Dusk Shine is a sorcerer in training, but when his studies reveal an oncoming evil from the stars, his mentor Celestia tasks him with forming a team of Super Heroes to prepare for the oncoming threat. Sadly, Dusk Light has lived a secluded life and doesn't know how to interact with others, let alone lead them! The good news is, he finds five super powered girls that give him a super team like he could only dream of. The bad news, they drive each other insane! Their lives become an action packed thrill ride as they fight countless villains, and try not to go insane living with each other.
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Love the fanart and story concept!
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Woo! First Comment!
Also, thank you! I'm pleased to hear that you love it.
3012868 You're welcome. Although there are a few spelling errors, I like this story altogether. I'll be watching. Have a like and a favorite.
P.S. I don't expect fanart in future chapters, but if you can dish it out, I can take it.
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Yeah, I'm a little impatient when it comes to proof reading.
I'll have a friend go through it later for me. Thanks a million, I'll be sure to bring you more soon. 
And hey, I sure as heck wouldn't mind having more art to put into future chapters. That's for sure.
bi curious you misheard i'm bike furious
Never fail to disappoint!!Can't wait for future chapters! This sounds like it's gonna be fun on the bun!!!!
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Ironic statement considering the stories content.
But yes, I'm looking forward to writing more of this, and it's going to be awesome! 
too... wait for it 5...4...3...2...1...
: AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
to author, I read it, favored it , liked it, and had a dream based on the story on 10-13-13 with a lot of Fluttershy and Slender man mostly Fluttershy trying to control slender man due to the fact she was in a rage 20% of the time , me trying to keep her calm all the time . pinkie was helping me to keep her calm, AJ beating up RD for taking her hat , me trying out some plasma balls and rarity hitting AJ with a stick because AJ was hitting Fluttershy with raritys blade .
Sincerely , Alexis
P.S. Feel free to use my dream in future chapters
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Actually when I take the time to fix this up and write more, a couple of those are indeed gonna be in there. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter so much and it inspired such wonderful dreams.
3433639 you welcome
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I'm loving this
Going to be honest the sexuality is nice, but it feels a little tacked on. You could have easily spread this chapter out and let all the characters breath a bit more naturally. The speed feels a bit jarring with all of them meeting up like this. Spike's and Rainbows power seems the most interesting and Original from my own information and the twists you put into power are very creative. I kind of wonder if that's the major aspect of the story also the Lesbian action is fun but you could have drawn it out and added a bit more comedy to the reveal with Dusk hitting on either of them and then getting the reveal latter. Other then that its out there enough for me to want to keep reading but this is a written story you have all the time in the world to build on things and introduce people no need to force everyone's intro into one chapter will watch and this is all just my opinion but keep it in mind if you want some constructive criticism.
This is pretty good. You should keep it going.