A/N: Another chapter down, one one step closer to the plot. Just an FYI: I did some checking and those are the canon names for the Diamond Dog trio, Rover, Spot, and Fido. Also, for those of you less than thrilled by them, say good bye to Cheerilee's 80's speech patterns. I hope this explains a few things that have been happening in a satisfactory manner; and for those who guessed correctly, have an internet cookie. You may want to clean them off before eating them, though. I "found" them in the back of the pantry otherwise known as fchan. Eat at your own risk. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png The usual disclaimers here. Everything but the arrangement of the words belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust. I'm just playing in their sandbox.
Let me guess, in this continuity the Ponies have something like estrus and can only get pregnant at certain times. Since Twilight knew that none of the other mares were in Estrus she took no other precautions with the futa spell. Unknown to her the botched cloudwalking spell's atavism activated the estrus hormones inducing it artificially in Cheerilee and Trixie. Fortunately Twilight only came inside Cheerilee so things aren't as complicated as they could have been. Showing surprising restraint and mercy from Wrabbit for his characters.
This is a suitable explanation and an interesting turn of events. The whole nympho thing was getting on my nerves. You've restored my faith in this story, for what it's worth. (I don't intend this to sound as dramatic/excessive as it might sound)
Well it wasn't that I didn't like 80s Cheerilee and super horny Trixie/Cheerilee as I was just confused by them, now I see the reason behind it all and I liked the way it was handled. Also glad to see Twi's blindness isn't permanent (even if she can technically still see so it's not exactly a hindrance).
Finally in regards to the big reveal (Cheerilee's condition, not necessarily Rover's entire plan for whatever) I just got to say don't ever change Celestia
Don't ever change.
This was another great chapter looking forward to more.
Can't wait to see what happens with that and how you explain it. 1760060 This is a very good reason and the one I was thinking of as I base my stories as close to equine anatomy/physiology as I can get. Now, as to the Rover thing. Huh. Curious to see how that continues. Doesn't look good though
Why must you update when I have no time to read? That's so cruel. Want to read so badly, but it will have to wait. I need to sleep so that I can wake up to watch ponies. Pre-congratulations on what I'm sure is another wonderful chapter.
1766544 Oh sweet Celestia, thank you! I can't wait for some slice of life with Nightmare Moon and Twilight! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png Twilight: Luna, did you kill the Griffon ambassador, again? NMM: Sorry, dearest, but he just wouldn't shut up about "reparations" and "sanctions". Shall I send somepony to clean up the ashes? Twilight: It's alright, love. I already threw them into the garden. Waste not, want not. NMM: Ooo... I love it when you're practical. C'mere. Insert hot sex scene here.
Great to see Cheer and Trix didn't lose all their marbles after all. Can't say the superduperevil plot is pulling much of my attention, but the slice of life part is perfect. Now i can't wait to see Twilights reaction when she finds out. Hey everypony! I'm done with the cleanup. Twilight.... Yes sweetie? You said this was a test run of the spell. You know... a, uuuh... 'blank' shot? Huh? What are you talking ab....oh....Oooooooh Problem, Twilight? *sips her tea* ...............
1764974 That would be just super. When you're done with the next chapter, just PM me and we'll work out when releasing it would be best for my schedule Nice chapter, thank Celestia the lingo is gone, and thank her again for that beautiful non sequitur dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png Twilight losing her sight came a bit out of left field without much rhyme nor reason, but I do like that it's far from the first time she's done this to herself. I wonder how Celestia knew about Cheerilee's pregnancy yet Twilight didn't notice it while she was giving her a diagnostic, nor when she was fixing the pair.
Celly is gonna be a grandma! Dis gun b good. (God I miss the extra emoticons.)
Also, more about Celestia's relationship with her student? DO WANT. I have always liked the mother/daughter take on their relationship (I spend a lot of headcanon points on it in fact) and ever since that particularly HEARTBREAKING scene in the previous story, I find I am actually more interested in those two than the crazy lesbian foursome.
Lastly, this story brings to mind "Don't Stop Me Now" by Queen.
1767215 I may have paraphrased, but I could easily see it happen. 1768099
Great to see Cheer and Trix didn't lose all their marbles after all.
