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Midori_Kuroba


I'm an aspiring writer, with far too many ideas for my own good. I write pony fictions for fun, and if others enjoy them, then that's all I could ask for.

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Rainbow Dash and Derpy Hooves have all kinds of misadventures together that nobody knows about! Crazy antics and awkward romance flow together in this goofy story of love, chaos, and maybe some muffins!

After seeing season 2 episode 14, I was immediately inspired to write this story for an old shipping idea I had between Rainbow and Derpy. The Ditzy pony needs someone to look after her, and who better than the loyalist of ponies? So enjoy their wacky and romantic misadventures!

((Fan art for second chapter! http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d4p4ohx ))

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 36 )

ditzy doo, not ditsy doo. Good story, though. :derpytongue2:

:rainbowkiss: I liked it, can't wait to see more to come :D

I just love Derpy's childlike innosence.

This was very enjoyable! :pinkiehappy: Hoping I'll get to see more of this series soon!

My bad on the spelling, I'll edit it ASAP! :derpytongue2:

Also it makes me happy this story is already becoming so well enjoyed, as compared to my other works so far. :rainbowlaugh: I was going for childlike innocence, woot. I look forward to writing more for you all to enjoy! :pinkiehappy:

Story's fun... but why do they keep calling her "Ditzy" if she's now canonically Derpy?

Ditzy and Derpy are both canonical names for her and there are many fans that prefer either or. Some people look at Derpy as a nickname for her, much like the Doctor Whooves series. I hold true to addressing her by both her known names, to prevent petty angry fans pestering me. ^^

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Well done there. Good idea as well. I would enjoy more of this and wonder why this ship hasn't been sailing as much as the others? It's because Ditzy doesn't like being put in boxes silly and she can't watch Dinky from a cruise now can she? *Now dressed as Captain Jack Sparrow.* You've a point there.

Dat cute thumbnail :rainbowkiss:

D'aaaaaaw! This was so cute! Dashie bonding with Derpy and her daughters! Adorable!

His name is Fred.

:duck:I didn't know you could burn water.

197518 Oh for the love of [REDACTED].

Derpy would be a great dungeon master.
(team banana represent!)

Aaaaaannnnnnd the second I read the last scene...
\(o-o)/

This chapter made me happy :rainbowkiss: I even laughed at some point (wich I rarly do). Loving this fic so far :derpytongue2:

Love the series! Definitely one of the more adorable 'ships I've read. And I appreciate the use of both Ditzy and Derpy names, as she has been called by both in the cartoon.

Taking a cue from some other fics I've read, I give this series an overall 5 out of 5 mustaches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

mmmmmmmmmMMMMMMD'AWWWWWWW!!!!! these stories are freaking adorable mate! i like the derpy dash ship stories but none of them are anywhere near as cute as these ones! it's nice to have little short stories of the happy times they share. it's a nice change from the long linear ones. please my friend, i must have mooore! :pinkiehappy:

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I wasn't aware that there was more, let alone long linear ones. :rainbowlaugh: Very interesting indeed. As for short, that's because I don't drag things out with unnecessary details, causing my stories to be fast paced and easy to read. Wonder what that's going to do for me if I ever accomplish writing books. Hmm. :rainbowderp: In any case, I may have a few other stories I'm working on, but I plan on dishing out at least one more piece of this series. Some drama, some love, some screwing with time and space. Let's just say Dr. Whooves and Pinkie are involved. Look forward to it early next month. :rainbowdetermined2:

Oh Applejack, you silly filly. Great chapter, really enjoyed it.:heart:

What if it's a tie? :trollestia:

sonic muffboom :rainbowkiss:
And I'm luurrvving this story!

i like when derpy knows all these smart facts and unloads on the nurse who becomes a dog! it corresponds with the show, too! i couldnt stop laughing! :rainbowlaugh:

the ending with the muffin was cute too!

i loved the part with the signs! that was hilarious!

Derpy bounces up and down and says, “Oh! I know, they find a puzzle that they need to figure out. There’s three buttons with different cloud pictures on them. The clouds are in different shapes though. There’s one that shaped like a dragon, and there’s one that shaped like a pony, and then there’s one that’s shaped like a cloud-“
“But Derpy, what do these symbols have to do with getting into the pyramid?” Derpy shrugs and Rainbow gets to thinking again. She gasps and says, “Daring Do realizes there’s towers facing North South East and West, and they have pictures on them that look similar to the clouds! So starting with the one they were facing behind the puzzle, she goes clockwise with them pressing the buttons in the order they appeared on the towers. Then the floor turns into an elevator, taking them straight down into the heart of the pyramid!”

Sounds a lot like the puzzles on Skyrim, y'know with the Fish, The eagle and the Whale/Dragon

Rainbow seems a bit out of character

1922712 I've seen that scene somewhere before..

Oh right Kung Fu Panda 2 :rainbowlaugh: or was it 1? :rainbowhuh:

Any chance that this fic will be coming back? It has an interesting premise and the first couple of chapters have caught my eye.

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