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  • E The Traveling Tutor and the Diplomats Daughter

    All Princess Sun Shines wants to do is escape from her stuffy room and explore the castle. All Green Grass wants to do is find some distraction to keep him from worrying about Twilight Sparkle’s most recent dangerous mission. Solution: Tour G  · Georg
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  • E In Celestia We Trust, All Others Pay Cash

    Ice Cream, so sweet, so delicious. Who would have thought a simple ice cream cone would have the power to nearly topple the financial basis of Equestria?
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  • E A War of Words - The Opening of the Guard

    Diplomacy, gender and sisterhood in conflict, as reflected in memo form
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  • E Daring Do and the Dance

    The story of a disposable minion of Ahuizotl as he tells of his forbidden love for Daring Do. Not the book, the pony.
    2,169 words · 2,115 views  ·  369  ·  3
  • T The Monster in the Twilight

    Twilight Sparkle’s brilliant mind was gone, burned away by her own power when she nearly destroyed Canterlot twelve years ago. Now there is a monster prowling the Everfree. And it is starting to remember what true power felt like.
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  • E Diamond Tiara Buys a Little Sister

    Diamond Tiara is off to the Ponyville Hospital to shop for a new little sister, but she should be careful. She may get more than what she expected.
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  • T Letters From a Little Princess Monster

    Monster finds problems fitting in and getting used to her new world in Ponyville. To help adjust, she reaches out to Princess Luna who has many of the same problems now that she is recovering from being Nightmare Moon.
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  • E Yes Twilight Sparkle, There Is a Santa Hooves

    On Hearth’s Warming Eve, Princess Celestia has always spent the night alone in her private study, allowing the castle staff and most of the guards time to spend with their loved ones on this night of friendship and family. Tonight is differen
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  • E To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

    In the highest spire of the highest tower in Canterlot, Princess Luna dreamed of nightmares....
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  • Monday
    Monday Needs Sinnin - A Punderful Request

    As the worst possible sin against nature is the Pun, and some of the people who follow me are twisted aberations against nature (some?), I thought it only fair to wonder out loud:

    What is the worst possible MLP-FIM Pun you can think of for a story description and title?

    For example:

    Description: The Pie family rock farm is  in trouble and only Pinkie Pie and the Elemnts of Harmony can save it from being taken over by a big conglomarate farm, but will they be able to find the traitor in her own family before it is too late?

    Title: Game of Stones

    Go nuts in the comments.  Stay germane, but try to keep it PG rated at wurst.

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  • 3w, 6d
    Upcoming fic battle - Flash Sunset vs. Trixie and Twilight, Sitting in a Tree

    First, go read This and appreciate it  I fear we may have created a monster.

    Ok, now for what passes as planning in Georg's world.  Which of these two fics do you think I should concentrate more effort on:

    A:  Flash Sunset

    After finding real friends for the first time in a strange dimension of odd creatures, Sunset Shimmer has finally decided to return home to Equestria in the hopes of apologizing to Princess Celestia for her betrayal.  Instead, she is greeted by an attack from the Royal Guard, and a pursuit across nighttime Canterlot that ends in disaster.

    Can two injured ponies who hate each other so much manage to survive the Everfree Forest and return to civilization, or are they just doomed to be eaten?  Grab some popcorn and settle down as we answer that question and more.

    -or-

    B: Trixie and Twilight, Sitting in a Tree

    The Great and Powerful Trixie has returned to Ponyville, apologetic for all of her previous actions, and cleansed of all thoughts of revenge, domination, power and destruction.  Now reformed, she only wishes to be accepted and loved in this wonderful little town while making friends of her own.

    Yeah, right.

    Would you believe Trixie has convinced that foolish unicorn and her dopey dragon pet that she should live rent-free in the library with them while she recovers from whatever it is that she claims to be suffering from this week?  Yeah, let’s go with that.

    Join Trixie and her friends the rest of the town as she settles into Ponyville, makes some enemies friends, and tries to find true love survive the experience.

    Bring a cream pie.  You’ll need it.


    Sample section from Flash Sunset

    Flash Sunset

    The Return


    The hardest word to say is ‘Sorry.’

      --Princess Celestia


    “I’m naked!”  It was a tribute to just how long Sunset Shimmer had spent in the weird world of ‘humans’ that even before the mind-scrambling effects of dimensional travel had fully faded and the wonderful feeling of Equestrian magic had soaked into her horn once again, her absolute first instinct had been a shocked realization that her carefully-selected outfit with matching earrings, pumps, and a daring-but-not-flaunting miniskirt that Rarity had pressed on her before departing was gone, and the cool breeze that swept through the Royal Gardens felt extremely weird on her bare rump.