It was a very near thing. 1768521 Well, I felt that with all the studying and experimenting with magic she does, it's bound to happen now and then. As for your last question, it was because she wasn't looking for it, combined with the fact that she was blinded so fast, she had only an opportunity to look at their brains, and not their mommy parts. 1775203 Very legit. Almost... too legit to quit. 1787414 I miss them too. Hopefully, there'll be fix for that soon. I especially miss my lyradealwithit. That scene was probably the saddest thing I've written... to date. Close runner-up coming soon.
Celestia smiled gently at the memory of her faithful student, and how earnest she could be when studying. “Because I had never expressly forbid it, Twilight studied for weeks on her own, learning to cast the spell allowing her to see into the astral realm. When she had finally mastered it,” the alicorn shook her head wistfully, “she used it while I was distracted... raising the sun.”
gee twilight, staring directly into the sun, brilliant idea
AHAHAHAHA!! Oh man, Celestia, you are truly the best troll. I loved that scene where Twilight saw them all staring and was just like "just walk away, Twilight." Oh man. So damn funny. And yeah, I was wondering about the implications with her...not withdrawing previously. I thought she said she took proper precautions with the spell, though? Oh well, guess she FAILED!
Interesting take on the blindness/atavism/astral form stuff. I always love seeing different authors work differently with magic.
“Sure thing, Twilight.” As she turned around to fill the order, Roseluck casually asked, “So, how are things going with your fillyfriend?”
Distracted, Twilight looked back to her library worried about what might be going on back there. “Huh? Which one?” she asked.
The earth pony almost ripped the paper in which she was wrapping the order completely. “What?”
“What?”
“Um, nothing. Here you go, Twilight. Ten bits, please.” Hoofing over the large bundle of flowers, Roseluck nervously looked around.
“Thanks,” Twilight said as she hoofed over a small bag containing twelve bits and took the bundle. “Keep the change.” And with that, she teleported away again.
11448634 That's... an interesting question. When I wrote the line, I hadn't even considered to possible implications this could bring up. A base-4 system might make the most sense, but given how in this particular continuity, unicorns used to have a much higher (and high-hoofed attitude) control over things, they might have a base-5 system (hooves and horn), or even a base-6 (hoves, tail, and horn) system. I better send this upstairs to Twilight; she's got the math skillz to handle something like this.
So glad I came back to this after a short break. Magical brain damage, that explain a lot about the personality change. I can live with this its a fun idea. Almost like getting a concussion from Rainbow Dash kicking your face in lol.
I kinda wish Twilight was slightly more helpless, just a little so the others could take care of her.
also, 'when are you due' omg that nearly killed me. HAHAHAHA. Thats Trixie is Pregnant storyline all over again, love it.
11851285 I'm glad you stuck with it. Several didn't like the oversexed turn the first couple chappies took, and left right before it was explained and fixed.
A/N: Another chapter down, one one step closer to the plot. Just an FYI: I did some checking and those are the canon names for the Diamond Dog trio, Rover, Spot, and Fido. Also, for those of you less than thrilled by them, say good bye to Cheerilee's 80's speech patterns. I hope this explains a few things that have been happening in a satisfactory manner; and for those who guessed correctly, have an internet cookie. You may want to clean them off before eating them, though. I "found" them in the back of the pantry otherwise known as fchan. Eat at your own risk. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png The usual disclaimers here. Everything but the arrangement of the words belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust. I'm just playing in their sandbox.
I'm going to say this now, dood.
I am actually rather happy that Trixie and Cheerilee aren't going all 'Mistress' over Twilight, as amusing as it was...it was creepy.
I'll try not to spill anything...but the Princess certainly made things interesting with the news when Twilight left.
I FREAKING KNEW SHE WAS PREGNANT HAHAHA YES
cheerilee is preggers eh. Well I thought twi didn't pull out in the last round. anyshway good chapter.
well this is getting interesting
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Twilight has already impregnated a marefriend? Meh, just sip tea.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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Heh heh. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Pretty irresistible? She's downright impossible to resist! Adorkable FTW!
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Never read Fallout: Equestria, actually, so if this bears any similarity, it is entirely coincidental. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Did anyone answer yet?
