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I love the action in the story, BUT RD lost?! How?
Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom is nothing to fool with, she is DISRUPTING THE SOUND BARRIER! RD has to travel at a minimum of 1342.19 kmh/ 834 mph! 
NOPONY is evading that, its undeniability letal! 
myself, and I see what you were attempting to portray. Um Please, in the future try to be careful with your move selection. Thanks 
Now I am a fan of Derpy
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I don't know how to respond to that, so as a faithful XBOX player I shall simply say this:
Shut up, faggot!
No but really thanks for the feedback.
1565606 It still takes time to build up speed, and at that speed it is almost impossible to control your direction. Derpy could've been out of the way in time. Besides the story only said that Rainbow Dash could see Derpy on the ground, not directly under her.
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RD speed would have to increase exponentially to reach 834 mph. No offense Anti, but if the math had done property Derpy would have been encased with the Sonic Rainbow BEFORE she touched the ground. Therefore causing her death, THE END.
This is good. Very good. Well written, and enjoyable. My only issue is pacing. The story feels a bit rushed. I know that a battle would be, but the whole thing leaves a lot unanswered. Still though, wonderful read.
And a moustache.
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1566343 Well first off Rainbow Dash is the Best pony ever!
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Second I thought it would be fun to give positive feedback since nopony was commenting.
Third, Anti will this story continue at some point? (even though my fav died
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Hahaha I was not planning on it, but every time I write a one-shot people want me to continue. I don't think I will, as I just write one shots based off of pictures people make. I did it with Dreams Do Come True, but I am gonna leave this one as it is. I am not much for the whole "NLR vs. SE" thing. So, in short, no, it won't. But if you're looking for longer fictions, try reading Lucidity or Absence of Logic (shameless self promotion because I can).
So good that you get three moustaches.
1567324 I am reading both
BUT I waaaaannnnnttttt mmmorrrrrreeeee!!!!!!! 
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Feels awesome to know that you want moar!
good 4/5
1565849 I have no idea on what an Anti is but wouldn't crashing directly into the ground at 834 mph be a bit fatal? I could be totally wrong hear but it sounds like it would hurt. And wasn't Derpy pushing rocks off of her after the Sonic Rainboom, or was that Rainbow Dash?
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It was Derpy.
1581567 Thanks, I read this story a couple of days ago and I forgot the important details.
1581540 Yes, indeed making impact with the ground flying at 834 is deadly. But remember Rainbow Dash can do anything, she can beat anypony
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Oh btw Anti is the author, too lazy to tag him/her, my apologies.
1581627 Yeah, that's what I figured after I read through the comments after I posted mine. Oh and by the way APPLEJACK IS BEST PONY!!! *Runs away screaming* I REGRET NOTHING!!!
1581647 Get back here! *Tackle*
YOUR GOING TO LOVE RD!
She kicks AJ flank in every event/sport, but lassoing and bucking!
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Actually it's a 'them'. Read our bio on our profile.
1583990 Again my apologies
I am so out-of-it...
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Nah, dude. You don't gotta apologize for jack. It's all good. Quite frankly you could call my mother a crack-whore and I would just shrug it off and buy you a nicer birthday present. But in all seriousness I'm not getting you a birthday present, so stop asking.
1586653 hehehh
enjoying your story Lucidity, a lot! You put just the right amount of hostility in both Scoots and RD. Making them the perfect mother-daughter combo. 
Keep it up...
1581674 But that's only when Rainbow uses her wings. *Wiggle* I'll get out if this eventually, even if I have to use magic. *Wiggle wiggle*
1602508 Rainbow won 5 challenges without her wings.
AJ even fails at something she trains for 
the Rodeo! Can't even bring back one 1st place ribbon tsk tsk.
*Eases off of Rosewell8* *Places sock on top of horn* Now pony up!
1608521 But... Wasn't the score tied before Rainbow started using her wings? Now I have to watch that episode again. And Rainbow messed up the Young Fliers Competition and she trained for that. If she had not saved Rarity and the WBs she would have lost.
What's with the sock?
1618703 Okay lets do some math, the iron pony match consist of 20 challenges. AJ said RD used her wing power on half of the challenges, 20/10= 10. If we were to assume that RD won every match she used her wing power on it would leave the game tied at 5 a piece. But since assuming is a bad thing, we cannot come to such conclusions and therefore rightfully name Rainbow Dash the Iron Pony.
Rainbow did choke a little but at the end of the day she was crowned best flier in Equestria by Tia herself.
-Oh I read in a fanfic that socks blocks all magical ability.
How about you both shut up and admit that Pinkie is the Iron Pony. She is not bound by physics and can therefore lift more and do better at every physical test that either of the others can do.
1618858 You know what? I don't care. In my headcanon RD is an aeromancer and Applejack is a werewolf. My headcanon is a *little* weird, but you know how headcanons are. They differ from pony to pony. Also I didn't read that fanfic so those laws don't apply to me.
P.S. Who are you? I was talking to Th3-Dash and now I'm talking to Rainbow rush. *Confusion acquired*
1619144 Well Played, Well Played. Hey there a fanfic like that except for RD is death, but AJ is a werewolf....
1619167 Yeah, I read that... I get all my headcanon material from this site. Although, I do have some original ideas. Also, since you didn't answer my last comment, I'm going to assume that you changed your name, how?
1623611 I simply asked Dash how do I become better? And she told me > go to edit profile > click on your username > change away. I took her all knowing advice and here I am today. Better than ever.
1623693 Thanks, I didn't know that about this site. I've only been a member since October.
1630404 Well we do got to
share and careuh no sappy stuff, yeah glad to be of assistance