"If you write one story, it may be bad; if you write a hundred, you have the odds in your favor." - Edgar Rice Burroughs
More an adventure than a comedy, but when the CMC is involved, you know funny stuff will happen.
Scootaloo is the daughter of Lyra and Bonbon. Except she isn’t really. She’s adopted.
Scootaloo has only just figured this out after Miss Cheerillee’s brief explanation of sexual education.
She and the other crusaders set out on a grand quest to seek out Scootaloo’s mother. Getting into all sorts of scrapes along the way.
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2nd! wait what?
Hey can i be your editor you need one (no offense) and i've been looking for a job
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I'll get those fixed and get back to you.
A combination of me not noticing and spellcheck.
Thanks for letting me know.
p.s. it was a bad attempt at slang.
>>englishwitch
lol pm me when your done or i'll notice if you reply
it's fic like this that makes me enjoy mlp all the more
Haven't read it but I'm favoriting just by the premise.
its way to his face" I think you mean her face?
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Yeah probably.
I'll fix that up. Thanks for pointing it out.
Meh, I think this story is interesting, a different take on the Scoot one this time. A bit under appreciated. Also when Scootaloo went off on that check list it was funny :P so please keep going! 1841085
Faving to read later.
Meow...good so fark
I am liking this little story and wanting more!
Also, Mr. Cake is the new Big Macintosh. 
The only constructive criticism I offer to you are the two points below:
1) Fimfiction.net and other fanfiction websites already have a full legal disclaimer and lots of fancy words in tiny print that protect authors from liability/copyright infringement, so unless you really want to, you don't have to put the fanfiction disclaimer in your story.
2) I caught a few grammar mistakes (spelling looks great though!) while reading. Not sure how invested you are in proper grammar, so I'll just gloss over this a little. I can point out specific examples if you like, if it would be helpful, but one thing I'm seeing is the lack of some necessary commas. Wherever you would take a "pause" while reading or speaking something, there should be a comma. It helps the sentences flow.
Keep going! I'd like to see how this turns out!
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I like putting in my own disclaimer, I've had trouble on other fanfiction sites before for not including one. It's now habit and it's better safe than sorry
I know my grammar isn't perfect, I try but what you read seems to be the best I can do. I find it odd that you say I don't put enough commas in. In the past I've been accused of putting in too many.
First too many, now not enough, I'm sure I'll strike the balance eventually
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Ah, I see your reasoning behind that now. Fair enough.
I'm sure you will! Practice makes us all perfect eventually.
Your writing continues to please. Keep up the good work.
okay work with that, personally it makes more sense for babs to be related to the oranges and be a child of a high class couple but that makes a bit more sense since they never mention them after that one episode anyway.
Funny scene with Scoots in the adult carriage lol... like that kind of humor. Anyway MOAR!
Hooray for exposition!
(Joke) Alt. Title: Who Has Met My Mother?: A CMC Story
...Wait, in your continuity, Scootaloo is the (adopted) daughter of Lyra and Bonbon? And you somehow managed to fit that one fanfic I think was called The Birds And The Bees into this? And this is for everybody? I am... Something.
AND BABS! YES!
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I've never heard of Birds and the bees
I'll have to look it up.
Any similarities to real ponies, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
wow...even people in the "CARING" industry are heartless bastards....huh? i'm bringing my shotgun
I have no doubt that she would cry... hell even Dash would cry if this was her.
2026764 Strictly speaking if she breaks that agreement she'll lose her job, probably get sued and depending on the privacy laws in Equestria (adoption is likely covered by the equivalent of HIPAA), go to prison.
DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGER MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rarrgh, cliffhanger! Good chapter, though-- Love the Manehatten CMC
Lfg
Mlp
What you did there. I see it.
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You're the first one.
At least the first to mention it
I thought I was being too cryptic.
I get the G4MLP part, but what does the FL03 stand for?
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LF is Lauren Faust
And 03 was because there are (currently) three seasons of MLP
2083000 Thank you.
Picture of Rosewing?
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Ah. Thanks.
She could actually work as Scootaloo's mother. Now all you have to do is design the Dad. I'll do that.
Well...this will be awkward.
SOOOO CUTE! MOAR!
That, my dear Scootaloo, is the question I think every adopted child asks themselves at least once. My advice? Don't worry about it. She made her choice; you're the lucky one as you have two mothers (because that has nothing to do with blood) who love you and would do anything for you. That's all that matters.
crap! i need to know! next chapter quick!
WE WILL MEET NEXT TIME CLIFFHANGER MAN!!!!!!!!! MOAR!
I can't wait to see what happens when Scootaloo meets her mother.
Lemme guess...
She's moved.
Well...aside from the obvious, the next question is how Scootaloo's going to get back to Ponyville. She's pretty much stranded there now.
Cute chapter, MOAR!
Yay, Derpy!
I could totally see her as an idiot-savant, or whatever the term is 
Derp ex machina.