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Two-Bit Pony

Another day, another few bits.

-Noah

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PropdowPony

PropdowPony #1 · Jun 15th, 2013 · · · Every Single Day ·

What you have here is a great start to a story. Really, this feels more like a set-up to something bigger. You're clearly a proficient writer, so I'd encourage you to discover a second act, if you're up to it.

Antisocial Ind.

Antisocial Ind. #2 · Jun 16th, 2013 · · · Every Single Day ·

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Well unfortunately, I couldn't go anywhere with this story because it would have some major plotholes. I really like doing short one-shots personally. If you want longer stories, check out some stuff we did with Absence of Logic, and the Lucidity trilogy. Thanks for the compliments, and I'm so glad you enjoyed.