• Published 8th Jan 2013
  • 1,532 Views, 81 Comments

Princessy - not plu



My name is Celeste and I am eleven years old. I like sunshine and winter and glitter and cotton candy and fairy tales. I live with my little sister Luna and I am the queen of Equestria.

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Finale

Blood.

Thick and dark and red and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Screaming and light and dark and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Love and hate and fear and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Sadness and anger and confusion and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Words and sounds and shouts and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Nothing and everything and anything and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Memories and wishes and dreams and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Sparkle and shine and glimmer and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Crowds and people and whispers and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Prayers and grief and hope and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Pens and forms and ink and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Tears and water and saline and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Luna and night and moon and blood.

Black as night in the darkness.

Blood.

Author's Note:

And it is finished.

Additional note: There are two sequels to this, Lunae et Nox and Of And Dot, which can be found in that sidebar over to the right. I think you should check those out as well if you liked this one.

Comments ( 9 )

It's still marked as incomplete...

2645270 I was just about to get to that. :facehoof:

2645284 Sorry, I should honestly be sleeping right now rather than nitpicking poetry.

....Nyeeeh! I don't like when things end! Also gosh, what an ending

3932468 Objection!!!!!! How could Discord be related to them if it's established in the comics the Draconiqui (can't spell) are their own speices and not related to alacorns in fact I believe it also says that the spieces hated each other and started a full blown war killing almost all of them (since Celestia, Luna, and Discord apparently lived). Also let us not forget about genes the way I see it is if Discord is their uncle then either their mom or dad would have at least been part Dragconiquis if not intirely meaning that Celestia or Luna would look like a mixed breed and not regular alacorns unless of course the Dragoniquis genes are recessive. I'm also speaking for the shippers when I say that would be bucked up for the Discord×Celestia group and yes I am in that group since I don't like the thought that Discord would be a pedophile. Also I think that Discord looks roughly Celestina's age.

3939835 They're all humans. Like, no magic or anything. Completely human.

3940741 Oh. Okay sorry I usually browse the comments before I read and I sort of got to caught up in something else :facehoof:. But it is a good story :twilightsmile::heart:

THIS.
WAS.
AMAZING!
:heart:
Ilovedeverybit.

It is always
so wondeful
when some
one decides
to write a
story so
unique
and different
like
this
ironically
I can't seem
to find the words
that can describe the feeling
that this brings at the
moment.

:heart:

You did a perfect job of conveying Celeste's thoughts in this story. You deserve my upvote.

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