Scootaloo is all alone. Until Twilight takes her home and teaches her the magic of flight. Will Scootaloo finally have a mother? One can only hope that after being an orphan for so long, this little filly can find a home.
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You told us the whole fucking thing in the description.
1792107 He did the skimming for you because he knew you were coming. How nice.
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Nice first chapter, short, sweet, and to the point.
Short and sweet but far far too quick.
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Don't worry, there will be more
Sorry that is not what I meant, I mean you rushed details. And skipped important aspects, for example in real life or in the show Twilight would be flipping out over the fact that Scoot has no real home.
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I gave you your skimming, but that's not all that'll happen, I can assure you
Though I did put a bit too much in there, didn't I
1794500 I'd abbreviate it to not let us know that Twilight was killed.
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That probably would have been best, but oh well. What's done is done, and I can learn from that in my next fanfic
1794523 As long as you learn.
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Ah, I see. I wrote this in a hurry late last night
I'll look over it and add some more details
Hmmmm... don't let Twilight know of Scoots' orphan status yet... also, the drama can be extended... one chapter could fit in with Twilight taking Scoots in and setting a bed for her... you get the idea (PM if you need some other ideas)
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Thanks a ton for the ideas ^-^
That almost brought a tear to my eye
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Really? That actually means quite a lot to me ^-^
1797062 your welcome
Daawwww
Argh someone call 911 my heart just gave out...
I won't lie I love Scoots x Rainbow big sis/mom stories but seeing someone else is refreshing.
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I love the Scoots x Rainbow thing too, but this idea came to me one night and I thought it might be fun to write, I so far am not disappointed. I'm glad you like it ^-^
1801816 I won't lie someone should make a group just about the Scoots/Somepony stories. I mean like 90% are rainbow there are a few thats others. Like this one and Scootamom. I lie seeing scoot having a nice caring family.
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I agree, that's a great idea for a group! I hope someone makes it!
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Thanks a ton!
Nice to find another Scootalove story out here, and Twilight adopting her? That is something I don't think I have seen before, it's always RD (for obvious reasons) and few with Fluttershy and Cheerilee, one with either of the Royal Sisters. As for a Group, there is one Scootalove group but it is for Scootaloo and RD fics. Starting a group isn't hard, and hell I'll join.
Nice story, this chapter felt a lot more detailed than the prior chapters. Needs a proof read, I spotted a few mistakes in it, but otherwise it's great!
She used magic to heal her cuts, for the most part, it really only accelerated the healing process.
Seems the word "only" is unnecessary.
She herself tucked all of her hooves under her and tried to get some sleep, resting her head in front of her, she looked much like a sleeping dog.
Seems worded a bit weirdly, could do with a revision.
That was not an appealing though, especially not to anypony below her
I imagine that should be thought, you just missed a T on the end.
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Thanks, I'll go change those now
Good hope to see more.
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Writing the next chapter as we speak, my friend ^-^
Stopped reading riiiiight there.
It's actually very easy to fall asleep in a snow drift when you're sleepy. That's how you DIE!
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Touche. It was more of a metaphor, but a very unobvious one.
This is fantastic fic, very heart warming.
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I'm glad you think so ^-^
D'awww. Dat ending
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The D'awwwww is reaching critical mass, abort! abort!
I like this story so so much. I just wish it would come out faster.... I really sshould stop saying that when I should put out my own story quicker to.
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Trust me, I told myself I would update every day, but with the holiday season, and with my dad not having internet, I couldn't update for quite some time there. Hopefully I can start getting out chapters every day that I have internet connection ^-^
I spent 5 minutes looking for something to exclaim how happy I am at that statement Coudlnt' find anything to say how muchYAY I have at that.
this made me drop one tear but while i was reading past sins i creid until i ran out of tears.
The story is good, it's moving a little faster than it needs to. Try to flesh things out a bit more and slow the pace down but otherwise I am enjoying it and I will look forward to updates.
i wonder how Scoots is gonna take it when Twilight forbids her to see Rainbow dash (just seems like something twilight would do after that fight
)
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Maybe she will be ok with it, since Rainbow doesn't give her the time of day...
I really wanna see 2 things happen:
- Rainbow and Twilight really having a harsh verbal fight and Scootaloo hears Rainbow calling her harsh names and she flies off crying
- Twilight moments with Scootaloo (her daughter and the attention she needs... and her calling Twilight "Mom" and saying "I love you".... d'aww factors)
1856162 seems like thats where it's going....especially after the dream scoot had. it'll still be a sad part for scoot
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heres too lighten the mood
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It is moving really fast, but I'm really trying to slow myself down. The pace should get better pretty soon, well at least I hope it does
Good chapter... the only thing that is bugging me is Rainbow, I honestly don't think she would act like that.
excellent story so far! just slow down a little more, i know your trying and doing a great job at it!
cant wait to read more! oh and rainbow is a bit off 
but that may be because she was caught off guard! twilight saying that she is her daughter so soon was a surprise but its still a great story so far! now lets see where this goes! lol fiery twilight is best twilight yet you never see it anymore...
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I made her more of a jerk in her sort of "behind the scenes" mode. The side of her that we never see.
oh i forgot to ask but does this really need a Sad tag because its not really all that sad... yet... and if something does happen forget i said anything lol