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She's good at that, isn't she?
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Take it down a notch, Scotty. You're scaring the straights. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png
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Nope. No pulling out, and in fact, fell asleep with it in.
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Indeed... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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I have no idea what to make of that... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Tea fixes everything! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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me either...
Let me guess, in this continuity the Ponies have something like estrus and can only get pregnant at certain times. Since Twilight knew that none of the other mares were in Estrus she took no other precautions with the futa spell. Unknown to her the botched cloudwalking spell's atavism activated the estrus hormones inducing it artificially in Cheerilee and Trixie. Fortunately Twilight only came inside Cheerilee so things aren't as complicated as they could have been. Showing surprising restraint and mercy from Wrabbit for his characters.
This is a suitable explanation and an interesting turn of events. The whole nympho thing was getting on my nerves.
You've restored my faith in this story, for what it's worth. (I don't intend this to sound as dramatic/excessive as it might sound)
Well it wasn't that I didn't like 80s Cheerilee and super horny Trixie/Cheerilee as I was just confused by them, now I see the reason behind it all and I liked the way it was handled. Also glad to see Twi's blindness isn't permanent (even if she can technically still see so it's not exactly a hindrance).
Finally in regards to the big reveal (Cheerilee's condition, not necessarily Rover's entire plan for whatever) I just got to say don't ever change Celestia
Don't ever change.
This was another great chapter looking forward to more.
How will Twilight react to this.
WHAT THE HELL MAN!!!!
I thought Twilight was shootin blanks from that thing!!!?
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Well, I was partially right about that bit. And PREGO CHEERILEE! Unless it's just Celestia going troll on them...
Woo! Preggors! Pregnant mare = best mare. Just i1035.photobucket.com/albums/a438/narutokak/GokuIcon001.png .
Can't wait to see what happens with that and how you explain it. 1760060 This is a very good reason and the one I was thinking of as I base my stories as close to equine anatomy/physiology as I can get. Now, as to the Rover thing. Huh. Curious to see how that continues. Doesn't look good though
Why must you update when I have no time to read? That's so cruel. Want to read so badly, but it will have to wait. I need to sleep so that I can wake up to watch ponies. Pre-congratulations on what I'm sure is another wonderful chapter.
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Tankyew! ::takes a bow:: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
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Well, it makes sense since they're still mostly ponies. Sure, they're sapient and can build things, but their basic physiology isn't all that different from regular horses. As for your last sentence, what was that old proverb? "Spare the rod, spoil the child?" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Glad we straightened that out, then.
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With her usual aplomb and calm, well-thought-out actions and words. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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What did you think it was, if I may ask? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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It took me a moment for me to figure out why you were just Goku... Yeah, I fail, just saiyan. Anywho, I didn't think there'd be so many positive responses to Cheerilee actually having Twilight's magical lesbian baby. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Because I update when I finish a chapter? I suppose we could coordinate my update schedule with your free time, but that would hardly be fair to the others who want to read my story, is it? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png
1764974 Why wouldn't there be? That's five-hundred sixty-nine billion, seven-hundred eighty-two million, thee-hundred twenty-four thousand, one-hundred, and sixteen kinds of hot.
1764974 So I just gotta ask my shameless question.
Are we gonna see Cheerilee and Twi have pregnancy sex?
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I guess it's mostly due to the fact that I have seen the next best thing to zero stories about mares having foals, and raising a family. It almost always stops with "ZOMG weer in luuurrrve, let's get our mack on!" and such. I honestly didn't think that there'd be many people interested in the raising of family part, just the hotness that makes the magical lesbian babies. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Mmmaaayyybeee... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
1766385 I know I won't stop at that.... I'll let that just sink in.
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You may, and I would say but I fear it may still be spoilery. I could always PM you my guess
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Oh sweet Celestia, thank you! I can't wait for some slice of life with Nightmare Moon and Twilight! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
Twilight: Luna, did you kill the Griffon ambassador, again?
NMM: Sorry, dearest, but he just wouldn't shut up about "reparations" and "sanctions". Shall I send somepony to clean up the ashes?
Twilight: It's alright, love. I already threw them into the garden. Waste not, want not.
