I write MLP fanfics for now to keep my skills sharp; soon I'll be working on a science fiction series of novels.
Derpy Hooves was hired to deliver a present to Fluttershy on her birthday; she ends up getting caught up in the party and finds herself developing feelings for the shy pony. But somepony else has their eye on the prize as well, and they won't let Fluttershy go without a fight.
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I love this please make more!
247622 Done. I only wrote three chapters at first, and didn't plan to finish it. But your comment convinced me to get off my hands and write that last, lovey-dovey chapter. Now to work on my next story, which is completely different- it's a tragedy and will probably make you hate me. D;
That was so much DAAAW that I felt like I was in a dream. Although a few parts seemed a bit rushed, it all fell perfectly into place at the end. Very well done.
So thanks for making such a wonderful story. And thus you have earned this:
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260651 Awesome ending thank you for finishing. I will be sure to read you other fics.
awesome so far, must read the rest, i am growing impatient with my self for just the amount of time it has taken me to type this, not going to make my self suffer, ON TO CHAPTER 2!
just gets better! you are an awesome wrighter, great drama. when she told the story i was like
then i was like
then
then
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Thank you, and everybody else, for your kind words on my first published story. To be honest, some parts were rushed. But I wanted to get this story out and read ASAP. I'm working on making my second story now, which will be much more thorough and fleshed out.
i agree with Dany, but still i love this
i promised my self i wouldn't cry... :*^)
Lol Doctor Strangelove reference.
This was a very well written and fun to read story. Double points for being a Derpy ship! I haven't seen many of those. My only complaint is that everything went a bit faster than I would have liked, but that's just personal preferences. Very well done!
I had to hold back tears. For a 4 chapter story, this actually made me want to cry, which is not really common with me.
Though, to be honest, I did giggle a bit when I read this part: "The child retreated as she heard more private noises coming from the other side".