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wow! what a cool idea!
The writing is decent I guess, but the pacing and characterization is fucking egregious. I would recommend getting a proofreader.
Not bad. But are the characters anthro or not?
8605252 Well, one of the tags is 'Anthro' so...
now jsut skip to discord prison escape and have him get some finally
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Could you be a little more specific on the pacing and characterization bits?
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Take for example the castle tour. It mentions all the areas, but does a poor job transitioning from one to another. Also, both princesses don't feel like they actually hold any power or authority. It's fine to charcterize them as playful with Eris but it seems a bit much when applied to other characters
Not bad, but I think that the characters need a more accurate physical description. We know that they're anthro because you mention that they have hands and breasts, but that's it.
There's gotta be some malice in some of the nobles or something.. since Eris is technically discord. There should also be some long lasting antagonist somewhere in the future, just a suggestion. besides that this is a great story, keep it up.
I gotta nitpick at the description, order is the opposite site of chaos
Harmony is the equally balanced state of order and chaos
Cool
i am a huge fan of this work!
Your story is always an entertaining read. I did notice you capitalized the u’s in the dialogue. Was that for emphasis?
Thou art
Thou wilt
Just a couple early nitpicks from an EME-enthusiast.
See above
I’m looking forward to crocodile pony personally.
Liked it. Must have more.
More please
sound like story I read once, with twilight being the daughter of discord back then and was frozen by the princess as well but she was child like 3 or so.
Did...Did Eris just make a reference to Tigger?!
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......Yes.
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That's an amazing pic.
I wonder how history will go with Eris in the mix?
More please.
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This book happened. :P
please! more!
When's the update coming up
Well?
I.want. MORE
More?
Any news?