A/N: Well, it's finally here. This story will hopefully answer a few questions left by the last story, while simultaneously raising all new ones to the fore. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I anticipate in writing it. The usual disclaimers apply here, Everything belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust except the arrangement of the words. I'm just playing in their sandbox.
Instant-watch and thumbs up before I even dig in. That's how much faith I have in you after TSW. Now to read. (I'll edit accordingly after I do so)
[Edit] Ok, so... I felt like I had jumped back into the equine 70s with Cheerilee's dialogue (or the equivalent). Just needed to say that first. For what this is (you know, a lovey-dovey harem relationship with Twilight as the centerpiece), it's still rather entertaining. I did chuckle a couple of times around.
My condolences to Twilight. If sometimes I can begin to feel smothered with my girlfriend (which I love very much [disclaimer in case she somehow gets here]), I can't even begin to imagine what 3 could begin to do. XD
Why is that the ominous parts in stories are always in italics? Anyway, great so far, your last story was amazing, so I'm expecting that this one will be too.
Very well, then I hope you don't mind if I giggle maniacally and shout out "Called it!" in the most fan-girlish way my Adams Apple will let me if I'm correct.
Woo! Just finished with the opening story and now it seems I must turn my attention here. Too lazy to go back and comment on the previus one, but loved it and can't wait to see where this continues to take it.
Alright, finally got the chance to read this and let me just say I like it Although I just have one criticism. It's about Cheerilee's dialogue;
Other than that, please continue, I'm enjoying this immensely. BTW are you going to throw in clop chapters like the previous story or is this going to stay just saucy?
Good start again but...who was that at the end...it is some time since I read the other but I don't really remember anyone it could be...looking forward to see what happens.
W-wow... What a way to start the sequel. Sexy times! Sexy times everywhere! ESPECIALLY poor Rainbow, but evidently the naughtiness is spreading about the town! I love it. How deliciously naughty. Glad to see that you got a bit bolder with this. Onwards!
The teacher nuzzled up to the azure unicorn and rested her head on Trixie's flank, giving Spitfire that same look. “Totally. Don't be so heinous. Like, take a chill pill.”
Without taking her eyes away from Spitfire's, Trixie leaned down and licked at Cheerilee's flank just above her cutie mark before gently biting down on it, leaving a small mark on the coat. Cheerilee in return, never let her feral grin wander from the pegasus as she started for the door. “Let's bounce, crucial babe,” she said to Trixie. “We need to jet if we want to score those ace sweets for dessert tonight.”
it does feel slightly odd how we go from 'we're only friendly rivals but are almost friends' at the end of the first book. immediately to 'Im going to hump you to death' pure lust in the beginning of the second book. with only 3 days of orgy time apart from the two.
Interesting, but feels just a bit disconnected. Will read more as I'm digging the new relationships. Feels like something I'd write lol.
A/N: Well, it's finally here. This story will hopefully answer a few questions left by the last story, while simultaneously raising all new ones to the fore. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I anticipate in writing it. The usual disclaimers apply here, Everything belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust except the arrangement of the words. I'm just playing in their sandbox.
Instant-watch and thumbs up before I even dig in. That's how much faith I have in you after TSW.
Now to read. (I'll edit accordingly after I do so)
[Edit]
Ok, so... I felt like I had jumped back into the equine 70s with Cheerilee's dialogue (or the equivalent). Just needed to say that first.
For what this is (you know, a lovey-dovey harem relationship with Twilight as the centerpiece), it's still rather entertaining. I did chuckle a couple of times around.
My condolences to Twilight. If sometimes I can begin to feel smothered with my girlfriend (which I love very much [disclaimer in case she somehow gets here]), I can't even begin to imagine what 3 could begin to do. XD
Looking forward to see where you take this.
>sequel to Teacher, Sorceress, and Wonderbolt
Instant favorite.
Wait, what was with that cryptic ending? Also, it seems Twilight's marefriends are spreading sexy time throughout town. I approve!.
Why is that the ominous parts in stories are always in italics? Anyway, great so far, your last story was amazing, so I'm expecting that this one will be too.
Fantastic. Been waiting for this eagerly. Cheers!
Haha! Loving it! It made me laugh quite a bit.
Do continue!
Can I say hello Changeling Queen... At least that is what I am getting from the ending. Either way damn good read. As it has been favorited.
Hmm it seems that the wrascally Wrabbit hsa made a sequel. Well now I have to say.