NMM: Ooo... I love it when you're practical. C'mere.
Insert hot sex scene here.
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By all means, PM away.
1766998 I pretty hard.
Great to see Cheer and Trix didn't lose all their marbles after all.
Can't say the superduperevil plot is pulling much of my attention, but the slice of life part is perfect. Now i can't wait to see Twilights reaction when she finds out.
Hey everypony! I'm done with the cleanup.
Twilight....
Yes sweetie?
You said this was a test run of the spell. You know... a, uuuh... 'blank' shot?
Huh? What are you talking ab....oh....Oooooooh
Problem, Twilight? *sips her tea*
...............
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That would be just super. When you're done with the next chapter, just PM me and we'll work out when releasing it would be best for my schedule
Nice chapter, thank Celestia the lingo is gone, and thank her again for that beautiful non sequitur dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
Twilight losing her sight came a bit out of left field without much rhyme nor reason, but I do like that it's far from the first time she's done this to herself. I wonder how Celestia knew about Cheerilee's pregnancy yet Twilight didn't notice it while she was giving her a diagnostic, nor when she was fixing the pair.
I am gone for a while, and Cheerilee gets pregnant with Twilight's lesbian magical pony baby...
Seems legitimate...
Celly is gonna be a grandma!
Dis gun b good. (God I miss the extra emoticons.)
Also, more about Celestia's relationship with her student? DO WANT.
I have always liked the mother/daughter take on their relationship (I spend a lot of headcanon points on it in fact) and ever since that particularly HEARTBREAKING scene in the previous story, I find I am actually more interested in those two than the crazy lesbian foursome.
Lastly, this story brings to mind "Don't Stop Me Now" by Queen.
"She called me momma"
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I may have paraphrased, but I could easily see it happen.
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It was a very near thing.
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Well, I felt that with all the studying and experimenting with magic she does, it's bound to happen now and then. As for your last question, it was because she wasn't looking for it, combined with the fact that she was blinded so fast, she had only an opportunity to look at their brains, and not their mommy parts.
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Very legit. Almost... too legit to quit.
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I miss them too. Hopefully, there'll be fix for that soon. I especially miss my lyradealwithit. That scene was probably the saddest thing I've written... to date. Close runner-up coming soon.
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Oh dear...
gee twilight, staring directly into the sun, brilliant idea
AHAHAHAHA!! Oh man, Celestia, you are truly the best troll. I loved that scene where Twilight saw them all staring and was just like "just walk away, Twilight." Oh man. So damn funny. And yeah, I was wondering about the implications with her...not withdrawing previously. I thought she said she took proper precautions with the spell, though? Oh well, guess she FAILED!
Interesting take on the blindness/atavism/astral form stuff. I always love seeing different authors work differently with magic.
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She did take proper precautions, but her notes were the unfinished version.
1775203 I mean, that's a matter for pony Jerry Springer Innit?
So Cheery is the first one preggers.
Oh this will be great!
And mysterious plot involving Rover and "It", cool.
Onto the next one!
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LOL
So... 10 bits, and she didn't say "keep the rest" - she said "keep the change".
Do the ponies here have a base-6 (or possibly base-12) system? Considering four hooves, I would've figured either a base-4, or a base-16...
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That's... an interesting question. When I wrote the line, I hadn't even considered to possible implications this could bring up. A base-4 system might make the most sense, but given how in this particular continuity, unicorns used to have a much higher (and high-hoofed attitude) control over things, they might have a base-5 system (hooves and horn), or even a base-6 (hoves, tail, and horn) system. I better send this upstairs to Twilight; she's got the math skillz to handle something like this.
So glad I came back to this after a short break. Magical brain damage, that explain a lot about the personality change. I can live with this its a fun idea. Almost like getting a concussion from Rainbow Dash kicking your face in lol.
I kinda wish Twilight was slightly more helpless, just a little so the others could take care of her.
also, 'when are you due' omg that nearly killed me. HAHAHAHA. Thats Trixie is Pregnant storyline all over again, love it.
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I'm glad you stuck with it. Several didn't like the oversexed turn the first couple chappies took, and left right before it was explained and fixed.