    The second shocked realization was that Starswirl’s Mirror had been moved out of the secure storeroom where she had first encountered it, and placed in the middle of what could only be Celestia’s private garden.  Nowhere else could there possibly be such a degree of flowering, blooming, growing, sprouting, and just plain green that filled every single crack and crevice of the ground around her, only parting in its expanse of photosynthesis in order to grudgingly permit the occasional stone bench or gravel pathway, and even there, the tips of curious vines crept out onto the forbidden territory just as far as they thought they could get away with their intrusion.  All around her, the rustle and creak of hidden creatures filled Sunset’s mind with a strange mixture of intrigue and fear.  The mirror should not have been put out here; it was a priceless treasure of Equestria that should have been locked away where nopony else could possibly fall through the cracks into another world like Celestia’s rebellious young student had done so many moons ago.  Her reflexes surged to a near-panic as a nearby bush rustled, and her eyes caught the glint of polished steel in the moonlight.

    It’s a trap!

    Teleportation had always been easy for Sunset, an application of her boundless will upon the universe indicating that her current position of here was incorrect, and she actually was supposed to be there instead.  A surge of welcome magic flooded over her horn and she reappeared on the wall of the castle in a flash of golden light, which did nothing for her night vision and everything for the guard’s ability to see where she had gone.

    “There she goes!”

    The rustle and flapping of wings brought a hammering terror to Sunset Shimmer’s heart.  She had stolen from the Princess, assaulted the Royal Guard, and even committed what could be considered Treason Against The Crown, for which there was only one penalty.  She had hoped that Princess Celestia would have ‘gone easy’ on her, but it seemed that her destined path after her return was going to lead to a dark jail cell somewhere and unthinkable consequences.  Her dazzled eyes could just barely make out the form of the mirror in the garden, but there were bulky armored shapes in front of it now, as well as a tall pale shape she knew too well.  The only option left that held any hope was flight, away from Canterlot and into some place in Equestria where she could hide until Celestia’s immortal vengeance cooled, which looked to be a long, long time.  An armored shape flung itself out of the dark garden in her direction as Sunset Shimmer turned her back and fed power into her magic again.

    “I’ve got he—“

    The wind from a pair of pegasi hooves barely breezed through her mane as Sunset reappeared on a nearby roof in a brilliant flash and a breathless panting.  Using magic after this long away from Equestria was far more draining than she had anticipated, and she took a moment to orient herself against the familiar shapes of buildings in the silver moonlight.  Either things had changed far more than she realized in the last few years, or possibly she had managed to connect the portal to the wrong Equestria, because the city seemed different in some fashion as it faded into sight to her flash-blinded eyes.  Canterlot had always been awash in small changes as ponies attempted to one-up their neighbors with an ornate roof here or a trellis garden there, but this was far more.  The moon had even changed, no longer bearing the image of a dark unicorn, but instead wearing a soft silver of vague craters like some old pony who had gotten a facelift.

    Sample Section from Trixie and Twilight

    Trixie and Twilight, Sitting in a Tree

    Chapter 1 - Enter, Stage Left


    It was the most perfect day Spike could ever remember in Ponyville.  The sun was out, the birds were singing, Twilight was sleeping in after a long night of studying, and nothing at all could possibly go wrong.

    Spike peeked out the window while wearing a pot on his head and carrying a stout wooden spoon.  There was something terrible about to happen.  He could feel it in his scales.

    Outside, the shouts of happy foals filled the air, and the distant sound of music could be heard from the small carnival that had set up in front of the town hall.  If he squinted a little, he could just make out the sign that advertised ‘Free Ice Cream And Balloons.’

    It was worse than he thought.

    A sharp shudder shook the library as a heavy object burst through the front door, pinwheeled across the floor in a flurry of paper, and smashed into the library couch with a terrible thud.

    “Mail call,” shouted Derpy, somewhat muffled from the remains of the couch on her head.  “I’ve got a couple letters here for you.  Somewhere.”  After digging out the letters and placing them in Spike’s claw, the mailmare staggered out the door and flapped up into the air, somehow managing to remove two muffins from the library kitchen in the process.   Spike placed the letters on the book check-in table and opened them up with a single swipe of his claws.

