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  • 2w, 4d
    I Was In A Panel At Bronycon

    I participated in the Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction panel and it was finally posted to Youtube. It's below, or you can use the link here.


    I'm the dude on the left, the one in the hat with the deadpan voice.

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    New Button Mash Fic

    While it may not be the one that I've been working on for a year, I have released a fic to go with the silly Button -ash fics that Obs suggested a while back. It is late, and while it probably won't get as much views as SKIRTS, I had fun writing it in one night.

    I am probably gonna write during NaNo, maybe try to hit that 50k. With a job and other stuff going on though, no promises. Maybe we'll see some old fics come back, or new fics come to light. Who knows.

    Tagged The Sticky Showdown cause I think those who read that story will like this new one. It will appear once it's approved!

    1 comments · 28 views
  • 5w, 5d
    Apples To The Core is up!

    And the story is up and running! Those of you who enjoyed Dash's New Mom would probably get a kick out of this. Im off to work. Enjoy and any constructice criticism or comment will be read on my break. Have a good day <3

    Edit: link is right here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/158632/apples-to-the-core

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  • 5w, 6d
    New Sadfic Story Releasing Today

    Thank you everyone for promoting the success of The Sticky Showdown. It was in the featured box for 5 whole days, and that's an impressive length of time. Around the same time that I wrote Sticky Showdown, I also wrote another fic. It's called Apples to the Core, and it's about the "Pinkie Apple Pie" episode, or at least, what could happen after it if both Pinkie and Applejack were still dating. I'm linking Sticky Showdown because it's still a shipping story, in a sense. The first chapter won't feel like it, but the second and possibly third chapter will.

    It is a sadfic, but I have a happy ending planned. Thank you to anyone who bothers to read it. Your responses are what keeps me writing. What a surprise, writers who write remotely good sadfics need acceptance. WHO KNEW.

    No but srsly I love you all.

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Rainbow Dash's dad, Blue Streak, has been lonely and sad ever since Firefly passed away. Rainbow has tried her best to cheer him up, but to no avail. On her latest visit, she finds out that her dad has been seeing someone and is now happier than ever. She couldn't be happier for him, until she found out who it was.

Editing and idea provided by: Bronystories.

Writing (mostly) done by me. Special thanks to him for being awesome.

First Published
16th Apr 2013
Last Modified
15th Oct 2013
#1 · 83w, 6d ago · 35 · 2 · Loyalty ·

Pardon me while I lol:rainbowlaugh:

Ok, time read:eeyup:

#3 · 83w, 6d ago · 1 · 3 · Loyalty ·

Faved.

#4 · 83w, 6d ago · 19 · 2 · Loyalty ·

Yipes,, my reaction after I read this :pinkiegasp::applejackconfused::rainbowderp: then I liked right away:eeyup:

#5 · 83w, 6d ago · 7 · 2 · Loyalty ·

Looks good! Your writing gives this story a level of heart which my own stories rarely achieve. :heart:

I eagerly await the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

#6 · 83w, 6d ago · 1 · · Loyalty ·

This will be... interesting.

#7 · 83w, 6d ago · 22 · · Loyalty ·

*Reads summary.* Mmm this could be interesting.

*looks at character tags* :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#9 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Oh, this is going to be gooooood

#10 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Oh god, this should be entertaining. New girlfriend is literally young enough to be your sister.

#11 · 83w, 6d ago · 5 · 33 · Loyalty ·

...What?

At first I was like, oh, it's just a dumb one-shot with a stupid reveal and it's missing the scene after Dash leaves where Twilight and Dash's dad have a good laugh at a successful prank pulled off.

But apparently this fic isn't 90% done. I don't know how I feel about that.

#12 · 83w, 6d ago · 21 · 5 · Loyalty ·

>>2436277 If your not laughing, something in you is broken.

#13 · 83w, 6d ago · 3 · 9 · Loyalty ·

>>2436297

Well, yes, the premise of the fic thus far has broken my brain but not in a good way.

#14 · 83w, 6d ago · 1 · 1 · Loyalty ·

Potential, I like it.

#15 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Yes

Just yes

#16 · 83w, 6d ago · 3 · · Loyalty ·

Mother of God... :rainbowderp::twilightoops::applejackunsure:

#17 · 83w, 6d ago · 5 · · Loyalty ·

Discord Tag, Does Not Compute :rainbowhuh:

On a serious note, How would Discord fit into this? Dash dating Discord out of spite/revenge/love?:twilightoops:

either way an interesting concept and look forward to the rest :twilightsmile:

#18 · 83w, 6d ago · 6 · · Loyalty ·

Okay, I'm confuzzled... Twilight, how in your name did you meet RD's father?!:twilightoops::rainbowhuh::facehoof:

#19 · 83w, 6d ago · 21 · · Loyalty ·

I re-read this and I couldn't stop laughing!

“I just came to catch up with my dad about what I do in Ponyville now. I also wanted to know what he’s been doing, and I guess I’m looking right at her.”

“That’s the Dad that I know. Getting right back on the horse,” she said with a small chuckle.

“It may have taken him five years... but he’s finally doing it.”

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#20 · 83w, 6d ago · 3 · · Loyalty ·

A separate room for the wife? What is this, the Dick Van Dyke Show?

