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TheMoreLovingOne


Please don't read my old stories, wow.

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After being left alone like every year, Scootaloo wishes to find a family of her own. Feeling abandoned, she struggles with the thought of telling her friends. What she doesn't know yet is that love is it's own reward and she doesn't have to be alone.

Family-oriented story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 26 )

Reminds me of family.:fluttershysad: can I add it to my group if not just tell me.

3683331 What's your group about?

3683336 It's about any holiday, but I don't have them all.

3683360 Thanks I always loved heart touching stories.

manly tears where present during this one keep on rocking on:pinkiehappy:

TAKE ALL MY DAWWWWWW! the feels.

i love it and TheDevilsKitten can you add more chapters to ths story about Scootaloo growing up with her new family with the tag Silce of Life in it or can you make you another with that stuff in it that i said in this comment

:raritycry: Liquid pride. Such a cute story.

Very cute but very fast coulda used more fleshing out

You still have a "Christmas" in there in place of Hearth's Warming.

Overall a good story, but it was rushed.

Very nice story.

door slammed somewhere below, and they movied right into the room beneath her.

moved
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She ignored the letter being left in her mailbox.

letters
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"There y'are sis! I wanted ta know if Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom could spend the night!"

Scootaloo
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the orang filly said, looking down, trying not to cry.

orange
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"I'm glad I get to hang out with you ponies for Christmas.",

Hearths Warming
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Comment posted by Zerocool7785 deleted Apr 17th, 2016

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So...you don't read any of the amazing shipping stories on this site, then?

This was an awesome story, such feels! I wish it was longer though... But I wish that EVERYTHING good was longer. :raritywink:

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Now you're just being offensive. And stupid.

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Thank you I love to start trouble.

8778242
Oh. So, this is your theme song, then?

8782306Your response makes no sense, but I won't go into a battle of wits with an unarmed person.

"No... I don't think so...", the orang filly said, looking down, trying not to cry. "I think they forgot to pay the heat bill too..."

Okay. So. First things first. This is an obvious sign that she's been abandoned. Why?

The month of December went on, and the snow got heavier with each passing day.

No one forgets to pay the heating bill in the middle of DECEMBER. Sure, in the middle of Summer you could 'forget' to pay the heating bill, but that would be A: An intentionally made decision, and B: Because it was the middle of SUMMER.

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So...how does the troll song being your theme not make sense again?

"There y'are sis! I wanted ta know if Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom could spend the night!" You meant Scootaloo not Apple Bloom.
"I'm glad I get to hang out with you ponies for Christmas." And you mean Hearth's Warming Eve not Christmas.

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