Humans in Equestria. A couple of comedic stories poking fun at HiE tropes.
I do not intent these to be mean-spirited stories. If you are feel insulted about this I apologize.
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Is this the only one you plan on doing? I kinda like the 4th wall breaking.
On an unrelated note, the plural form of "woman" is "women". No biggie.
YOU SIR ARE WINNING 5/5!!!!
Pretty good so far. The only problem is that the grammar is a lower than adequate. Otherwise, nice story. Tracking.
Yeah...that pretty much sums it up. You forgot to turn him into a pony but other than that, yeah...sums it up. Everything I hate about bad HiE stories.
Every HiE story in 600 words.
Okay, maybe not EVERY one, but a damn good percentage.
Not bad. I will say the beginning reminded me of My Little Dashie
None taken. I found this pretty damned funny, considering this does, in fact, sum up a LOT of HiE stories (My own included). Looking forward to more.
There's a considerable amount of grammar mistakes in this chapter. You might want to pre-read your work a few times before you submit it. I do like that introduction however, I've noticed that it closely resembles the descriptions of a lot of HiE-fics being submitted here.
The pineapple. I can't breathe!
I see what you did there...
That was freaking hilarious.
Why didn't Twilight accept his friendship? D=
Oh god. My sides. Keep it up.
Oh god, I read this in Rorschach's voice and now I can't stop laughing!
Equestria lost a real winner there.
Your grammar and spelling as a whole is terrible. Work on it. I'd hate to see an otherwise well-done humor fic go to waste.
I love these stories, their funny and when I get around to writing my own, I now know what tropes to avoid. Thanks TheGreekDollmaker!
The grammar and spelling mistakes get a bit distracting in this chapter (3). Could use some proofreading.
Still funny as hell, though.
"Hey, im suddenly ok witht his"
O_O
"NO, I WILL NOT HAVE SEX WITH HORSE, ESPECCIAL- Hey I’m suddenly OK with this.”
Somehow i feel like that sums up a large amount of HiE stories. It's not always true, but yeah. Can't wait for the next one though, I'll be tracking.
“Don’t you know that after One minute after exposure to Human Soldiers, all ponies become sexually attracted to the Human?” said the same Pink Pony from outside the frame.
That isn't canon, is it?
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What do you mean by canon?
That line is supposed to be fourth wall breaking, a small observation on ponies becoming sexually attracted to humans, in like a day.
You sir are a genius COMMUNAZIS!
This is pure genius
These stories are funny and do exactly what you intended
Though it has been stated that there are a few grammar mistakes, I feel these are minor and could be fixed easily.
I give the story 4.5 pinkies i1200.photobucket.com/albums/bb326/lildevil32/pinkiehappyscore.png
Cheers and hope to see more of your work
You forgot the part where the military dude tells fighitng ponies they've been doing things wrong all along and they instantly change to the new way which works flawlessly. Also, a romance out of freaking nowhere, along with extra guns/equipment one person couldnt possibly have carried getting to equestria.
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...how did you make a half Pinkie?
Dude. Seriously. Clean up the grammar. It's distracting me from your ingenuity.
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Magic *snort *snort*
Hehe that was horrible of me but I couldn't resist. I just ran the image through photoshop and split her in half
Truth.
Justice.
The American Way.
Clearly, the three important values of Life. God damn, i love this.
"dropping a naughty"
Wait. What does this mean?
...Pinkie, what have you been doing with Applejack?!
COMMUNAZIZ
OJSKBDFKJSABFYAVFADSVAYHDF
LET US HELP MONKIES KILL RANDOM PPLS TROLOLOLOLOOO
Ill seriously be waiting for more
"Oops!"
"I forgot to take out the Tracking Device from my Spaceship!"
"Oh Well, no harm done"
And then they killed us
THE END
Surely there are more HIE Tropes you could make fun of.
what is this idek
"The year is Twenty Thousendwhogivesacrap"
ed at that part
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I love these stories.
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Holy shit this was the funniest one so far. I especially loved the name.
lol
Covenant?
yes,lets kill the CommuNaziArabChineseSovietRussianGermanMaoists
Parodies are supposed to be worse than what they are making fun of, not identical to it.
Bra...
That’s just sad but in the same time you could have pretend you don’t know anything about it.
Did you just rewrite the book?
O-well I’m going to read it anyway since it’s a cool idea
Bra.. it’s not a story anymore Oof just random writing
Bro increased the comedy in this one, I actually bursted out laughing twice reading this.