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darf
pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here
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You are, quite honestly, the god of clop. I bow before your boner inducing words. Keep up the great writing!
what now?....
Neat, will read
Do y'all hear that sound? That creaking and groaning in the walls, shifting in rhythm like the room is breathing?
That's the sound of someone pushing at the boundaries of what clop dares to be. Striking the foundations. Showing us what we're missing out on if we settle for mere pony sex.
If it doesn't collapse this whole goddamn building I will be extremely disappointed in the fandom.
I have all the confidence in this.
And wow, the piano piece really did turn out good. That piece follows the action of Enharmonic very well.
Wow. First off... you made a very wise choice not having me edit this. I would have been no help.
Damn, man. Just... just damn. This is beautiful. It's artistic, it's raw, it's pretty, it's ugly, it's evolved, it's primal. So many emotions in this one little story. 19,000 words running the gamut of love and related emotions. I can't find the accurate words to describe how amazing this is. In the face of such beautifully arranged words, how can my paltry typings compare? Any words I say would insult the work. This, right here, is the reason why Mature stories should be allowed on Equestria Daily.
And yeah, I'd have stared blankly at this, going, "Duuuuuhhhhhh, pwetty poni have sexi tiems."
Huh, that was interesting. Don't think I've ever seen this pairing before, it's also the first time I've seen the idea of her playing an instrument.
All in all, good work. Writing was solid and the music was nice.
Ohh. Loved this.
I particularly liked Chaos Theory.
(I fully admit several parts of the whole collection are beyond my ability to appreciate, but it's reader failure, not writer failure -- and how often does anyone say that about erotic fiction?)
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Unless that's for Aploosan, which I understand because you've worked with him more. In this instance the favoritism is understood and completely legitimate in nature.Why would I write potentially inflammatory things and then instead of deleting it cross it out?
Because it's funny.
Bah, I digress. These are all really fantastic. My particular favorites (barring the sonnets because I
lazilyworked with you on them(ain't that a stretch or what)) is Applejack's story and the CaraLight (Caramellight? Twilemel? Sparklemel? Carasparkle?) story.With Him just pulls at the heart. It's the sort of introspective narrative that I often try to emulate with varying degrees of success. The amount of repression and unspoken desire makes it such a melancholy little piece, and yet Applejack's loyalty to her family name and reputation stands above her own desires. The focus solely on Applejack's viewpoint makes it very interesting to wonder how Big Mac thinks of her, as he doesn't really give her a whole lot to go on.
I like the Caramel/Twilight one a whole lot because it works. It's very rare to see dialogue-only fics that don't fail to express what's happening clearly or go so out of their way to express what's happening clearly that it feels unnatural and falls apart. It's super-hot and happens to be able to flexibly allow the reader's imagination to flow with the dialogue, guided gently by the words.
And the new story-rotation tech is super-special awesome, it's really neat that you got to force knightly to do it try out this wondrous new technology! Imagine a world where we can have multiple alternative endings without putting them into seperate chapters! It'd be like Choose Your Own Adventure except without personal choice.
Gosh, look at me, I really want your attention quite badly! I think I'll just stop
Nice idea, but they don't seem to connect to well. The end always tries to start the next segment in the middle of that sentence, but often where they begin is a complete different tense, talking about a complete different thing, and the starting sentence doesn't seem to have been molded in any way to follow on from the last one.
But that's expected really. The story was pretty good to make up for it, but your nice little effect didn't quite work.
And featured. That took like no time at all.
Damn, AJ got it bad for Mac.
I'll be honest, the writing in this chapter good and I know the rest will be good too but, aside from one or two pairing's I really don't care for the most of them. So I'll read the Spike and Rarity after this and stop there.
Just thought I'll leave this comment. Didn't feel right to read some of the story, give it the 'thumbs up' and not say why.
Very, very nice. I’m kinda glad I waited until now to read this completed scene.
Beautiful music by Elision, too, so major kudos to them as well.
So much for never color-coding, eh? ;-)
Hmm. Nice effect, though I do think some – actually, most – of the stories cut off too abruptly, without giving enough closure. (When editing, I just thought you hadn’t finished writing them yet.) I’m almost hoping you’ll eventually finish them and release them as standalone stories or something, ’cause some of them definitely deserve it. (Especially the Celestia×Luna one, oh my.)
Still, hawt and nice. And her first sun scene is still really, really sweet.
I'm usually not one for poem's, but this was nice and sweat.
Good Job!
This reminds me a bit of Songs of Solomon, from the Bible.
