On Scootaloo's 9Th birthday and after another failed adoption, she starts to experience a real life nightmare. Why is everything turning so nightmarish? Where is Suger Snap? And most importantly, what does this have to do with Scootaloo? She sets out to find answers and along the way she faces her true fears and ultimately, uncover who she really is.
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A few days ago I had a whether emotional dream involving Scootaloo, and I just wanted to make a story where after all of her hardships, at the end she'll find happiness. As to why I decided to make this the way it is, I don't know. At any rate hope you enjoy this ride and join Scootaloo on her journey. Also thanks to Hydra for editing and for his help.
Also image is by http://mcsadat.deviantart.com/ thanks for letting me use it! ^^
FIRST!
Well, it started out nice.... but then i threw up.
Twist Nerd.
I would suggest adding a gore tag, for the younlings.
Aside from a few grammatical mistakes, I thought this fic was worded well, and portrays a nice story.
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Hmmm... That was an interesting ending. I'll have to see what comes next *Tracked*
>>Sanity
I did added a gore tag.
1670516 It seems they enjoy our madness
"Indeed. More is available if needed... I think you mean add."
that was random
I'm really interested to see where this goes, nice chapter!
Creepy....
Interesting story, tracking this to see where it goes!
1671247 WHAT THE HELL
....The way you described the plot synopsis and the word "Silent" in the title STRONGLY REMINDS ME of a certain horror series.
>>Mr Pones
If it's the series I'm thinking of, it's suppose to. XD
Holy guacamole.
I'm gonna need some chips.
2093918
Are those your reactions to the diffrent parts of the latest chapter...?
2112543yes
1835149
So when is the next chapter going to be posted?
So, uh, where you been? Also, you should divide scenes with the hr code.
5292918
I had no idea what the hr thing was suppose to be, I honestly thought they were used as a reminder of where editing stopped at. I been deleting them when uploading haven't I? It just seems like a bad idea to have "
" there it to me seems like a editing thing left over should use ".....hours later...." or something but just me, so yeah I had no idea what the [hr even was meant for. XD I just use "meanwhile" or "sometime later" not the hr icons for time passing so guess was failed to tell me what those were or even remind me what they were.
I been busy off playing games and even started a LP channel, and started writing my first book hopefully you'll see how I improved in terms of writing with the next chapter.
EDIT:...................OH they add lines to the stories here! Yep had no idea they did that. XD I usually add the lines myself tho so really had no idea of the [ and ] effect...oops. XD
5308355 the tag is meant to cleanly seperate scenes. It's not required, but looks nicer. Another cool method is to tag an icon representing a character (like a cutie mark) and displsying that in the center between each scene change as a tiny icon. This can signify, okay the scene is changing and okay it's from that charcters perspective.
5308426, Coud you give an example of how that is done. I would be quite interested in using somethng like that later on.
5313247 You simply type in [ and right next to the [ you type an 'h' then an 'r' and then close it up with ] Then when you are done editing a story the site will take that and place a clean line down the middle of your story from left to right.
As for the cutie mark example (the first time I saw this done was a Dark Souls crossover, whe nit was time for the OC human scenes they showed a helmet from darksouls as a tiny icon, when it was Twilight's turn they showed her cutie mark)
Above each scene instead of using the hr tag, you could take a small icon, like say Pinkie Pie's cutie mark and place it inside use the 'insert image' button and once it's loaded, use the center align tool.
The following story should help explain: Grossly Incandescent
5313360
Thanks for the tip, Thankfully, I was already aware of the :
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['hr']
More please.
"expect chapters to be uploaded faster." Yet it's been almost 6 years?
uh...nani?
I do enjoy this story, even its a little creepy