running it through a spell checker should pick more up.