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Cute, heartwarming, definetly worth reading. I wanted to read something about that bellhop when I first saw him in episode, thanks!
Awwww. A sweetie of a Hoity ship. They DO make a very handsome couple.
246947He/she could've warned us it was m/m
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Oh my, I apologize, I'll add that now.
I am pleased by the amount of dedication the Bronies and Pegasisters put into the M/M idea. Then again, that idea in MLP:FiM M/M is the same taboo idea as F/F in any other show. So it happening is going to happen a little more often and I like that. I am pleased, also, with how well written this story was. It was a little rushed in a sense as a little character development would have been nice, but the story is passable no less. Good job my dear Brony/Pegasister. By the way, nice avatar. Purple always was my favourite. Not just for his color either lol
Adieu~
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Thanks so much, Guess I should put that I'm a boy on my profile.
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Thanks, I think so too.
491349Thank you. Just to warn future people 'n stuff.
491357 It'd be wise to do so. Anyways, I would like to ask you to write a story for all the males who are important and side characters. I'm sure you would do a great job. Unless... You aren't man enough to do it?
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>implying I'm not man enough
>implying I'm not writing something with Pokey Peirce and Mr.Cake right now
Oh u.
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Mr. Cake? Awww, I was hoping it would be Ace. I'm such a stupidly huge fan of "Life among the coat hangers."
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I'll have to check that out, and I absolutely love Ace. Him and his wonderful mustache.
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>Implied to be a person who assumes things
>Implied to not be very much aware how manly another man is
Oh, you silly boy xD
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You should submit things to the M/M Shipping group. We need good, sweet stuff like this.
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I think I might, thanks.
There's a lot of things that a proofreader would catch that bugged me along the story. Things like "The stallion put potter at ease" (where you meant Porter), lots of formatting in passive voice (like saying "Thoughts were rushing through his mind" rather than the simpler "Thoughts rushed through his mind"), missing punctuation, sentance fragments, and so on. I'd edit this through a lot.
But, at the same time, I like the characters and they way that you've done them a lot. It sounds pretty sweet.
And yeah, you should totally add this to groups.
Don't usually read M/M but that was a curious pairing and surprisingly heartwarming.
Good job.
Also nice choice of avatar, the Link campfire segment was one of my favs from the SuperNin10Do.
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Well thanks, and same here. Purple Link is my favorite flamer
D'AAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
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Glad you liked it
Umm.....more pls........
This is a nice, discriptive, one-shot, albeit a bit short.
Constructive criticism: You fell into the classic trap of ending the Fic with the climax, in future try to extend just a little bit more story before ending.
For Great Justice!
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Hey, thanks for the input, appreciate it
A cute concept and full points for going with the m/m ship which sadly gets a lot more flak than it deserves. That said this fic felt way to quick, Porter who has had no experience with males, knows exactly what to do? and who has never met Hoity before knows exactly how to please him made it feel a bit like the guy was a changeling or a mind reader
Either way I have to confess I love the concept of Hoity as a smi aggressive gay pony and you did a lovely job with it.
Good idea, certainly too quick though. Porter warmed up to the whole situation in lightening speeds.
ooooh!
I truly enjoy this.
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And I truly enjoy your drawings.
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Hey thank you, I have another one coming out tomorrow.
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Fabulous, can't wait to see it.