#21 · 83w, 6d ago · 6 · · Loyalty ·

>>2436448

That show was hilarious.

#22 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

I know we only saw all of 2 seconds of Rainbow Dash's dad (or possibly her brother) but the idea of him being a librarian still feels forced. Still, given the premise of the story, it is a logical choice to support that connection. I see we've already set up the scene where Rainbow Dash isn't paying attention because she's so preoccupied and winds up getting in trouble with the weather issues Twilight just mentioned, kinda cliche, but cliche's can be good if they're used properly.

#23 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

mildly sad, funny, i like it

i had a perfect image in my head of rainbowdashes jaw dropping to the floor when she saw twilight

#24 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

>>2436399

well, in here he´s a librarian, so i guess the question is kinda redundant.

#25 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Well...that was unexpected...let's see where this goes I guess. I was expecting Fluttershy though, so this caught me for a loop pretty well. :twilightoops:

#26 · 83w, 6d ago · 12 · · Loyalty ·

>>2436391

Maybe Dash is right and Discord made Blue Streak and Twilight fall in love, just for trolling her.

Genius.

#27 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Either "Princess Twilight Sparkle" is actually Discord as her (and the reason I know this is because Discord is in the "Characters section".), or Discord put Twilight and Blue Streak under a love spell so that they could love eachother.

#28 · 83w, 6d ago · · · Loyalty ·

OHHH! This is excellent, never had I thought of seeing a story where one's best friend is dating one's recently-widowed dad, and find myself really liking the story! I swear, this is really good, having rainbow's dad dating Princess Twilight Sparkle. I had thought thought it was Fluttershy that Blue Streak is dating, as he pointed out that the mare in question is not much of a flyer like him, I never saw that coming to who it actually is.

This story have potential to be really good. I can't wait to see more of this story as it develops, to see how RD is adapting to the fact that one of her best friends is dating her dad and it may even come down to being part of the family... as a step-mom that is.

Keep up the good work man.:pinkiehappy:

PS. I'll be sure to thank Bronystories as well

#30 · 83w, 5d ago · 4 · 2 · Loyalty ·

Blue Streak scoffed. “Now, I’ll have you know that being a librarian is one of the most physically-taxing jobs in Cloudsdale. Why, just last week, I got a papercut on my hoof and I only cried for fifteen minutes. Beat that.”

lol, Spongebob. :rainbowlaugh:

#31 · 83w, 5d ago · 1 · · Loyalty ·

woah.... twilight rainbow dashes dad?

:twilightblush:

#33 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Oh the shenanigans that will ensue. Oh, the possibilities. :pinkiecrazy:

#34 · 83w, 5d ago · 17 · · Loyalty ·

Blue Steak winced at his poorly-aimed throw.

what?:rainbowhuh:

#35 · 83w, 5d ago · 2 · 5 · Loyalty ·

I don't think that dashes dad would date again after losing his wife. Doesn't really fit the bill of Loyalty and all. I think I'm gonna pass on this one.

#36 · 83w, 5d ago · 9 · · Loyalty ·

>>2436791 They're having barbeque for dinner :twilightsmile:

#37 · 83w, 5d ago · 6 · 1 · Loyalty ·

:twilightsheepish: That's...odd. Well written, but I can't exactly say the premise speaks to me that much. Sure, it could be funny in the end...but the moment Twilight showed up things just entered a level of weird I'm not comfortable with.

Good job on the writing end, and I find it funny that two Rainbow dad stories are being featured right now. I'm bummed I didn't really like either (my own  rushed mess included) :twilightsheepish:

#38 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Ohh...

Oh Celestia...

Ohh Celestia why.

What in the name of Celestia's holy crystal balls...

Why.

WHY.

This is too amazing.

#39 · 83w, 5d ago · 3 · · Loyalty ·

oh snap!!!! This is some Jerry Springer stuff right here!!!   :twilightoops:

#40 · 83w, 5d ago · 6 · 1 · Loyalty ·

Dash Dad is like TWICE Twilights age! How does that work?

#41 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

This has potential, hope to read some more soon (or later, take your time)

#42 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

>Discord is in the character list

>IN a skype call with Fanthrose

"pffffffffffffffffffffffftHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA"

#43 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Oh my Celestia, this story is awesome!

Also, Spongebob reference FTW! :rainbowlaugh:

#44 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Oh...my...god...

#45 · 83w, 5d ago · 1 · · Loyalty ·

Silly me I thought....never mind :facehoof:

>>2436107

Fancy meeting you here

Oni
#46 · 83w, 5d ago · 15 · 1 · Loyalty ·

i start reading this at 84 likes.

i like it, it shoots to 104.

my one like is worth 20 normal ones.

#47 · 83w, 5d ago · 4 · 1 · Loyalty ·

>>2436297 Crap. That means I'm broken too.

#48 · 83w, 5d ago · · · Loyalty ·

Oh my. Well, this is different. No other comments then to see where this will go.

#50 · 83w, 5d ago · 8 · 3 · Loyalty ·

>>2436867 she has a  schoolfilly crush on a several thousand year old monarch that's practically canon. Maybe she just likes older ponies? Go figure.

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