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Guy_Incognito
A Young Homosexual Alone in The Corner, Crying – Suttree, Cormac McCarthy.
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I like it so far.
Personally I think that the comma should be moved before the first that.
bucking awesome,
YES! YESYESYESYESYES It's so adorable! That is, perhaps the best possible way to come out of the closet to yourself X3 Go Piper!
Very cute. Added to groups )
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Thanks dude. Really appreciate the comment and you adding it to a few groups. Um, if you like the story, the characters of Piper and White Mane cameo (And often) in my other story Different Strokes (Which is also about two gay ponies in college) that you might wanna check out?
(That was a just totally shameless promotion from me by the way)
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MORE gay ponies? Don't mind if I do!
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Damn, dude. You just made my night!
I really hope you enjoy Different Strokes though, I feel like I should warn you that there's some stuff with both White Mane and Piper in it that kinda...not 'spoil' stuff for whatever comes next, but, well, you'll see.
Either way, thanks so much dude. Have one of these:
on the house (From me to you)
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Free heart? Okay, let me repay with moustaches:
Have a nice day! You win! Tight flanks and nice stallions to you!)
mmmmyes....
Hips that could put any filly to shame? That sounds embarrassing.
M/M shipping by Guy, awesome reading it asap. I hope to see moar out of you :D
I loved reading this, a great start! I look forward to more.
lol that picture is so goofy looking....
You're an entertainin' fellow, Mr. Incognito. Lookin' forward to more.
D'aaaaaaaaaawww.... dat ending
2293183 Agreed, love it!
I like other fanfic that youre working on- Different Strokes. Pure awesome and realistic in my mind, keep up the good work!
-Morfonious
Please, sir.
More gay ponies.
Never read M/M before, but I can say that this is a very good first chapter
I could so fap to this.
1. "apposed" and "opposed" are not the same thing.
2. "it's" means "it is" or "it has". "its" is possessive.
3. Some words start with a capital letter when they should have a lower case letter.
4. You have some double spaces.
5. You should check for missing commas.
I am a lazy ass, so I have not specified any of the places that you did stuff wrong. Also, you have a space before a comma somewhere
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Grats :)
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Watch the dislikes pour in. Bronies are usually hypocrites. "Love and tolerate" doesn't extend to homosexual males.
2295541 geez what put you in a bad mood?
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hmmm... i dont know, i mean in every group there are gonna be people who hate and stuff... but this bunch is WAY more tolerant and nice than like what... 90% of the web. besides the story got featured on its merits and will continue to receives good feedback as well. so who really cares?
My god... This is amazing. I mean, I haven't even gotten to the sex yet and this story is amazing. The way you write, it just gives me a sense that I'm there. The way you started the story off and it seemed like it would get right into the action, then you fake the reader out with a bit of great comedy.
This is gold. Like, wow. You're good. Like, wow.
[edit] Okay, I've finished it. Spoiler: This isn't even really a clopfic. I really don't know anything about these characters since I haven't read your other story, but this seems more of a story of close and great friendship than anything. I don't quite know what to say. The sex was, well, it wasn't really sex. It was a selfish jock taking advantage of what he was sure was an easy grab for a good, one-sided night of fun, and he got just that, even doing so in the most selfish way possible as was the face-fucking.
You made me feel feels, funny feels then aroused feels, then angry feels, and finally, cute and bittersweet happy feels.
You, have earned my watch.
Jesus Guy, how is it that you can pull on the heartstrings... As well as other locations; and still keep a decent plot (hue)? You are seriously one of the best writers on this site.
This is one of those stories that has me checking for updates an irrationally frequent amount of times...
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It could use a little clean-up with the spelling errors here and there, but yeah. I agree with you sire, this is a very good story.
I never thought I'd find myself faving gay clop/romance 
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>that feel
I know that one. This and Gentle Strokes both do that to me
Well, this went awkwardly well.
So......
Holy Fucking Shit (Sorry, pardon my French) I'm flabbergasted at how fucking incredible you guys are! You have no idea how flattering it is to leave my computer for a day after posting some silly story that's a spin off to another sillier story of mine and come back and find out my story's like featured, and has so many fucking fans and UGH: I don't wanna sound cocky or conceited but, wowzers, you guys have made my everything (I'm pretty sure I have to put this on my resume now!)
Thank you so very much to all of you guys. To everyone who read/commented/fave'd and shared this. To all you beautiful bastards who got this to the front page (And have kept it there for, Christ, almost a day now!). To all you wonderful people I can only say one thing;
How can I repay you? I'm serious? I'm looking for anything; I'll take all your story ideas? Any of your O.C.'s that you'd love to live and exist in the world of Camden Arts School? Anything? Please, don't hesitate to PM me or anything.
I'm blissfully working really hard on plotting out the next few chapters of this (And balancing it with the next chapter of Different Strokes as well) but if it all works out, I can see this being a super awesome and fun story to write.
Thanks again so very much for all the love and, again, suggestions! O.C.'s (I love 'em and need 'em!) and anything else: Just let me know!
Oh the awkwardness!
I haven't been past a thousand words and I'm already giggling like mad! Better pull that 'hoof' away Piper!
Even though this is a clopfic, I'll allow it to be.
Very good sire, amazing. Well done, well done.
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make more of it ^^
Now this is just amazing. Very original, cute and funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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If someone doesn't like something, they don't like it. "Love and tolerate" doesn't mean you have to like everything. Seriously, dude. Chill.
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^ This comment, my experience in a nutshell.
This the first M/M story I ever favorited simply on merit and not, as I call it, "Lulz Factor."
Take my watch, you earned it.
You'd like that wouldn't you?
Sorry I had to do it.
Great story by the way, just finished readin Different Strokes and now I've got two new favorites.
Saw the story. Isn't really my thing. Gave it a shot anyway. Pretty decent. You earned a thumbs up from me and a mustache
2296402 Just keep writing, man. Just keep writing.
And on the subject of ocs if you could sneakthis guyinto the background somewhere I'd bear your childrenNOw this story is worth tracking.
And frankly i'm OK with him being gay (even thoguh i'm as straight as a man can be).
Keep up with the story!
This was a great read. I’m looking forward to see what happens next
Okay, so like, seriously, I really like this story so far.
It captures the cute moments when they have to be cute, as well as the awkward moments. The "sexy" moments are really hilarious as hell, as well as some other parts of the story. Pretty much, this story makes everything really good.
The characters, oh god, the characters. White Mane is my favourite so far. He's a bit narcissistic, and a bit vain, but he's still cute, and adorable. Piper is the perfect, shy, socially awkward stallion, who somehow everypony in campus knows. This is absolutely brilliant, specially since this is not cliche at all, which is something I don't like in characters.
In a nutshell, you did a pretty good job with this. I hope you keep writing, and it keeps being as good as this was.
Hey this isn't shameless clop its actually quite a decent story, honestly this is far better than most clop stories out there.
Shameless? This was not shameless. I feel that a really good story can, and has developed from this. Can't wait to see an update.
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I agree, i think that should be taken out of the description as it would probably drive some readers away with a wrong opinion on this story.
Keep up the good work and please update soon. As somebody that typically doesn't read clop or same sex romance, I'm finding this irresistibly adorable.