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TittySparkles


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It's funny you would pick MST3K. When I helped collaborate with TittySparkles on this story, I did it with an eye for future riffing potential.

Isn't that right, twow443? :trollestia:

Hmmmm... Okay so carrot and rich are freinds... Cups a drunk... So what of :pinkiesmile:? I feel she might play an important role in the narritive, or has she moved to other things?

TittySparkles

i'm going to follow you for the name alone

>>Clonetrooperkev
Wow that was so bad that I loved it :rainbowlaugh:

Am I the only one here who felt really bad for Pumpkin? No?

Well I just hope Carrot gets what's coming to him.

not sure if gusta

That was... Interesting.

uhmmmmmmmm *follows*
:applejackunsure:

2328653 Is that a challenge?

2331859 I don't know about this one. This might be the one that breaks me.

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If you feel confidant enough to riff 120 Days of Blueblood, you ought to be able to knock Family Bonds one out of the park.
:ajsmug:

(Or maybe I just enjoy watching you squirm.) :raritywink:

2332451 I'll have you know, I haven't even created the doc for Blueblood.

Now let's see Pound on Cup! I mean she's just passed out there on the bed, and he's got to be curious.

God, I want Carrot Cake to get some good karmic kicks. If it's anything I hate, it's bastards like him.

As someone who knows a girl who did her dad this isn't what I was expecting... still good.

2328580
I made it halfway before I realized what song it was parodying. Also, Crow's too cool to be removed! FUHAHA!

Great start, I see this story going places. Thumbs up!:heart:

I'm normally not into the incest stories:fluttershyouch:, but...:rainbowderp::twistnerd: this chapter really brought me in... somehow.
I actually liked it. :twilightoops:Oh dear, what's wrong with me?

There will be time for children later," Carrot said reassuringly, "We still have lots of other things to try first."

That sounds ominous... What else could hide inside the twisted mind of Carrot Cake?

Totally yuck. I wouldn't touch Cup Cake with a Level-5 Hazmat suit.

Could you please give that old nag a shower? Mabey, i dont know the difunction will do them all some good. A shock can be sobering i guess:fluttershysad:

Either way, good story telling.

uhhh good story :twilightblush:

An update, yay! :yay:

So, Cup Cake finds out her husband raped her daughter. As revenge, she rapes her own son.

Pshhh... women logic. :trollestia:

Comment posted by NecromancerX69 deleted Apr 30th, 2013

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:pinkiecrazy: Then you haven't read this one yet: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31667/cougar-cake

:pinkiesmile: It change my way of seeing ms cake ("I wouldn't touch Cup Cake with a Level-5 Hazmat suit").

:pinkiecrazy: In a very DIRTY way... Yeah I am going to hell in a hand basket without any regrets!

____(Apologies for deleting the post down of me (made by my self also))___
---(I just don't know what went wrong. Derp)---

Cup Cake looked out at the tree line of the Whitetail woods and stared silently at it, wondering what the future held for her family.

Group Orgy Family bondage love.

i like the twisted sense of humor in this story :pinkiecrazy:

Carrot distanced himself from his wife due to believing his wife cheated on him.
Cup goes into drinking and letting her body go unkempt because of Carrot cold treat of her.
Carrot goes even more distanced because of his wife drinking problems and Cup unkempt body, seeking his daughter to satisfy what his wife doesn't supply.
Cup knowing that Carrot did it with their daughter plans to get his revenge for all of those things above by doing it with their son.
some hilarity ensues and i bet we get a happy ending with a family orgy.

by the way nice touch with the whole "twins are really from Carrot but since he didn't know it was the trigger for the story"

Aww, cute. Hehe two can play at that game. I hope there's a family orgy. Just like in immoral sisters. :heart:

My boner is quite pleased.

Awesome. I guess Carrot was lying to Pumpkin when he said Pound Cake and Cup Cake would also be doing it...

Time to be one of those people who just doesn't like the story...



I have to ask, Author, why you chose this route for your story. I don't get it. There was a brighter story right around the corner, but you kept walking on the dark path.

That, and the lack of proofreading... should look through your work a few more times, or have someone else do it. Chapter 2, there were lots of missing commas (usually after speaking verbs. Commas go in places where the sentence would pause.), missing words, and just general mistakes. Small on their own, but the pile grew pretty big by the end.

