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Shockponed


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Probably wouldnt have so many dislikes if you warned of content a bit more in the discription. Its actually not bad if you dont mind the subject matter.

Well, I'm kinda curious where this is heading, keep up:pinkiesmile:

dam spike got fucked up (no pun intended)

Not bad so far. I'll fave this so I can keep an eye on it.

Well.....that was fast cute but fast. Poor fluttershy:eeyup:

2209547 Pure awesomeness. You can't handle just how awesome it is.

2207840 Why thank you.

2207602 Yeah, but since when has Discord ever been slow? And I was debating on whether or not to use Fluttershy or Rarity. In the end, I chose Flutters.

2207247 Yeah, I was never good with warnings. Oh well, I was expecting some harsh feedback anyway.

I love Flutters reaction.

Moar!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage: Details please.:twilightblush:

Is this gay clop that is well written?
I'm truly impressed.

2214356 Perks of being gay and getting straight As in English and Writing.

Why do I like this.... :applejackconfused:
...
Write more.

I want to see what Twilight thinks about Discord banginh her little boy.

2241865 Oh don't worry, Her princess rage will likely destroy all of Equestria. Or, y'know, she'll just flare up and eventually accept it. I like the first one though.

Okay, before people get butthurt over OCs, they aren't mine. They're EonSpirit's. I put them in because he has been so nice with helping with the fic(Editing, ideas, etc.).

You should check him out, his fic, Gamer Ponies Play Games is really good.:rainbowlaugh:

Your rushing the story man u need to slowdown add some details

2214356 Scratch the well written and you'd be correct.

2314163 Possibly, However when compared to 75% of gay clop here and 90% elsewhere well written becomes more a statement of opinion than fact.

Could the author take some time off to refine his style? Yes.
Could he slow down a bit to make the story seem more natural?
YES!

Do you have the right to refute another commenters opinion on a story when you have written none of your own?
ABSOLUTELY NOT!

2235324 Don't think of It as weird, just new, and different.

Just think I just read a story where an immortal, millenniums old god of chaos has hot gay sex with a baby dragon that is essentially eight years old and doesn't know how to spell the word imperative.

As I'm sure you can plainly see. Not weird at all.

He just turned off the intercom.
~~~Five minutes earlier~~~
"So Umbra... are you sure you're fine with the wedding arrangements?" Eon said after realizing the company they had was gone.
Umbra smiled at his fiance, "I'm fine with a royal wedding. Mother already signed that peace treaty."
"Okay, if you're sure..."
"OH Ah DisCORD!" Spike's moans roared, blaring from the intercom speakers. "Did you like that, Spikey?"
Umbra giggled, looking over at Eon with watery eyes, "Doesn't that bring back memories?"
"Yep, I remember doing that exact thing the day we met." Eon grinned, before noticing several ponies around them grow scarred looks, and Rainbow Dash, who looked like she was about to break out into laughter.
"Yep... I had a lot of patients that day..."

LOL:rainbowlaugh:

I found it extremely good. And it didn't feel too rushed. But I WANT MOAR. :flutterrage:

I wasn't sure about this pairing but I liked it. :rainbowwild:

I need to find more ship and clop fics with discord. Are you going to continue this? I would love to see this continue, especially with all the things Discord can do to... spice things up :raritywink:

I just had to click the link but nooooo

It's just sonyhing funny

That I will not ruin

"What about Rarity? Was I never really in love with her?"

Well you don't really have any thing to compare to, after all, you haven't had sex with rarity yet.

2/10 not that great a concept unless there's drama and transexism involved.

um....I only saw this in passing, but seemingly this writer has been offline for a long span of time, was he banned or something?

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That or maybe he lost interest in this website/fandom, or possibly dead.

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