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englishwitch


"If you write one story, it may be bad; if you write a hundred, you have the odds in your favor." - Edgar Rice Burroughs

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Ponyville before Pinkie was a very different place.
Teenage Pinkie Pie has left the rock farm and her little community a much happier place since she discovered her Cutie Mark. Now she had her eyes set on places new, to bring more fun to ponies that need parties.

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For some reason, it fulfils a headcannon I didn't know I had that Blinkie can't talk. Don't know why, it just fits. This is a lovely story and I can't wait to read more!

This is interesting. I'd always wondered what PV would be like without Pinkie. By the looks of the season 3 finale, it's like they're almost dependent on Pinkie for their happiness.

That's not healthy for anypony. I hope this gets addressed at least some point.

Looks good.:pinkiesmile: I'm faving this.:pinkiehappy:

Also, just curious but, do you think that Pinkie is the youngest of the Main 6 and that even in the present she is technically still a teenaged minor?

I'm liking this story. Seeing the interaction between the cast before the start of the show, very interesting. There also needs to be more stories about Pinkie and her family. The ones that I have read are always sad or abusive.

Actually there really aren't THAT many differences between Octy and Pinkie. Octy could be an older Inky technically and I could see her hiding her background.

And yes Mr and Ms Cake -- you have no idea what you have gotten yourself into.

Me likey, especially Inkie's new identity and Blinkie's handicap. Good stuff! :pinkiehappy:

Keep going! This is a good start to an amazing story :pinkiehappy:

And your style is easy to read, so yup! :twilightsmile:

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They actually have different names, one of them is called Limestone and the other is Marble I think, according to the official name website thing I found before

Odd, I thought Lyra lived in Canterlot at first.

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I like to think she just visits so she can read books on humans in the Canterlot Library. Which is how she knows Twilight.

I almost forgot about this story. Nice to see it updated! And wow, Ponyville before Pinkie certainly is a... different place.

3575063 The PAC-Man fan nicknames are too ingrained.

If she's only fourteen, then doesn't she have to go to school? Poor Derpy, she didn't deserve that. But I'll be Pinkie just didn't know. So no Maud, Limestone or Marble in this story? Guessing this was before Pinkie's real family came to view...understandable. You have my attention, be nice to see Pinkie as she is but it would also be nice to be a bit more serious as she's in a new place she does not know yet. I'll be watching.

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Before Pinkies family were named and fleshed out in the show. It was Before alicorn twilight when I started writing this. I had fandom canon to go on only so I built from that

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Ahh, alright. So you have quite some things to change then :rainbowlaugh: Personally I like thinking that Octavia is Pinkie Pie's cousin so if you want such a head canon could be use, I like this story either way so can't wait for me, even more when she meets the other girls and Gummy.

It's a shame this fanfic ended. This had such great character for Pinkie making her both uplifting yet a bit awkward. Some cool world building as well. This feels very mature. And I like how the characters around Pinkie don't just accept her willy nilly.

Even if you spent a whole chapter on the Rock Farm that I'd a cool thing to do!

I still want to know though what is the reason for you changing the Sugarcube Corner since you said there was a story reason for the change?

Either way this was a great fiction that should have gotten more notereity. I hope you are doing well you English Witch! An awesome fic indeed!:pinkiehappy:

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