Note de la Mort

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This story is a sequel to Chant du Cygne

Sequel to Chant du Cygne.

(Scootaloo has been aged up to Rainbow's age )
Scootaloo just found Rainbow Dash's hiding spot in the dark sewers, what will happen between the two sisters?

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KnightSpiritWolf

KnightSpiritWolf #1 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

WOW, that was really good!

YB #2 · Feb 15th, 2014 · · ·

Bravo.
You handled the situation extremely well.
Madness, horror, honor and regret, all of these you pictured successfully.
The writing itself is a bit clumsy sometimes though, sometimes you use superfluous expressions. That's the only thing that prevents me from faving it.

Consider that you wrote a very, very fine piece of art.

Cyrano

Cyrano #3 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 3 · ·

I think I liked the first one more, wondering why they were fighting and what lead to Rainbow getting stabbed was interesting. That said, I enjoyed this one as well, though I didn't like how Scootaloo had two katanas. For some reason that kind of threw me out of the story whenever they were mentioned, but other than that it was very well written.

MidnightWalker55