    “Oh, no!” he groaned.  “A letter from the Equestrian Revenue Service.  We must owe… a refund?”  He looked at the hundred and twelve bit refund check and trembled.  It was far worse than he thought.

    ....(skipping forward)

    I, Spike the Dragon, being of sound mind and will, do hereby bequeath—

    A peal of thunder rolled through the library.

    Spike looked out the window.  Still sunny.  No clouds.  Chirping birds.  Distant music.

    The sound of pouring rain came from the library front door.  Small trickles of water leaked in under the sill where he was supposed to have installed weatherstripping instead of reading comic books.

    Spike looked out of the window again.  Still sunny.  No clouds.  Chirping birds.  More music.

    He turned back to his will, hoping to get it done before the eventual end of the universe, only to draw up short as a series of pathetic knocks sounded from the library front door.

    “We’re closed!” he called, trying to remember how to spell amethyst and finally deciding just to eat them all before the end instead.

    The knocking continued and Twilight called out from her bedroom.  “Spike!  Somepony’s at the door!”

    “I know that, Twilight!” he called back.  “Do we have a notary public in town?”

    The knocking continued.  Twilight called out again.  “Spike!  Get the door!”

    “All right, all right,” he grumbled.  “Maybe they can witness my will.”  He stomped over to the library door, kicked a rug over the damp spots where the rain had run in, and opened up the door.

    Standing in front of the library doorsill was a woebegone blue unicorn, her pointy hat squished into a flat soggy disk on her head.  Rain poured off her purple cloak, bearing with it the dissolving remains of a few glittery stars that left sparkly tracks down her sides and across the puddle she was standing in.  The Great and Powerful Trixie was soaking wet, so wet in fact that if she had been thrown into a lake, she could have emerged dryer than she was right now.  Even her tail had been drenched into a rat-like plait, hanging down to the ground and dragging in the mud.  It looked much like her mane, separated on each side of her head in a thick white stream of rainwater that arched from each shoulder and brought a cold shudder down her soaked coat.

    She looked up at Spike with deep blue eyes, her bottom lip trembling.  “Please, kind dragon.  I seek Twilight Sparkle for—”

    -SLAM-

    “Who was it?” called out Twilight Sparkle.

    “Nopony important,” replied Spike, going back to his will.

    “I am too!”  The knocking resumed, only louder.

    “You turned me into a basketball,” shouted Spike.

    “You got better!” replied Trixie.  “Now open this door!”


    Flash Sunset will be a self-contained serious semi-shipping, semi-Enemy Mine/Shards of Honor story, already mentally mapped out.

    Trixie and Twilight will be a continuing series of nutty and silly chapters as the muse bites me.  (No poetry on either though.  I’ve still got too many muse bites for that, and I understand Møøse bites Kan be pretty nasti…)

    Nothing out of the current EG movie will be used in Flash Sunset.  Unless I feel like it.  And it's funny.

    And yes, this will slow down the rest of my writing at the same time my workload at the office just went nuts.

    So let me know in the comments.  Although I like writing on them both, getting positive feedback helps rebuild my poor shattered ego while I’m spending time in Writers Prison for Second Degree Whenceslaughter (I’ve got an appeal in the process now, and am hoping to get some time off my sentence with community service.)

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Twilight Sparkle was quite positive she could handle the job of teaching young unicorn students in Ponyville how to handle their new magic, but when the school’s traveling magic teacher returns to town as scheduled, a series of miscommunications and accidents nearly drive the two of them crazy.  Only the power of friendship (and a certain amount of tinkering from the townsponies) can save the day for them and their students before complete disaster strikes, but maybe there is a little more than friendship in store for the two young teachers.

[Comedy][Education][Slice of Cake]  Featured on Equestria Daily.  With a TV Tropes page and a sequel, The Traveling Tutor and the Diplomat's Daughter.

A lighthearted look at education, young love, dating and buckets of water in the face in that most normal of all small towns, Ponyville.

Caution: Contains bananas, marble chips, jogging, matrimonial planning, romantic interference, intrigue, lesson plans and lots of nuts.  A whole town full of them.

Rated I for Innuendo, some drinking, some sleeping together (Just sleeping!  Really!  Why won’t you believe me?) and a great deal of dunking in the town fountain.  


No cupcakes were harmed in the production of this fic.  However, a great number were eaten.  And they were yummy.

