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MLP: FiM
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Scootaloo just found Rainbow Dash's hiding spot in the dark sewers, what will happen between the two sisters?
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Rainbow Dash
Scootaloo
CrystalHeart · 3.6k words · 54 6 · 4.2k views

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Rainbow Dash is injured and running for her life, or maybe, she's running for another reason...

Dramatic reading from TheLostNarrator can be found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnP_f5y2pu8

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ChasingThePurpleDragon

ChasingThePurpleDragon #1 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · ·

... I don't get it

Cyrano

Cyrano #2 · Feb 14th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Eh, I liked it.

MidnightWalker55

MidnightWalker55 #3 · Feb 14th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Love it. Make a scootaloo going crazy prequel please.

SolongStarbird

SolongStarbird #4 · Feb 14th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Such sensory brilliance!
My throat felt funny the whole way through and at one point I even covered my nose to avoid the smell of sewage and blood.
Bravo!
3942573 I agree.

SolongStarbird

SolongStarbird #5 · Feb 14th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Oh, and a brilliant title.
I looked up it's meaning.

YB #6 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Nice.
The writing itself could be improved, you use too many useless words sometimes ("every nerve ending she had in her body lit up in agony" being the best example) and I think there was one or two grammar issues somewhere in the beginning
But the narration and the pacing are very good, once you get into the story for good, you don't want to leave until the end

Here, have an upvote. You deserved it well.

Tyler The Fighter

Tyler The Fighter #7 · May 23rd, 2014 · · ·

One of my favourites.

Cody Da Brony

Cody Da Brony #8 · Jun 6th, 2014 · · ·

No.

NeonShadow

NeonShadow #9 · Jun 19th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Wow......This was amazing! I'll take a tissue

fredsite

fredsite #10 · Aug 9th, 2014 · · ·

Wow.
I accidentally ruined the end of the story and the huge shocking reveal by scrolling down too far and letting my eyes wander. But still...
Wow...

Nattalie Simmons

Nattalie Simmons #11 · Oct 2nd, 2014 · · ·

great story
but why did scootaloo do it????
i need to know

Autum Breeze

Autum Breeze #12 · Mar 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

3942255 i agree.

I've listened to lost's reading of this, but i still don't understand. How exactly is scootaloo her killer? What the heck happened?

rogueunicorn

rogueunicorn #13 · Apr 11th, 2015 · · ·

But...but.. Why would Scootaloo do this? You have to write a prequel.

Onyx Heart

Onyx Heart #14 · May 13th, 2015 · 2 · ·

As much as Scoots was obsessing over Rainbow Dash. Maybe the obsession went so far into "If I can't have you. No one can have you." levels. Yes I think Scoots finally went into stalker levels of obsession.

Psycho Spartan