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My name is Celeste and I am eleven years old. I like sunshine and winter and glitter and cotton candy and fairy tales. I live with my little sister Luna and I am the queen of Equestria. I’m not really the queen right now. I have to wait until I am fifteen years old. Luna and I are princesses and we get to dress up and run around the castle but sometimes I wish I was normal. Right now my uncle Dizzy is the king because my parents are dead.
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i think the fact that you wrote this
like a child would speak
with run on sentences
tangential rambling
irrelevant asides
blah de blah blah
is what makes it so awesome
1924637 Aww thanks. That was the desired effect.
Story accepted!
1924778 Thanks!
Edit: Accepted to what?
To be in my awesome list!
Oh and I think I know what is going to happen with Dizzy.
1924868 Why thank you. It is my highest aspiration to be on awesome lists.
1924875 I'd like to hear your guess.
I think their might be a fight for power when celestia is 15. Just a guess.
1924889 You'll have to wait and see!
I knew Dizzy would betray them I can't wait for this to be updated!
I can't help but feel that Wittle Woona is starting to turn to Nightmare Moon.
Normally I would go after you for the spelling and grammar issues but no I won't, to do so would take away so much from the story. This is Celeste, age 11, story.
1928751 I'm such a grammar nazi, it was almost painful writing this. I actually retyped Luna with proper spelling and grammar just because it was bothering me.
1928782
I can imagine
Cliffhanger?!!?!?
1929795
Looks at Discord "All the fires of hell can't show my fury!"
Looks at Discord "All the fires of hell can't show my fury!"
thats so adorable . its just like how i talled then . all mixed up and crazy! adorable story
1933959 Thank you!
Another short but cool chapter stay awesome my friend!
1935698 What can I say, I'm short and sweet!
1935765 exactly what I was think my good friend!
*sniff sniff* I think I peed myself at that last sentence. Just a little.
1940739 My first thought was that you were laughing... I'm guessing not haha
Bwahahaha I'm here a agin to comment you awesome story and because you update so quickly I can wait!
1940852 You'll have to wait for a while for the next one... but I'm giving out small hints...
1940897
We'll see ,my good friend we will see if I make it!
Yay I found this today (tonight?), and I am glad I did. I loved how the story starts out with very childlike writing (Celeste is only 11) and progresses a little bit every chapter or so. Can't wait for the next chapter!
-Pinkamina Diane Pie
It that is it then why does it still say incomplete? Still well done, and I would like to take you up on your offer for translations.
1966703 It's not over!
Translations: Luna does a lot of cursing. Don't mind her, she's just teenage and angsty.
Me amare mane: I love the morning
Me amare sol : I love the sun
Me amare die : I love the day
Me amare vita : I love life
Ego pro mea mane: I pray to the morning
Et diem faciet : And the day it shall bring
Sit sol esse vera: Something about the sun, I forget
Et imitatores gaudent: It followers rejoice
Postera lux agit hoc nobis: Something about light, sorry.
Luna's song replaces all the "day" words with "night" words, etc.
Regina et Imperatrix: Ruler and Empress
Revera linguam latinam vix cognovi: I only speak a little Latin.
Regina means Queen as well. Google Translate or not, it is a beautiful song.
1966799 Thank you, I wrote it myself.
1966864
You're welcome, you are not the only one to mess around with the translator but you the first I have seen to write a song for it. I am certainly not that creative, I borrow and steal songs to use. Phrases are my thing: Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera (From the Sun and Moon, Providence and Prosperity)
It's weird I have drunken whaler stuck in my head from dishonored creepy song! Anyway, great chapter!
Sadness.
Luna and Celestia are growing apart and Luna... 
Oh wow, this is pretty... grim. You've got to be pretty talented to write something like this.
2034386 Thank you.
2034333 It's totally Luna's fault though, so it's hard to feel bad for her.
2034392
That does not mean
That it is any less sad.
2034435 Well, next update and the side story will be even sadder! Muahahahaha!
2034441
You bastard.
2034475...........................................................This gonn be gewd
Captain: PRINCESS WE HAVE A PROBLEM!
Princess Celestia: What is it?
Captain: let's just say sh$t is about to hit the fan!
Princess Celestia:
2034806 What is this I don't even.
2034959 Exactly!
Me sees chapter. Buck yea!
This is like adawwwable Harry Potter. Because magic and sparklies.
1935765 NOT short-- vertically challenged. Short is now offensive.