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Rainbow Dash is called to Canterlot for urgent news, directly from Princess Celestia herself. What awesome things could await Rainbow Dash? Battling baddies? No. The Wonderbolts? No. Dressing up in a Costume? Yes. Aweso-Wait, what?
Credit to Seven81493 for the Nyan Dash idea. Thanks Buddeh!
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You have a misplaced period which prevents this tag closing properly, therefore putting everything after it in italics.
Other than that, I enjoyed the hell out of this.
Awesome!
Wow, I was actually able to read this in each character's voice, which is something I value more than anything, especially if Discord has a major speaking role.
Welp, it had to happen sooner or later.
Oh Q, you troll...I mean uhh...
Oh GODS!!!! Why do the Gods always have to mess with the mortals? I mean I know they get bored as shit but that's just messed up, was laughing hard when reading this though, a few errors though nothing major, you did very well for your first story, really detailed, I liked it, be sure to put it in groups for chances of more views
Discord has discovered Equestria's undoing.
Oh, dear, that ending. Who's the sucker they're going to mess with now?
It was a very good story for your first story on here that I read. I certainly enjoyed it, and I'm glad someone used the idea Seven came up with. That said, I did notice quite a few mistakes. There were a few run-ons and fragments. Also, this:
Whoa, what happened there? Here's how it would appear like:
Totally worth the read, though. Not bust a gut funny, but funny nonetheless. Still, I also thought it was... I don't want to say lacking, but there are quite a few things you could have added on there. I think it would have been even better if you had us in Dash's POV of while she was doing Nyan Cat, or even her reaction upon seeing what has happened and the realization she was pranked. But what you do with your story is fine as it is, believe me, and just because I thought of these doesn't mean you should have done them. I liked it, and you seem to be a good writer.
2599664 Thanks for pointing out that hiccup! I was finishing this up at 4AM last night, I was starting to falling asleep at my computer, I was going to have someone edit, but I just reread is real quick and submitted, but thanks for enjoying my story!
2598947 I fixed that mistake, thanks for pointing it out. Also, I'd like to thank you for enjoying it!
Umm...wat?
2600678 Problem?
2600692
Your story broke my brain.
2600720 Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
Bored much?
2601315 I'll have you know had great time writing this! But it wasn't so much out of boredom as it was getting my creative juices a flowin'.
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I don't know.
2601330 Well, did you like it?
2601395
I honestly don't know yet...
Not the Harlem Shake!!
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. Great Fic!
Hahahahahaha
No gang.... Rainbow style?
Okay. This is great.
You win, just for this
Gizoogle for tha muthafuckin' win, biatch!
Roflmao biatch!
Dis biatch wuz fuckin' funniez
Yeeeees! Freakin' love gizoogle. Always funny to do when you're not busy having a life.
Imagining this in Discord's voice makes me squirt milk out of my nose... you know if I had milk. Or a nose.
I-I-I mean AVADA KEDAVRA!
Oh Gods, it's like a gangster writing for the first time
Love it!
2752439 I think m favorite part had to be this:
And:
Hook, Line, and Sinker.
3159115 There isn't a better way of putting it, eh?
...dafuq did I just read
3306353 Gizoogle
XD Iwas laughing by the end! Funny as he'll This story should be read more just for the laugh xD