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Till Next Time Peace.
Liked, favourited and a comment to confirm your awesomeness
Pre-favoriting, can't wait till I get the time to read this.
IT HAS ARRIVED WOO!
God Damit wrabbit It only took you one chapter of this story and I all ready love it.
P.S. pinkie says hi
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Well, I was going for the 80's, but okay.
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Thank you kindly.
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The salacious, sexy shenanigans are just starting. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Well, I can't speak for others, but I did it to separate it from the main narrative. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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You might. Then again, you night not. Let's just leave it at "it remains to be seen". dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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MOAR incoming. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Thank you kindly. Also, I am in love with your avatar. So cute! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
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Why am I reminded of this scene? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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I think I know what's going on... and I like it
I must know now is the villain cannon or OC?
Are Trixie and Cheerilee in trouble?
A sequel, alright.
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For the sake of not spoiling anything, I won't ask what it is you think is going on.
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Saying yea or nay either way could reveal too much information. Sorry, but you'll just have to wait and see.
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My friend, they are in the kind of trouble that many wish they could get into. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
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I hope you'll like it and continue reading (as well as the previous installments). dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Very well, then I hope you don't mind if I giggle maniacally and shout out "Called it!" in the most fan-girlish way my Adams Apple will let me if I'm correct.
1660755 Will do.
It would seem that a pair of mares have their switches stuck in the 'on' position.
Woo! Just finished with the opening story and now it seems I must turn my attention here. Too lazy to go back and comment on the previus one, but loved it and can't wait to see where this continues to take it.
1654653.................... I have no idea..... None what so ever
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Well, it's not exactly vital to the story; just a nice little aside really.
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Sorry, that's the way the cupcake crumbles.
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Feel free to squee away. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Oh, you have no idea. The shenanigans have only just begun.
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Thank you kindly. Always nice to hear from writers I enjoy.
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You gotta admit, Pinkie and Gir would make a dangerous pair. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
Alright, finally got the chance to read this and let me just say I like it
Although I just have one criticism. It's about Cheerilee's dialogue;
Other than that, please continue, I'm enjoying this immensely. BTW are you going to throw in clop chapters like the previous story or is this going to stay just saucy?
1654653 becasue Gir is that good?
By Celestia's beard, you truly are inexhaustible, aren't you?
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BTW, I feel like an idiot, but what is this: (\ /) supposed to be, because all I see is Cutman looking at his hands.
( . .)
*(“)(“)
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Chyah dude, don't bag on a gnarly babe getting in touch with her inner glam. You be illin'. Can you relate? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
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I'll buy that. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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I wouldn't say that. It wasn't until this chapter was half done did I finalize the overall plot. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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It's supposed to be a bunny being a scene break indicator, but due to the formatting of the site, the extra wide space between lines. the effect is somewhat ruined. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
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OH! I see it now.
You have no idea how happy i am to see this! I hope the CMC tracks you down and gives you a tackle-hug for writing this.
I'm calling the nightmare being the villian
Good start again but...who was that at the end...it is some time since I read the other but I don't really remember anyone it could be...looking forward to see what happens.
FREAKIN HOT!!!!!
Also
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W-wow... What a way to start the sequel. Sexy times! Sexy times everywhere! ESPECIALLY poor Rainbow, but evidently the naughtiness is spreading about the town! I love it. How deliciously naughty. Glad to see that you got a bit bolder with this. Onwards!
Now what was that mysterious ending about...?
And that´s why Spitfire is best marefriend for Twilight.
Besides Dash.
And Pinkie Pie.
And Fluttershy.
And Applejack.
And Rar-... nah. :P
I think that Twilight needs to learn a spell that creates buckets of ice-cold water.
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Other than that, YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON/ANIMAL THAT HAS EVER EXISTED.
Oh how I love Cheerilee's way of speaking.
I can't believe I forgot about this story. Now I'm definitely going to finish it.
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Yeah
About...5 years later
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I look forward to you finding the third story and finishing that one... in another five years.
As wonderful a story as I remember it, even this early on.
it does feel slightly odd how we go from 'we're only friendly rivals but are almost friends' at the end of the first book. immediately to 'Im going to hump you to death' pure lust in the beginning of the second book. with only 3 days of orgy time apart from the two.
Interesting, but feels just a bit disconnected. Will read more as I'm digging the new relationships. Feels like something I'd write lol.