... Guess all I could ask is consider writing this with a brighter standpoint. The original premise with the problem marriage was brilliant, if you ask me. You had a chance at a massive story if you chased the Cakes fixing their problems... but right now? Seems like you're taking the easy way out.

And don't get me started on Chapter 2. Fuck Pound for revenge? How the hell is that revenge? The logic in this story is all over the place, smashed off too much alcohol (which, to my knowledge, you got wrong. Have you ever tried Everclear? Y' can't drink it, bub. 194 proof is way too high for human consumption.)

Cup's drinking problem, her weight problem, Carrot's trouble with all the rumors... this is a downward spiral. So yeah, dislike for listed reasons... and likely many more as the story continues.

What REALLY bothers me is how this made Featured, when another story that was much more reasonable got the same amount of screen time... Jesus. Heh, maybe I should write my own blatant clop story, seems pretty easy to hit Featured nowadays with that.

2507444
The bright path as you call it, is something I have no interest in writing. I find bland and sometimes to predictable to write about. Writing about it taking a different turn is something more appealing.

I'm aware of the mistakes and I'm fixing them up, yet there is someone who proof reads it, in fact two. Bronystories and a fellow writer. Stuff gets missed and those comma mistakes tend to pass by all of us.

Again going back to what I said earlier about stories being bland. As for the Everclear thing, that was mainly a little joke I wanted to put into it for the sake of a double take. Besides it's a story about magical pastel colored ponies. For all we know they could shit candy drops.

It also seems a fair bit of your discontent rides with this story being featured for the short time it was. Calling it a blatant clop story is kinda a bit rude to say that. There are stories that are clop stories just for the sake of being clop that get featured

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The bright path as you call it, is something I have no interest in writing. I find bland and sometimes to predictable to write about. Writing about it taking a different turn is something more appealing.

Found that fact kinda jarring when I first read this story, since it seemed logical for them to go, at least, the legal path.

I'm aware of the mistakes and I'm fixing them up, yet there is someone who proof reads it, in fact two. Bronystories and a fellow writer. Stuff gets missed and those comma mistakes tend to pass by all of us.

Fair enough, just the frequency of the mistakes surprised me.

Again going back to what I said earlier about stories being bland. As for the Everclear thing, that was mainly a little joke I wanted to put into it for the sake of a double take. Besides it's a story about magical pastel colored ponies. For all we know they could shit candy drops.

Even for magical pastel colored ponies, you'd figure it'd be kinda hard for them to drink 95% alcohol.

It also seems a fair bit of your discontent rides with this story being featured for the short time it was. Calling it a blatant clop story is kinda a bit rude to say that. There are stories that are clop stories just for the sake of being clop that get featured

And I'm no less angered by those. It's just that I feel like this story had a chance to be a really good story. Just gonna have to see where you take this one, I suppose.

I respect your decision about it being the 'obvious' path, but the logic just didn't make sense to me, and that's where my discontent comes from. As for my comment about Featured, DPV already made that argument.



Sorry if I sounded like a cunt, but I had to get it all off my chest. I wish you luck in your continuation of the story.

Good chapter. The Cakes don't really get all that much love do they. I'd do Cup any day of the week.

Cup Cake smiled and trotted to the bed, pushing a few of the bottles to the side so she didn’t trip over them. Climbing onto the bed and sitting upward, she looked down at her gut and saw a few parts of it folding over each other, showing her she was really putting on the pounds. He frowned and even in her drunken state, his mind started to wonder how it got to that point.

:rainbowhuh: Wait, what? Cup changes her gender three times in that last sentence.

Haven't read the chapter 2 yet, debating on whether or not I should though....

Would there be more chapters? :rainbowderp:

There better be pregnancy at one point, I am just saying.

He knew that there was no chance that Pumpkin Cake was his biological daughter, so this wouldn't technically be incest.

Because pedophilia is fine as long as it's not incest.

I had my doubts, but it seems your stories have very good grammar. Congrats.

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Oh dear. Gentlepony-style kid sex slave club, anyone..?

So, is Filthy the president of ESFLA (the Equestrian Stallion-Foal Love Association)?

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