After a terrible storm that caused the death of the bearers of the Elements of Harmony, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo must take on the task to recover the 6 Elements of Harmony after Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon stole the original elements and attempt to destroy the elements at their respective Elemental Lighthouses. Based off the video game, Golden Sun. Cover pic was custom photoshop from source photo.
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this is awesome keep it up.
This looks epic! I love the crusaders, they might be my favourite part of the show! I can't wait to read this!
(also please let this get featured XD)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Haha my first fanfic getting featured would be awesome! Glad you like it
insert the Mission Impossible theme here.
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Next chapter is written, just need to edit and maybe make it a bit more detailed
Should be published by 9:00 AM Central tomorrow!
There is a bug on FimFiction, in that if you publish and unpublish a chapter, people will not receive notification that it has updated. So almost no one knows that this story updated.
Ohh dang, well hopefully they'll get a notification after the next chapter is published.
any one who has played Golden sun knows that the masked pony is Babs.
also
They released the PLOT, it's huge!!!
Celestia: It is not that big!
Not your plot, that plot.
“There has to be something wrong. The pegasi would never let a stray storm loose, let along something this big!”
I think it should be alone, but I'm not really sure on that one
Each step Apple Bloom made felt harder and harder. Despite the rain in her eyes and the wind pushing her back, Apple Bloom kept on going, knowing that Babs wouldn’t be safe if Apple Bloom did not come to escort her back to Sweet Apple Acres.
It might be nicer to just say she instead of Applebloom a second time
This is an amazing story!! My definite favourite! It's awesome! Please don't stop writing it! I can't wait to read more, and I think you are wonderful with the language arts!
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Oh haha oops, gonna fix that in just a sec. There's been quite a delay too because school and stuff, but I'm hoping to release the next chapter in a few days, and thanks! I'll be sure to make the rest of it just as good, if not better!
Just a guess, but I'm betting those two ponies are Diamond Tiara and Silverspoon
And thus their journey to save the world has begun. Mr. Popo do you have an last words of encouragement for our heros?
Changed the name a bit to make it 20% cooler
Truly an amazing storyline so far, and I did see the Golden Sun video game that this story is inspired by, and I must say that this is going exactly like the game itself.
Yet, now I wonder who will join the Crusaders on their journey to the Elemental of Magic Lighthouses ?
Truly some allies would assist these heroines in their quest, ?
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale.
Yeah, it's going to start going away from the plot of Golden Sun now and just going to keep the concept. As for the people who join them, you'll just have to wait and see
I hope you enjoyed it!
Nice calm before the storm moment in this chapter.
I cannot wait to see what happens next when the girls set off on their journey.
I love the story and I love Golden Sun so I hope this hits the front page one day.
You seem to be using the present tense where you should be using past tense. Also, try to break up the walls of text in your chapters. Most readers might find it distracting and harder to read. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
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Thanks for the critisicm, I'll keep that in mind as I write this next chapter. I hope you enjoyed it
Cheerilee, you are so hypocritical.
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*le gasp*
I have a strong feeling Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara are going to be the Saturos and Menardi of this story!
Awesome!! This does leave me wondering, who is going to have Alex's role?
Must keep reading!! 
I KNEW IT!!!
And so the journey begins...
Next chapter is going to take a while. It's going to be a fairly long chapter first of all and second of all, tests and school
I love it and I really hope that you're planing on continuing this. By the way it takes a really good story to make me cry and that's what I'm doing right now.
This chapter in a nutshell:
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Great work!!
For future reference, you might want to break up the walls of text. It can discourage some readers and I tend to lose my place sometimes.
Also: At the bottom of the stairs, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo peeked into the kitchen to see a large scarlet colt stirring up a delicious meal of what seemed to be sunflowers and fried hay strips.
Hope that helps a bit.
Can't wait to read more!!
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Fixed and thanks for the tip! I'll be sure to put a few more breaks in between those extremely long paragraphs. It's actually something that I needed to work on for a while now... I would get points taken off essays for that exact reason and it's tough to stop rambling so much when there's that much detail to write, but I'll try my best! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Yet another brony playing SC2: HotS? How many of us are there? Maybe we can hook up for a game or two.
Anyway, getting on topic I can't say that I can pinpoint the CMC's individual Elements other than SB's. Last time I said she was going to be magic, and that is getting more obvious as we go along. Do you have an idea as to which Elements will go to what pony? I think everyone knows SB will be Magic, but what of the others? I think Laughter may be the hardest at this point, considering that we know very few characters that can Pinkie's optimistic views. It'll be interesting to see where you take this, regardless.
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Actually, being good at magic doesn't necessarily guarantee that Sweetie Belle would be the element of magic. You'll see the elements become more obvious in their personality as time goes on and don't forget that there's still more characters to be revealed. Who knows, maybe SB will be magic, maybe not.
About HotS, I'm not online too much because of schoolwork, but if you want, I was a former plat Zerg, now unranked. Name is VietNinja and Character code is 220. Hopefully we can play sometime
It's been a year since your last update. Any plans of continuing?
Shouldn't this have a crossover tag?
So it's been over a year since you updated this. Are you going to continue it at all?
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What happened to this?
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Hello?