"Dammit, dad. I told you not to work in the mine! I told you you weren't strong enough! But did you freaking listen to me!? NO!" The poor black-coated pegasus cried over his dads fresh grave. He cried for a good few minutes before resuming his dialogue to his deceased father.
"No, I know it wasn't your fault. With mother gone, you had to do it in order to provide. It isn't your fault. It's.... IT'S....
IT'S HER FAULT!"
SEQUEL to Lucidity and Dreams Do Come True.
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Oh...this is going to get awkward...
Good job on getting this story out fast, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters!
I would have but I was busy repair my computer
Well...this got dark very quickly.
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
'Danger' your middle name, RDD dont worry you got this.
Interesting......it actually makes me feel sad for Dart.
Flutter y you so timely.
While I doubt Fluttershy would have let Dart soak the house in fuel without stopping him, I suppose it shows how scared she was.
Brilliant chapter, I can't wait for some more! Love this series.
OH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!!! Fluttershy has the best timing.
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Don't ask, cuz I don't know.
D'aww, such a heartwarming ending.
I'm gonna miss this series. You did a great job, I enjoyed it. You might wanna fix up a few spellings in this epilogue though.
"She whispered int her ear:"
You mean He, right?
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Fixed, no idea how I missed those. Thanks for the input, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Warms me up just like my cup of tea. Good job.
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Thanks, that means fuzzy stuff to me.
Congratulations on a good series.
What is the first story in the Grant Me a Wish Series?
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How do you know about that? I haven't published that story yet, and it's not going to be a series.
It was in your Author's Notes, so I thought that one of your other stories were part of a series and I wanted to know where I should start.
But if its, its own story than I can't wait to read it.
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Oh right, the authors notes.
Awesome series bud, really nicely written
Thou hast restored my feels!
Overall this was well written, but the lack of a follow-up of psychiatric evaluation for Dart seems like a cop out. The kid commited 2 counts of kidnapping AND attempted first degree murder. Nopony else thinks he needs professional help, cause staying with Fluttershy does not count.
awesome series
interesting first chapter
the horror... O_O
oh my fucking goodness, dart has gone too far! :O
it was dark in the last few chapters, now its happy near the end, keep up the good work
Awww poor baby
I’m not gonna lie I’m not really a fan of the massive timeskip (at least without a scootaloo breakdown from how much she missed her mommy) but it was a good series