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Jeevesie


Full time writer and unabashed fan of ponies! Need I say more?

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Ponyville is enjoying its biggest cute-ceanera in years; a triple celebration for the Cutie Mark Crusaders. But while the party continues in town, back at Sweet Apple Acres two other members of the Apple clan find themselves turning their thoughts to the past. To ponies who aren't here to share in the joy of this incredible day.

Cover art and inspiration for this story drawn by Storm Blaze! http://stormblaze-pegasus.deviantart.com/ Art used with kind permission. :)

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Very sweet story! :ajsmug:

Sweet and touching. Nicely done.

your story is sobeautifully done and told ! just imply wonderful! you can be proud of it, well done well done!

I'm not gonna cry I'm not....:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::heart::heart::heart:

Silly comment aside. We all know what it's like to lose a family member and how the pain never really fades.

That is pretty much what I had imagined would have happened between those two after that episode.

That...was beautiful! :ajsleepy:

Y'know, I never ever wondered about it before now. There's lots of stories about AJ's parents....

HOW COME THERE'S NO GRAMPA SMITH!?!?

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Go read Sundowner Season by Cherax Destructor. :)

I'm crying... On the inside, of course!
Wonderful story!

I'm mad as hell that I didn't write this first.

Wonderful bit of sweetness.

6544325 Haha, I know how you feel. Months back I actually told some friends of mine a theory about the CMCs getting matching cutie-marks; shields each with a different symbol within them, to show that their talents lie TOGETHER rather than as individuals. I really wish I'd written that as a story prior to this episode. Then I would have had legitmacy to my "CALLED IT!" claims. :P

That was gorgeous. I shed a tear. Just one.






Thank you, Jeeves.

6558890 Nothing wrong with crying on the inside. :3

This story should be more popular!

6565480 I'm happy you think so. Thankee for the kind words. :)

That's the first time now I read a fanfiction about their dead parents. And such a incredibly well-written and touching one! That's an immediate favourite.
This fanfiction is the second most sad fanfiction I ever read. And that kind of sad fanfictions is much more sad than I expected it to be.
Reading this gave me a pretty good impression of how sad it will be once we get an episode about their dead parents. :applecry:

I really needed to cry so thanks AJ is one of my favourite characters and I can relate the most to her and Luna I have never lost a parent before but also in a sense I did I always thought of family members who were older than my real parents as my other parents and well the two people we learned to call aunt and uncle who were not related to us and were older than my parents died of cancer and well my Uncle's funeral was my first funeral and also the last one I went to then I never when's to my Aunt's funeral because even after at least five years I was still in Denial then once they left I was angry then I accepted it in some ways I still hate I never got to say good bye I need to quit typing before I cry again

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