Wow Pinkie and her stream of consciousness. I got half way through and was thinking man this is a wall of text and then it hit me well duh it is Pinkie thinking in her mind and she likes to say things similar to what would look like a wall of text and I laughed. Also they are a cute couple.
The poem is masterful, tasteful, and exquisite. The only complaint I can launch is that the silver is a bit hard to read, and that a royal purple may have been best for Rarity.
I was going to pass on this story but the way you explained this chapter in the description intrigued mem. So here I am. And wow wow wow. The writing in this chapter poetic to say the least. Seriously, wonderful job. So vivid and entrancing, yet so plain and heartbreakingly despondent. I couldn't take my eyes of my iPad for a second!
GAME TIME.
How much of Pinkie's thoughts can you read out loud without taking a breath?
I absolutely hate incest. So the fact that you took one of the ONLY pairings in the entire fandom that I don't like and somehow made it sexy is just...wow. I have no words. Except...
Eeyup.
Is the title a shout out to that Soderbergh/Antonioni/Wong movie?
This is actually really cool idea. The lack of identification or description means you have to really pay attention to remember who's saying what, and who's doing what.
HEHE. THE MORE I READ THE MORE HAPPIER I GET.
But, in all reality, shipping the Mane 6 as lesbians miiiiiiight not be a good idea.
Very nice. I think I read a bit fast for the music, though.
forbidden love is sweet and tragic, forbidden love that is one sided is just painful.
wat ._.
Gotta say, this is a pretty fascinating experiment writing wise. I'll give a better reply when I've finished all of them. Just thought I'd chime in my 2 bits of the first thing that came to mind with the premise(s).
Hmm. Interesting experiment. Despite the lack of description, I was still able to picture the scene quite well. Amazing how much auditory plays into our imagination ain't it?
Onward to the ramblings of pinkie pies mind! I envision something like Gir at this point. Double points if you work in the phrase "Dance with us into oblivion" or talking wieners Darf!
This was fun to read and listen to. In a way, I could literally hear the voices of Spike and Rarity talking....er, I mean singing, vocalizing, whatever you call it. I do appreciate the color coding symbolizing who was who, and as it went on, the poem went from being two seperate voices to once combined voice....Rarity was able to finish Spike's thought, and Spike was able to finish Rarity's. And also they were thinking the same thought, which was happening as the sonnet advanced. At the end you could easily see that the two are one combined voice, just like a good true couple should. Other shippings/pairings should take some advice from Sparity.
One minor thing, I hope I am looking at it correctly. I know that the white is Rarity, and green is Spike. Am I correct to assume that the lines that were in a bit of a silver tint would be the two of them together?
Ladies and Gentlemen... i presente you... the Julio Cortazar of the clopfics world mister Darf!
At first I was like, Who the hell wrote this? and then I was like, Oh, darf, you crazy crazy author. *calls the asylum* I have a new 'guest' for you guys...
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So this is what was happening during The Social Experiment.
J/K
But for real, That was hot. And I think you should write more like this in this particular style. I have to agree with those that really like the sounds and dialogue with this piece. Without any narrative, you get a vivid image of what's going on--the inside of Twilight's loft, her and Caramel in the througes of passion, the perspiration on their bodies, the dim illumination of Twilight's horn that shows Caramel he's doing it really well. Even the pillow talk was funny and a bit sensual--downright adorkable, considering the two partners involved.
I'll say that this experiment was a success....now to return to watching Variables for more on the CaraLight ship....
Holy shit, that was hot.
I feel like I just finished reading dubstep, that is to say the flow of the text was jarring and difficult to stay focused on. The pinnacle of my unease was 'Kiss', where I could not for the life of me read that block in Pinkie's voice. The stories were perfectly valid expressions of ideas, but presented in a manner that just wasn't my cup of tea.
Going over your published work, I have to say that sometimes it seems like you are a hostile writer, desperate to push some sort of boundaries or notion of validity on the reader. I can't thumbs down the honest attempt, but the only chapter I was able to get into was Chaos Theory, where such antics are in the fine print of the character's contract.
Loved this, both as a chapter and as an experiment. Bravo, sir. The essence of reformed Discord, using his powers for 'good'.
Hey, if you want to readjust the french part I can help. If you want to that is
A good poem, but please change the coloring for Rarity's text. Make it purple, not white or anything. It kind of makes it hard to read.
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Never heard of this pairing before, nor do I ship it, but you made it work. Not bad.
2461174 Fix it, man.