Paradigm Shine
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pona lisa
damn it my dirty thought
Great story. Here's a potato on the house.
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*Takes the potato and returns brohoof.* Thank you!
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*noms* Thanks!
Wow I was kinda expecting a dexter moment... But then the scarf and I thought flutterbat
3725759 lol same here
3730192 I always give the best potatoes, and they take a whole ton of TLC that sometimes I go to the hospital because I used up so much of it
. So guess what my face would look like if you didn't eat it. (hint:
) And my brohoofs are the best around so you should cherish it! 
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*noms on potato in fear*
*brohoofs!*
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*glares intensly as you nom it*
Very nice story!
However, I kind of wish it wasn't Rarity who was supposal killed at the end of the story. Seriously.
But amazing story otherwise! You're first story was AMAZING, and this one didn't disappoint!
Not what I was expecting, great story.
3922374 Thanks so much! And I know, Rarity is my favorite of the Mane 6, but I just had to end it on a dark note...but that's the beauty of fanfiction I guess - none of it's canon!
3927000 Thank you! I'm glad I surprised you.
I don't get it....
"You have just hear X Minus 1. Tonight's story was 'Crimson' by Paradigm Shine."
That ending was just like many of the endings that old Sci Fi radio shows had.
I love how you let the reader know what is going on gradually and slowly in your stories. Amazingly well written, I love it.
*reads first coulple paragraphs*
I'm confused
*reads to the middle*
Ohhh now i get it, and i'm getting excited
*reads the rest* excuse me, I need to write a review to this AWESOME STORY
chilling. Not to mention i feel bad for sweetie. She just lost her sister
The 'dear's and and 'darling's were painfully shallow and forced, but aside from that this was pretty neat!
I read this a while ago and I never commented before, but this is a brilliant story.
Cool bro.
Part 2?
Dammit Rarity! You were SO close!
Your doomed.
I know this story was written years ago, but it is always one of my favorites- so I couldn't help myself
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyoRmKgTLYQ
Are you some kind of fucking commie?
next story: rainbow dash gets infected and causes chaos.