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Lapis-Lazuli and Inky J

Joined January 2013
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Hi! We're Lapis-Lazuli and Inky Jay! We write fanfictions, for great justice.

Stories (14)

  • Apple Family Values
    They say you can’t miss what you’ve never had. And Scootaloo would be inclined to agree with them. Except, she did have all a little filly would want from a home, and she does miss what she lost. Not that anypony would help her get it ba

    29,284 words · 4,005 views · 621 likes · 10 dislikes
  • The Twilight Struggle
    As Twilight Sparkle enters her third year amongst her friends in Ponyville, she finds herself plagued with strange dreams of an unknown power whispering dark secrets to her. What is this voice, and what does it plan for the most faithful student?
    55,728 words · 6,164 views · 542 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Twilight Verbs Article Nouns
    Twilight Sparkle is getting tired of this nonsense in the papers, constantly writing things about her inane day to day activities. So she's going to do something about it...
    7,084 words · 3,715 views · 760 likes · 21 dislikes
  • The Code's Apprentice
    For a thousand years, the Code of Harmony has ruled Equestria, and the Code of Dissonance has sabotaged its works at every turn. Now the war for control over the land will come to a head, and one unicorn's decision may decide the fate of all.
    149,573 words · 6,490 views · 663 likes · 25 dislikes
  • The Code of Harmony
    154,825 words · 3,204 views · 402 likes · 14 dislikes
  • Rise
    31,767 words · 1,925 views · 176 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Who Is Daring Do?
    4,166 words · 1,002 views · 55 likes · 0 dislikes
  • The Cookie Cadet Caper
    9,172 words · 569 views · 77 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Cloudsdale Dash and The Revenge of Dr. Negative
    69,065 words · 1,023 views · 165 likes · 15 dislikes
  • Marks of Harmony
    199,683 words · 2,071 views · 117 likes · 12 dislikes

Blog Posts (85)

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They say you can’t miss what you’ve never had. And Scootaloo would be inclined to agree with them. Except, she did have all a little filly would want from a home, and she does miss what she lost.  Not that anypony would help her get it back.

Would they?

Edited by the incomperable Inky Jay - Go give him some love.

Cover art by Dat Ensayne

First Published
30th Nov 2013
Last Modified
3rd Dec 2013

Comments ( 264 )

#1 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Amazingly well done!

-adds to favorites and select stories folder-

#2 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · 4 · ·

I like this, it's a Scootaorphan fic that's not entirely heartbreaking and it doesn't involve Rainbow Dash finding out. It's Applejack, certainly a fresh take. :ajsmug:

#3 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

>>3557097>>3557083

Thank you both very much!

#4 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·

The originality on this just jumped up at least 10 levels. :scootangel:

#5 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Picturing Rainbow after that conversation is breaking my heart.

Damn it all to hell.

#6 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

I love this!:scootangel:

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#8 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

Got near the end then Home by Phillip Phillips comes on, now the tears won't stop! Bravo!

#9 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

I like it but why is it in big macs stories group?

#10 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 3 · ·

Oh sweet Celestia, it's so beautiful!!! :raritycry::fluttercry: I love it so much!!! Way to go, Scoots Apple!!!

#11 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

I've been searching for a story of this nature since I first got here. The idea of Scootaloo living with Applejack and her family has a natural feel to it, much like the description of the Apple family home itself feels. It's just...

Dude thanks for making this awesome story!

#12 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · 4 ·

I just had a weird thought: If Scootaloo actually falls for either Sweetie Belle or Applebloom does that count as incest despite the fact that they are related through adoption?

#13 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3557909>>3557189>>3557462>>3557690

Stay tuned, everypony! There's more to come. :pinkiehappy:

#14 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

>>3557189 I know right. Poor Dashie, she can be a sort of sister to Scoots but can't help her any more than that. She must feel awful.:raritydespair:

#15 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

>>3558024

No, would be just like in-laws.

