Discord had a secret.
A secret so super-secrety-ultra-sequecy-secretee-secret-classified-secret secret, that not even the Princesses, not the Elements of Harmony, not even Fluttershy knew of it.
His brother.
Chaos ensues as said sibling pays Equestria a tiny visit, intent on questioning his brother. Nothing will stand in his way. Not the Princesses, not the Elements of Harmony, and certainly not the pony who reformed his brother.
Then again, he is unpredictable, like Discord. There will be explosions, wacky adventures, crazed puns and fourth-wall breakers where the two siblings wreak chaotic havoc across Canterlot and Ponyville.
Oh! Don't forget the Pinkie Pie-level parties and craziness!
Rating and tags will change according to Trinity's preference. Be Warned.
"He really means it--"
Shut up.
Post Season 4 finale.
Anthro ponies.
T for language. "And Violen--"
I said shut up Disarray. Don't make me unleash the Author Pen thingy on you.
Sweet, I look forward to MOAR
Pretty good, not amazing but decent
Wow! I really like your take on Discord! Can't wait to see more!
5006592 Well, it' better than nothing.
What needs improving?
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It's just weak overall, no build up, no distinctive description of Trinity, very little is told about discord and trinity's relationship, Trinity? what does that have to do with chaos? to me it is more related to order.
This is kinda the feel I got : Random stuff happens it isn't discord discord gets ooc and not in a good story way he goes to the princesses and tells him about a brother that has never been mentioned in any lore and has apparently been gone awhile now he shows up and we get a foreboding feeling.
No real story just a list of facts you expect us to roll with. I hate setup but it is a necessary part to a good story.
5009694 now that you say it... yeah...
Hrm... I'll take tha into account. thx for the tip.
Discord may be a little OOC now, because well... I dunno. I prefer him as a prankster, and he will return to being one in the next chapter. Don't forget Disarray too!
Oh boy... This is going to be... Chaotic
5858330 Trust me. When Pinkie Pie get's involved, even the Idiot God himself will tremble...
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