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I didn't read all of it, but just the beginning (I don't really like gay clopfics and stuff- Personal preference), but from what i read, it wasn't that bad. Some of the words felt a bit weird in those sentences, but you've got some talent in you :P An upvote from me.
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Thanks - I do straight stuff too, so keep an eye out. I'll be able to spend more time on whatever I end up doing next, don't you worry.
I liked it a lot, but there were some confusing errors
-Please try to make a new paragraph -every- time a different character speaks, to clear up confusion.
Welp, yeah, that's about it. Good job!
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You've got it, friend. Thanks!
hahaa i like the way they talk to each other maybe a sequel with a more romatic focus?
with the written part i think it was good how dialogue had a different presentation so basicaly
Good job
Hmm. To be honest, I was expecting SoarBurn, but never mind. Pretty good.
Quite awesome....a bit romantic, abd is a nice touch to the story and is already above my expectations....good job!!!!!
This was cute, sexy and just more in the romantic sense. I liked it quite a lot actually.
All the sexy stuff was nice and hot while the romance was sweet.
Good story, I hope you write more.
You sir, deserve a thumb! A tantalisingly erotic story between the two, well written, and overall enjoyable :)
You hath received thumb, fav and mustashe
I found this really adorable. I agree that this should be made into a full story. Maybe from when they got together to later in life? It would be a lot of writing but i think it would be amazing. Like and fav
I think I'm bisexual. This fic kind of drove the nail in there.
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thanks
Wait... This isn't Soarburn?
Well... Ok. It's not bad. Was just hoping for Soarburn.