#16 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Yeah, very good. Im liking this idea :twilightsmile:

#17 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Really enjoying this so far!  It's an interesting change of pace from most of the fics pertaining to Scootaloo's home or lack thereof, and I'm curious to see what the dynamics between Scoots and the Apples are going to be like.  The fact that she's a thief is also intriguing to me; I've never read a fic operating on that presumption before, though I'd hardly deny that it makes a certain kind of a sense.

Other than that: I thought everyone was really well-written, with plenty of feels to go about and many more plainly looming on the horizon.  Definitely looking forward to the next chapters!  :scootangel:

#18 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

This. Is. Absolutely. BRILLIANT!!! :twilightsmile:

#19 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3558024

That really depends on the country we're talking about and the formulation of the law.

In some countries it's still formulated because of religious bias or explained by the genetical problems that can occur with the offsprings. Then it's mostly just genetical relatives. However both explanations can't hold up human rights legislation, since both can't be used as a legitimate reason to restrict the freedom of an individual. After all, people with genetic disorders are also still allowed to reproduce.

In other countries the ban of incest is explained by moral standards of the society and the protection of the family unit (still a religious influence). Here the ban of incest it's mostly explained with that incestuous relationships are a huge strain on the other family members and therefore split up the family. This devalues the importance of families in the country and will lower overall morality of the society. Also bullshit if you ask me, but no even the European Court of Justice hast the guts to at least look at the matter despite open cases. Anyway. With this explanation it doesn't matter if adopted or not, it's forbidden.

#20 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

I'm gonna stick around for this story. :eeyup:

#21 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 2 · 2 ·

those are some small fucking heads

#22 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

How do you scrape off a bruise? I mean, you can scrape off scabs or bandaids or your skin. But since a bruise is basically blood that has pooled under the skin, I don't think you can scrape out a bruise without just cutting a huge gash into your skin.

#23 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3557465

Maybe he plays an important role later on?

#24 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

Wow, this is an extremely well done story. I'm really enjoying this!:pinkiehappy:

#25 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 3 · ·

"Welcome home, Scootaloo Apple."

Ok i genuinely got misty eyes there.

#26 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3558024

As they aren't related it's totally okay.

#27 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

I really like it. I don't another way to put.

#28 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · 2 · 11 ·

>>3557347 .....superman?

#29 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · 13 ·

>>3558905 no. This is Barack Obama.

#30 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

>>3558550

Think of bruises in terms of apples instead of skin. :raritywink:

#31 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3558942

AH, that makes much more sense.

#32 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

This story is so awesome.

#35 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

Man, this is so sad I told myself I wasn't going to cry :raritydespair: I can't do it! :raritycry: This story is just so sad! Bravo good sir, Bravo :raritydespair:

#36 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · 3 · ·

awesome DT  finaly got wut she deserved

#37 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

all of my yes

#38 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3559874>>3560190>>3560190>>3560300

Keep signal boosting guys! Keep the hits rolling in!

And thanks for commenting! :D

#39 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3560284 Yup. She said things no filly at her age should be saying, and she crossed the line. :trixieshiftleft:

#40 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3560305 BRING OUT THE CARPET BOMBS

#41 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

YES! YEEEEEEEES!

IT'S ABOUT TIME!

#43 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

Well damn. Things are definitely heating up now.

#44 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

“So you like living on a mud-filled, yucky farm with stupid earth ponies.

Did she forget she's an earth pony as well?

Plus Big Mac is the best brother ever, sorry Shining but he's got you beat.

#45 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

>>3560499 No one has ever accused Diamond Tiara of excessive self awareness.

#46 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · 5 · ·

Diamond Tiara is channeling her inner Draco Malfoy I see. :O

#47 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · 2 · 1 ·

I think that people tend to go a bit overboard with Diamond's evilness sometimes. But from what we've seen so far, she seems far from stupid, so I can't see her making those kind of remarks in the middle of a classroom.

Nevertheless, still curious where you will go next with this.

#48 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

awesome

#49 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

I've read a lot of scootadoption stories in my time on FIMfiction. This is in the top five, if not the best one, I've read.

#50 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3560721>>3560949

Comments like this make all the writing worthwhile. :)

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