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IRpony


I'm the pony of your dreams... Your hot, sweaty, fitful, Rarity & ice-cream dreams.

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asleep?

Interesting start. Lets see where you go with this one.

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No trust me, this is right:
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Everyone is asleep :rainbowlaugh:. This is not exactly the time or date I would have preferred to post the story, but dem rules is dem rules so I gotta go with it. (Aka it was for the contest and I actually wanted to make it on-time this time, but even so it's incomplete)
Aww hell, hopefully Illusive will like it at least. And also everyone who likes my stuff will get a nice surprise before tomorrow morning! :rainbowkiss:
Expect the next part soon! :raritywink:

Oh fuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-
And now I dislike the Cakes. And Pinkie.
I hope you can deliver on all that drama you're building up, because this looks like it's going to kick ass.:moustache:

I'm willing to wait for my incest if this incredibly corrupt version of Ponyville continues to develop at such a wonderful pace.

is it bad to hope this turns into everyone cheating on everyone
if so i now require a flame resistant hand basket

That scene between Carrot Cake and Pinkie was really sexy! I hope we'll see more in that vein!

Addendum: I wouldn't be surprised if Carrot knew what his wife does on the side. His kids are a big tip-off, after all. Maybe they even find some sort of perverse joy in seducing members of other couples, and then telling each other about that?
Anyhow: Carrot is right, Magnum needs to find himself a toy of his own if he wants to continue playing.

Oh god.... I can see a potential avenue this might take... :pinkiesick:

Well... that was certainly an unexpected turn... and I loved it! :twilightsmile:

This is producing some great drama and I'm wondering just how deep this will all go. Will Cup Cake tell Pearl? Will Magnum keep things going with Cup and if he doesn't how will Cup take being spurned? Will Rarity be enough for Magnum's over-sexed machismo or will his stable grow even further? Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Oh god.
This is going to get MESSY.:facehoof:

Just gonna hit that little favorite button so I can find this later.

Incest and Pinkie/Cake.
You win.

Doesnt seem to fit Pinkies character to do something that could cause misery like cheating with someones husband...but its a clopfic so it doesnt surprise me to much to see a bunch of OOC.:applejackunsure:

Damn, I'm loving this story so far. Hope you keep it up soon...:moustache:

This is glorious. I demand more. :flutterrage:

Wonderfull read. Keep it up. This version of mr cake is baller

A whole cycle of infidelity, isn't it? Magnum cheated on Pearl with Cup Cake, Carrot knows that Cup is cheating on him but don't know who it is (probably does explain Pound and Pumpkin though), Cup knows that Carrot's cheating on her w/Pinkie (and some harlot named Chocolate Chip in the past), but hasn't confessed to Carrot that she's sleeping with Magnum, and now Mrs. Cake's solution is to get Pearl to sleep with some random stallion for the purpose of forgetting Magnum.

Not to mention that now it's showing up that Rarity's loneliness (partly) is starting to have her consider Magnum, her own father. Possible foreshadowing to the incest between Rarity and Magnum, aren't we?


I'm almost waiting for the one stallion that Pearl eventually ruts with turns out to be Macintosh, who turns out to be (surprise, surprise) one of Cup's stallions, as well as Pinkie's coltfriend (they never officially said it, but they know). Or even better, Pinkie has some FWB setup with Rarity.

Let's close the cycle, shall we? The whole setup is all fucked up to begin with, so lets journey further down the rabbit hole.

Too much like real life sometimes. :facehoof:

Ohhh, hey, look at that bit in chapter two, and look at me actually reading the whole long description...

Yeahhh... No, I think I'mma just... go this way now. I don't really actually have a problem with incest, truth be told it's just... Rarity and her Dad? That just sets off some Big Mac in my head.

:eeyup: Nope nope nope nope.

Good on ya, wish you luck, later!

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:rainbowhuh: It's her body shape, duh! :rainbowlaugh:

(Thanks for the assist!)

Comment posted by NopeSplosion deleted Aug 21st, 2014

So will we finally get some dad/daughter in the next chapter? Or will you tease us again?:duck:

3261126 We all know Rarity's a total tease. :raritywink:

Just as things were getting good the story comes to a halt... sigh

Need more of this. Is such a weird cycle I need to read more

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