Holy shit you are right about AC/DC. It's amazing for anything involving clop, teen humor or action. I pretty much had Spellbound on loop for the last chapter of stuff I wrote.
Romance par excellence btw, though I think the clop in this chapter needs some cutting. I could be wrong, I'm not good at putting criticism into words that mean things.
She stands there for a while, completely frozen. Eyes fluttering nervously while her lower lip trembles.“Even if I’m not AJ?”
And the big elephant in the room shows up again…I won’t let him ruin this. I won’t let him ruin us both and the beautiful thing we’re sharing right now. I’ll find a way to be with you, Pinkie Pie. I want to stay with you…
It's supposed to be "... I won't let her ruin this."
not a fan of pinkie dash, but this, this is woah, i love the way you portray rainbow in here. honestly unexpected, but completely enjoyed, you made this different from most other clopfics i've read. incredibly done.
When it said pinkie was chewing / licking her lips and shirts be dreaming about something tasty. I couldn't help but think "yea, she's dreaming bout your tasty cunt" . I hope there's nothing wrong with me XD
Holy shit you are right about AC/DC. It's amazing for anything involving clop, teen humor or action. I pretty much had Spellbound on loop for the last chapter of stuff I wrote.
Romance par excellence btw, though I think the clop in this chapter needs some cutting. I could be wrong, I'm not good at putting criticism into words that mean things.
Excellent, I'm sitting here just a bit Thunderstruck over the whole thing.
I do notice minor spelling errors and things of that ilk but you have conveyed an excellent story!
I listen to skrillex, and i have never ever read anything like this.... i like it
I was listening to Bjork while reading. It was somewhat fitting.
It's supposed to be "... I won't let her ruin this."
I'm reading this story again, it's so cute.
That was a pretty good chapter right there. Pinkie Dash...Not the biggest fan of that, but I'll see what this turns into.
not a fan of pinkie dash, but this, this is woah, i love the way you portray rainbow in here. honestly unexpected, but completely enjoyed, you made this different from most other clopfics i've read. incredibly done.
When it said pinkie was chewing / licking her lips and shirts be dreaming about something tasty. I couldn't help but think "yea, she's dreaming bout your tasty cunt" . I hope there's nothing wrong with me XD
Im not really a fan of dashiepie but its ok... actually i think its cute