wow! what a cool idea!

The writing is decent I guess, but the pacing and characterization is fucking egregious. I would recommend getting a proofreader.

Not bad. But are the characters anthro or not?

8605252 Well, one of the tags is 'Anthro' so...

now jsut skip to discord prison escape and have him get some finally

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Could you be a little more specific on the pacing and characterization bits?

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Take for example the castle tour. It mentions all the areas, but does a poor job transitioning from one to another. Also, both princesses don't feel like they actually hold any power or authority. It's fine to charcterize them as playful with Eris but it seems a bit much when applied to other characters

Not bad, but I think that the characters need a more accurate physical description. We know that they're anthro because you mention that they have hands and breasts, but that's it.

There's gotta be some malice in some of the nobles or something.. since Eris is technically discord. There should also be some long lasting antagonist somewhere in the future, just a suggestion. besides that this is a great story, keep it up.

I gotta nitpick at the description, order is the opposite site of chaos
Harmony is the equally balanced state of order and chaos

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This book happened. :P