First Published
1st Dec 2012
Last Modified
7th Feb 2013
#1 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

Author's Notes:  This is more Comedy combined with a "You can never go home again" story than Romance, but there will be kissing going on, and a lot of innuendo.  Originally I was not planning on getting too serious, or too long, but it now weighs out at 36 chapters, having taken off and dragged me along for a most enjoyable ride, with many memorable moments.  

‘Don Rocinante’ is stolen borrowed from RDD's Lunaverse series with permission, because I could never come up with a way to ponyfy Don Quixote half as well.

Presently approved by EqD on third submittal (one strike, one returned without a strike, approved on 9/26/13) after extensive editing that touched each chapter at least four times.

I would like to extend thanks to the many editors and proofreaders who have taken the time to wade through the story, including Peter, Bad Horse, Featherprop , Nyerguds, lhmac , Alicorn Priest , Kydois (and others more numerous to mention who have helped point out my errors.  You are all a moment of joy that I will treasure forever.)

Submitted to /fic/ for a review 3/3 linked Here , and the review posted 6/2 is Here with my politely worded response to the review Here with yet another politely worded response to my response (Yes, I got a *good* reviewer who cares) Here. The first chapter has been completely rewritten and major changes have occurred in several others from their advice, giving a much better story.  Thanks guys!

If you would care to read it as it was developed along with my contributor comments and various internal musings, a link to the raw Google Document is here.

Now with a TV Tropes page and a sequel, The Traveling Tutor and the Diplomat's Daughter

Submitted 12/1/2012 3:00 (and approved really quickly too)

Second chapter is up.  The rest should follow with a few days between them.

Sunday: Third chapter is up.  It's a bit stubby.

Tuesday: Fourth chapter is up.  Yes, that's a Star Wars reference. (footnotes updated for Twilight's mother, added link to Fauxsquared fantastic pic)

Thursday: Fifth chapter is up.  I'm pleading the Fifth, and Green Grass really needs a fifth.

Friday: Sixth chapter is up.  And so is Green Grass.  And so is Twilight.  How to say the wrong thing in just One Word.

Saturday: Seventh chapter is up.  "Mom!  Guess what we learned in school today!"

Sunday: Eighth chapter is up.  The cake is not a lie.  And it's delivered.

Monday: Ninth chapter is up.  Dinky brings a friend to the evaluation.

Tuesday: Evaluation is over (although who is getting evaluated is debatable).  The date apology lunch is scheduled, and something is developing. (literally)

Friday: Eleventh chapter is up.  The young lovers get their first kiss.  And Twilight gets to meet the in-laws.  And his fiance.

Sunday: Twelfth chapter is up.  Twilight sends Green Grass on a little trip.

Wednesday: Thirteenth chapter is up.  Guys talk guy things, girls talk girl things.  Green Grass gets a welcome letter, Airmail.

Friday: Fourteenth chapter is up.  Now the Princess knows.

Saturday: Fifteenth chapter is up.  The day starts with Sunlight, and ends with Starlight and Moonshine

Sunday.  Chapter 16 is up.  In Vino Veritas.

Tuesday: Chapter 17 is up.  Green Grass finds out what the moon is like.

Wednesday late: Chapter 18 is up, hangovers and misconceptions (not *that* kind of conception!)  

Thursday : Chapter 19 is up.  Sleepovers are so much fun, particularly when people you know drop in.  (19 chapters in 28 days, whew!)

Saturday : Chapter 20 is up.  Twilight's father is a nice chap.  Really.  

Sunday:  Chapter 21 is up. Twilight Sparkle’s mother is Julie Andrews, but this song went through my head while writing the entire chapter.

Monday: Chapter 22 is up.  As we say goodbye to Twilight's mom and dad, and near the end of our tale.

Wed: Chapter 23 is up.  Green Grass and Twilight start a little project that may take a few months to complete.

Sat: Chapter 24 is up.  Green Grass decides to break it off.  Pinkie Pie is making cupcakes.

Mon. Chap 25 is up.  The break up is off.  Somepony goes for a fountain trip.  Twilight has to stay after school.

Fri Chap 27 is up.  The young lovers get snowed in, and find an activity suited to the isolation.

Sun Chap 28 is up.  Green Grass has two tickets to paradise.  Rarity has 20 tickets to Tartarus.

Tue Chap 29 is up.  Our young lovers face an evening separated by some very old chaperones.

Thu Chap 30 is up.  The Princess gets some unexpected male.  err.  Mail.

Sun  Chap 31 is up.  It's a good thing those newspapers have layers of fact-checkers or they might get something wrong.

