This story is a sequel to Secret of a Shy Pegasus
It has been almost a month since Fluttershy told Scootaloo her secret, now they must get used to this new life of theirs. Just what does it mean to be a daughter, to be a mother? What kind of complications will they have to overcome?
Not bad for the first chapter, but some editing could be done here and there. Most importantly I feel like this could use some more details in places, to make it feel more lifelike.
I'll have to see where this goes.
Going good so far
Could we have more please, if that's ok with you I mean, thankyou
More?
KEEP IT UP!
More please!
Very nice, fluffy fic so far. Would be nice to know how it was going to go.
OH please tell me there's going to be more
yea, whe need to know how this gona end