Pinkie Pie is having trouble remembering her childhood, but thanks to Twilight's memory spell she soon starts to remember, and remembers why she forgotten them. Now with her painful memories restored and a alter ego she is forced to keep her past a secret and follow her darkest desires just to keep them at bay, but it might come at a high price....her closest friend Twilight.
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Quick notice this IS a remake, the original version will remain at my DA so if you wanna read it just message me VIA a note, reply faster. This story was inspired by a song made by TarbyRocks, he DID give me permission when I first wrote this, here's a link to his song if your interested. This was also originally written with MrE380.
Also I'm rewriting/editing this to fix all the errors, plotholes, and just make it a better story. I will do this to Alicorncation later on but for now, enjoy. ALSO gore as there will be blood and the like, you've been warned. XD Also the title image is by shadesoflove from DA, and he gave me permission to use it.
Can't wait to read more!
Where have I seen that cover picture before? Hmm
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DA probably, OOPS I forgot to add a credit for him! XD He said too so better add that.
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Wait, he wanted credit? Crap.
I originally meant for that comment to be sarcastic, because my story has the same cover image. Now I need to message him apologizing, and then I'll need to give him credit. Do you mind throwing me a link to his DA page? I have no idea where to find him.
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I added a link up above just use that.
My two personal favorite Pinkamena Diane Pie pics
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I LOVE the second one!
2174714 Yeah. I have it as my desktop picture for that reason. It's awesome. Credit goes to whoever drew that.
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OK. XD So liked the story so far?
2177764 Faved and following. I love the idea of Pinkamena Diane Pie.
Keep up the good work! 
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Do you mean the Pinkamena I made? Or just in general?
2179517 In general. The version in my mind is more down to earth and less random than Pinkie Pie. I suppose the trauma that caused her to go crazy also made her more aware of the hardships of life, and if you have ever felt depressed, you'd know that you think things in a more analytical and serious manner. That's my interpretation of Pinkamena.
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Sounds kinda nice.
HOLY HORSE APPLES!
SHE'S OUT! EVERYPONY! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES, PINKAMENA'S GOING TO KILL US! *runs away screaming* GOOD STORY!
Yay! Pinkamena is my best friend!
By the way...
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.
Shadow and Blue... You've been playing Sonic, eh?
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My friend MrE380 (who I credited Shadow too) credited them their his OCs, say thatt o him not me.
2765510 lol ok.
Okay first off, you might want to seperate the author's note from the rest of the chapter with something. It's kinda jarring.
Second, I'm seeing a few grammatical errors like tense shifts (like 'looks' instead of 'looked' in a past-tense
) and missing commas. If I were you I'd go over the fic with a fine-toothed comb. Spellcheck don't catch stuff like that.
Other than that I applaud this kind of rewrite, and I can't wait to read the rest of this fic, seeing as I enjoyed the original
EDIT: After reading the fic, I noticed quite more than just the few grammatical mistakes I saw with a glance-over, and I have a huge compulsion to go over the fic with a red pen...
4305312 Maybe this'll be fixed later whenever I upload again, been writing with different stories.