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A Young Homosexual Alone in The Corner, Crying – Suttree, Cormac McCarthy.

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I thought Stormy was a pegasus! The cover art is a lie!

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OH EMM GEE! DO U LYKE EVEN READ MY STORIES?

...He's an Earth Pony, from Manehattan.

2728788 I do read your shit! You know I do! :rainbowhuh:

I thought he was a pegasus the entire time! I've been so wrong!

:raritycry: Waaaaaaaaa!

oh my gosh that was the best thing ever!!!:rainbowkiss:

Super sweet, super sexy. I love these two colts and I love your clopfics. Keep em all coming!

Despite being one apple short, the Waldorf Salad had been made and tossed.

My favorite line. A lovely piece, this.

2728788 Stormy does sound like a pegasus name though.

Also his cutie mark looks like lettuce

Also great piece to go with the main story, perhaps you might do other ones in the future if you need a break?

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Your mom's cover art is a lie, bitch.

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Edit:

It was now six ten, Stromy would be showing up in an hour,

Oh fuck, Strokes is actually going to be seduced by Stormy's long-lost, and (by comparison to other siblings) moderately evil, and most likely hetero twin brother, Stromy! GOD DAMN YOU STROMY.

Oh good, Strokes isn't one of those weird ponies on campus who says "buck" when he means "FUCK".

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To be fair, I thought the same thing. I guess I just assumed he was because Stormy is the type of name someone would call a pegasus.

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I hate you for pointing that out. Not because I can't go back and fix it, but because for the rest of my time on this site I'll always imagine Stromy as the most amazing character who could have been.

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Just to get it out in the open "Stormy" totally works better as the name of a pegasus. But, if he were a pegasus he would just be called 'Soarin'.' and suddenly I'd seem like a way less creative writer.

Besides, wings seem like a hassle. Sure, flying is neat, but how do you sleep on your back if you're a pegasus? Do you get morning wood wing boners? What's the deal with feather maintenance?

...that's the single lamest thing I've ever posted in my life. But, I'm really glad you guys enjoyed the story. There's a special place in my heart for anything cute and cuddly involving Gentle Strokes and Stormy and if enough people enjoy this it could be the first of a few more silly little one shots.

I bloody love your writing, good sir. The characters are great, the plot was certainly intriguing enough, and the clop scene felt just... natural instead of forced in like you see with a lot of writers these days. I have yet to get down to writing some clop meself, but this stuff will certainly be a useful influence for me, so thank you in advance!

Sigh. Reading this makes me wish I had a boyfriend.

It was nice reading the rest of this story after I saw the preview. Pretty good, I'd say. Story ended a little sooner than I expected it to once the anal started, but I suppose it's not a bad thing. I personally would've fluffed it out a bit more, but it was still pretty good.

"It wasn't bad. 8.9/10" - IGN.

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You should write an April Fool's epilogue to Different Strokes next year where Stromy makes a Dramatic! Surprise! Entrance!

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Is this set before or after White Mane threw up in Brawnys lap? Either way it was really hot but most of all romantic. Love it! :heart:

Exquisite.

This is some truly primo clop here. The kind that makes you want to press two fingers against your mouth and make silly kissing noises like a stereotypical Italian chef.

Naw, but seriously, I've got a thing for clop that manages to be cute and cuddly and sexy all at the same time. Too much of it seems to be one night stands, passionate nights, but with no real love behind it, ya know?

Keep doin' what you're doin', you are quite the writer.

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I write with the loosest definition of a 'timeline', but, this is supposed to take place after the first chapter of There's Something About White Mane. I keep throwing Brawny Brawler into stories because there's nothing more fun (at least to me) than writing a super militant closet case. I'm not sure what to do with him at the moment, but I'd love to keep throwing jokes about how he loves to get spanked at Frat Parties and how he sometimes likes to linger when he gives his 'Hoofball' buddies those totally hetero butt slaps and towel whips in the locker room.

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Thank you. I think you've been onboard with all the 'Gay Ponies 'X' in College' stories I've done and I'm glad to see they still work their magic for you. I don't really see a reason to stop writing them as long as I have such kickass fans like you reading them :pinkiehappy:

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This comment....kinda makes me all gooey inside. Thank you! (Also, um...If you ever need a pair of eyes to check out your clop thing, PM me?)

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An 8.9 from IGN? Damn, that's almost a 9.0, and we all know only the best Call of Duty tier games get that high of a ranking. I'm honored :rainbowwild:

Great clopfic, I realy 'enjoyed' it. If you EVER do a sequel to this be sure to include the thing with the 'whipped creame and cherries'. I was realy looking forward to that. Anyway, great synopsis, character development, and grammer. A+ good sir.

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Thank you very much.

This was sort of a 'testing the waters' kinda clop; just something to see if it would work, but I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. Not to get all up my own arse but if you liked it you can check out Different Strokes (Which is a tamer story about how the two met) or There's Something About White Mane (Which has Brawny Brawler in it). They're all part of this silly little OC world I'm filling up; they all have the same characters who go to the same parties and sleep with the same people.

Either way, a sequel is something I'd consider sometime in the future for sure.

Okay, now I have to read different strokes. This short sweet cloppy goodness has got me giggly over here, and rather pouty. Good grammar, excellent story telling, and raging boner inducing gay sex scene, I like it. I give it 9/10. The only thing that is wrong with this, that it didn't have whipped cream and cherries.

A favorite and a watch you have earned!

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Hey, thanks for that wonderful little review.

Different Strokes is the story to read if you're looking for more 'Stormy/Strokes' stuff. There's also 'There's Something About White Mane', it's another one of the 'Camden' related fics and it might do you kindly.

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I wish there were more quality M/M fictions on the site. Most same sex pairs seem to be F/F. Not that I don't love F/F, its just too much of a good thing is too much. I might be biased. Will read and soon!

I'm pretty sure this is the fanfic I read a year and a half ago that helped me realize my sexuality. Thank you.

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