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Lets see if this is as good as it sounds. I'll read this later.
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Give me your honest opinion.
quite the story
expecting moar please
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to be honest I found it kind of entertaining, although I guess that happens when you read such a variety of stories that clop like this is as legit as some other stories out there.
on another note, you have a repeat paragraph in there for some reason O.o
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Thanks a bunch.
Oh man, how did I not see that?
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/OhCelestiaWhy.png
You already misspelled Pierce and called Mr. Cake a "man", and I haven't even opened the story.
Oh, you did go with Mr. Cake. Meh. Sorry for what I do, but... I'm too committed to the Cakes. And Ace.
Well, well, well....
nobodyputsbabyinahorner.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/he-man.jpg
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Your welcome, I'm going to watch this and see if it goes anywhere from here
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Don't worry, I plan on using Ace in something next.
You copy pasted too much, the same paragraph talking about how he got home was repeated a paragraph or two later. D:
Here:
" He had to sit on his bed, this display being too much for him. Carefully enjoying every moment, he flipped the pagePokey was rushing home, he got to the front steps of his home, and nearly took the door off of it's hinges as he entered. He checked over the house for his parents and found that he was again, alone. Pokey rushed up the stairs, went into his room, and locked the door. He didn't want anypony to intrude on him. Pokey let his saddlebags drop to the floor, and began to look for his newly acquired prize. He felt his hooves brush the spine of the magazine, as he lifted it out, and up to his eye level. Staring him right in the face, was a yellow skinned earth pony, with a short orange mane. His more sensual parts just covered by an apron"
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How do I keep missing these. Thanks.
I think my little Brony is quite the writer ;) Keep up the good work. I'll give my full review when the next chapter is out.
Adieu~
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Well thanks
Much love Brony
Too underwhelming... I'd rather see Mr. Cake being all demure, with Pokey being so masculine and assertive while saying that Mr. Cake should be proud of his past and his figure.
Then, after some talking and some time spent together, there's less soft stuff and more serious sex with thick creamy loads being blown inside flanks.
I found. Lot of spelling and grammatical errors in this, but aside from that, good job.
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Thanks
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Glad you enjoyed it, and sorry about Mr.Cake being all loose. It's a headcannon of mine that he's much more relaxed without his wife breathing down his neck.
Well, well, well. It seems my little Brony has done a good job with the writing of the male on male yet again. I was pleased by this story. You are doing great Brony, let's see what else you are capable of
Adieu~
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Thanks again
How does a pony wrap their hooves around anything?
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No idea.
I was kind of hoping for more details. And a lot more buttsecks.
That awkward moment when you masturbate to a nice hot stallion in a Playcolt magazine, only to find out he is watching you. (In my head, that came out very well for I wondered, what if he was just stroking...-blushes-woops, almost went far with the comment).
Anyway, great chapter. Pleasant and beautiful!
I love Pokey.
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Well, thank you very much for the nice comment!
God damn it, son. Don't put multiple characters' dialogue in the same line/paragraph.