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Marshal Twilight


A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.

Comments ( 33 )

Nice story, but I'd argue that it isn't really a gender bender story, rather a gender bender-play one; Thunderlane doesn't actually turn into a mare, though he is referred to as one.

Still, minor nitpick on an enjoyable clop.

I think it's more Gender-play or trans, but mostly I hope genderplay. either way, Yay! You did a story!

Thank god, a good gay fic! I don't have enough horse dick in my life...

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Yeah, you have a point. I changed it to genderplay.

Godamm, this was sweet, sexy and brought back a lot of good memories. Lovely stuff!

My body was not ready, very well done.

7857675 That would be a good sequel though.

This ship needs more sappy Soarin' like this!

Most of the ones I've seen have him being all cool, in control, cocky. Sure there's some of that here, but Soarin' from the show just seems like a lovable doofus which is most of what I saw in this. Nicely done!

And the clop, as per usual from the Marshal, was great; it was just Soarin's characterization that made it excellent for me.

This was a great read, I hope to see more of this stuff in the future. I love femcolt stories, I would hope it would be more forced and/pr humiliated.

7857891 Yes, it would. *hint, hint*

YES PLEASE

Thank you almighty alcohol

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I don't have enough horse dick in my life

who does? I know I don't.

Noc

Back in form, I see. Very nice.

You had my thumbs up in the beginning with all the subtle fan references. This was very hot!

When Soarin finally catches Thunderlane in the act, he decides to show the repressed pegasus that it's okay for stallions to be pretty too.

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he decides to show the repressed pegasus that it's okay for stallions to be pretty too

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it's okay for stallions to be pretty too

YES

This is Braeburned level's of 'You are trying to make us all gay'. It is amazingly good!

It's a Marshall Twilight clopfic, what do you expect? 10/10.

Gonna get the booze and pretend I didn't see this.

Fucking yes. Just yes. Thank you. Jesus what a good read, a new kind of flavor!

Horse flavor

Great read, please continue the good work! 100/10

Oh, cool. Gay crossdressing stuff. +1

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Bloody Mary full of vodka, blessed are you among cocktails. Pray for me now and at the hour of my death, which I hope is soon. Amen.

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:scootangel:

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Yeah, I like him as confident and in control, but not necessarily cocky (at least not overly so). I think that in an actual, working relationship, Soarin wouldn't be able to get away with being perpetually cocky, even if he might act that way sometimes for the sake of turning Thunderlane into mush.

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Aww, thanks brahs :twilightblush:

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7861752 Oh, lighten up, Kalash. A little dick never hurt anyone!

7860492 God dammit, I know that's true.

His comic 'Comic Relief' MUST have made at least 1,000 people gay.

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Tis not my fetish. Read anyway because tis Marshall Twilight.

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<Sees avatar> KITTY! <Reads comment>

Never hurt anyone?

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Whoever made that picture, that's a big part of why I clicked; I thought I saw it right as I clicked away, and had to go back just to get a better look. Credit to that artist man, that is a great picture.

Okay, the first half of that was way too fricking adorable. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Dazzling_Flash deleted Jul 30th, 2017

moaning softly into his warmth mouth

warm mouth

A nice little clop.

LOVED IT!!!

Will there be a part 4?

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