Mon Chap 32 is up.  Green Grass besieged!  Canterlot castle surrounded!  Fortunately they're just reporters.

Tue Chap 33 is up.  Green Grass and the author loose some points (Author fixed it though)

Wed Chap 34 is up.  Finally!  A proposal!  There's going to be a wedding!  (cackle) with image by Tamalesyatole

Thu Chap 35 is up.  That letter returns, with some annotations.  It makes me happy when a stallion gets what he deserves.

Chapter 36 is done This is the end, 36 chapters in just a shade over 2 months.  

Chapter 37 (epilogue) has been published, and story is now marked complete!  Dec 1 - Feb 6.  Whew.  No, I'm not making a sequel for at least several months, while I decompress.  :)

And I have an image for Green Grass' cutie mark now.  Yea, Inkscape.

#2 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

Well, this should be interesting...

You have my interest. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

#3 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

Nice. I'm looking forward to reading more.

#4 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

Yeah, pal, a dragon.  Fortunately, he's shorter than most foals so I don't think he's going to be much of a threat unless you push him too hard. :twilightsheepish:

#5 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

Insta fave. I know of the guaranteed quality here. I thinking Mr Grass is going to find Twilight a poor replacement for Ms Dewey. She is a poor librarian.

#6 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

Oh hell yeah, this looks like a lot of fun. Eagerly looking forward to more.

And more is already here!

Well, that was a fairly unique way to introduce yourself to Twilight, but that's just about the best thing I can say about it. Nice one, Grassy.

I like that he is quite well known to the residents of the town.

:rainbowlaugh:

Dat first impression.

Seems good!:rainbowkiss:

#10 · 98w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

When Mom and Dad had taken Frost into the testing room
Wait, who is this 'Frost'? Green Grass's sister is obviously named High Tides. :pinkiecrazy::trollestia:

>>1720876

'Already friends with all the main characters' is usually one of the things that makes OCs so awful, but it's done well here!:pinkiegasp:

I think that's probably the best possible way to get off on the wrong hoof with Twilight Sparkle.  I don't think that he needs to worry about being sent to the Moon.  That will be painless compared to what Twilight might do to him, given some of the skills she seems to have (based on 'Magic Duel').

Oh boy. You have sown nerdrage, Green Grass, and you shall reap the intellectually irate whirlwind. I envy you not one iota.

#15 · 98w, 4d ago · · · Ch. 3 - A Brand New Start ·

Sometimes honesty is knowing which bits of the truth to withhold for someone's own good.

Also, I doubt that apology cake's going to survive the trip to the library intact...

#16 · 98w, 4d ago · · · Ch. 3 - A Brand New Start ·

Nice one AJ, that was beautifully done.

The Pinkie Pie shenanigans were wonderful.

#17 · 98w, 4d ago · · · Ch. 1 - The Return ·

FUS RO DAH!!!

#18 · 98w, 4d ago · 1 · · Ch. 3 - A Brand New Start ·

AJ ... trolololololol

#19 · 98w, 4d ago · 3 · · Ch. 3 - A Brand New Start ·

Greengrass shouldn't be too worried; everypony is scared of Twilight Sparkle.  Everypony.  Especially after the Miss Smarty Pants incident. :twilightoops:

So is Green Grass dead? Wow, what a short story. Oh well off to the next project.

>>1742110  Well, that would be one way to end the story.   Next chapter:  Spike got out the dustpan and broom with a sigh.  They ran through more tutors that way....

>>1732287

Makes you wonder who in their right mind would marry her.

:twilightangry2: Who left the toilet seat up?!

Dead

:twilightangry2: You forgot our anniversary?!

Dead

All I can think is Fus ro da

Well, hopefully there is more than one traveling magic tutor available, I don't think this one is going to be any good anymore.

>>1742452  For Sale, one magic tutor, slightly worn.  Send self-addressed stamped envelope to....

Well, Greenie, it was nice knowing you.  Who should we send your mortal remains to? :rainbowlaugh:

Ozone makes Twilight think of her mother? Now I have a mental image of Twilight Velvet's mane and tail turning into electricity when she gets angry...

Also, I hope that icy whiteness was cake to the face. It may distract Twilight long enough for Green Grass to escape with his life and most of his limbs.

>>1744880

I figure that unicorn magic tastes like ozone.

#29 · 98w, 19h ago · · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

:rainbowlaugh:

Those footnotes.

#30 · 98w, 18h ago · · 1 · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

Hmmm... Twilight seem rather crazy and condescending. Seems legit.  

#31 · 98w, 18h ago · · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

She was beautiful.  Radiant power seemed to fill Twilight’s entire being, from her stark white eyes to a smoldering mane that flowed in a nonexistant breeze with little sparks of fire at the tips of each hair.  A crackle of ozone filled the library with a tang that seemed to catch on the back of the tongue and tingle along his spine, holding every hair on his coat on end.  Even though he was just moments from death, Green Grass could not help but stare and marvel at the power of the cosmos, ready to be unleashed.  On him.

:rainbowderp: Man, he really likes to live on the edge.

I love that Spike knew exactly what to do with zero hesitation. There's a time for trying to calm Twilight down gently, and a time to just get the fire extinguisher.

the other of which had just ‘coincidently’ sent a young noble colt to town.

He lives in a traveling library, Twilight, he lives in a traveling library.

#32 · 98w, 16h ago · · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

Bets on Twilight having fallen asleep Green Grass's cart reading the book.

#33 · 98w, 14h ago · · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

Oooohhh, that kind of 'marble chip cake' :facehoof:

#34 · 98w, 12h ago · 1 · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

“I hear you met our town’s resident dragon.”

“Yeah, and Spike too,”

:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::heart::rainbowlaugh:

#35 · 98w, 2h ago · · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

One lulled to sleep by tilting at windmills, the other too drunk to notice his bed being occupied.

They fight crime!

Love the bit where Grass is enraptured by the lethal majesty that is enraged Twilight. If I wasn't shipping these two before, I certainly would be now.

Also, is it wrong that I want the Who's Who of Equestrian nobility to be called "Derp's Peerage"? :derpytongue2:

#36 · 97w, 6d ago · 2 · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

Ah, the ever addicting site They Fight Crime! , many hours of my life were destroyed there.

Actually I thought of her doing a 'Hulk-fighting-Loki' moment, but the results would be... messy.

*wham!* *wham!* *wham!* *wham!* *wham!*

Dear Princess Celestia,

Can you help me hide a body?

Your Faithful Accomplice,

Twilight Sparkle

#37 · 97w, 6d ago · 3 · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

Dear Princess Celestia,

Can you help me hide a body?

Your Faithful Accomplice,

Twilight Sparkle

My faithful student.

I knew this day would come and I'm just so proud! Your first ponyslaughter or did you skip straight to Murder?

Anyway I have a certain advantage of being able to send any anoying bodies to the moon (I'm looking at you Loona) might I suggest burial, I'm sure your friend Applejack has some empty land, or maybe dear Fluttershy has come carnivorous friends who can help, maybe even Pinky Pie?

I can't wait to receive a further friendship report on this matter, remember friends who kill together stay together?

Your mentor

Princess Celestia

Dead man waking.

Damned if he does, damned if he doesn't.

I'm sure he'll get a nice gravestone.

Just going to give fair warning, you're one good update away from a favorite.

You tease :raritydespair:

Now, the question is, will this dig him in deeper with Twilight, or will it lead to bonding of the awkward 'let us never speak of this again' type?

I love how he basically spent the entire chapter very carefully panicking.

#44 · 97w, 6d ago · · · Ch. 5 - Study Party ·

>>1756754

Not at all.

Welp, this story was fun while it lasted. Shame about the main character's imminent demise.

…and that's how Equestria was destroyed. :pinkiecrazy:

"Where's Green Grass? Well he's over there... and over there... Ooh! There's some over here too! And what's that...? Yeah, I'm pretty sure that's a bit on the rug too..."

Seriously, I suspect that Twilight is going to be too horribly embarrassed to be angry... after a while.  She's going to panic first and assume that she got stoned or something and slept with him without knowing it.

I loved the dream/nightmare sequence, BTW.  I'm pretty sure that every stallion who's looked sideways at Twilight has had that nightmare.

#48 · 97w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 7 - Wake-Up Call ·

Oh look, he didn't die :pinkiehappy:

#49 · 97w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 7 - Wake-Up Call ·

Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! There is a lot to explore here with cool and funny stuations. More story please.:twilightangry2::facehoof::moustache::trollestia:

#50 · 97w, 5d ago · · · Ch. 7 - Wake-Up Call ·

:rainbowlaugh: Oh man, no death, but six months of Masters research down the drain. Ouch.

Dang, is Twilight persistent when she wants a book or what. And that out of context dialog!

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