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A/N: Well, it's finally here. This story will hopefully answer a few questions left by the last story, while simultaneously raising all new ones to the fore. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I anticipate in writing it. The usual disclaimers apply here, Everything belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust except the arrangement of the words. I'm just playing in their sandbox. :twilightsmile:

Instant-watch and thumbs up before I even dig in. That's how much faith I have in you after TSW. :twilightsmile:
Now to read. (I'll edit accordingly after I do so)

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Ok, so... I felt like I had jumped back into the equine 70s with Cheerilee's dialogue (or the equivalent). Just needed to say that first.
For what this is (you know, a lovey-dovey harem relationship with Twilight as the centerpiece), it's still rather entertaining. I did chuckle a couple of times around.

My condolences to Twilight. If sometimes I can begin to feel smothered with my girlfriend (which I love very much [disclaimer in case she somehow gets here]), I can't even begin to imagine what 3 could begin to do. XD

Looking forward to see where you take this.

>sequel to Teacher, Sorceress, and Wonderbolt
Instant favorite.

Wait, what was with that cryptic ending? Also, it seems Twilight's marefriends are spreading sexy time throughout town. I approve!.

Why is that the ominous parts in stories are always in italics? Anyway, great so far, your last story was amazing, so I'm expecting that this one will be too.

Fantastic. Been waiting for this eagerly. Cheers!

Haha! Loving it! It made me laugh quite a bit. :rainbowlaugh:
Do continue! :raritystarry:

Can I say hello Changeling Queen... At least that is what I am getting from the ending. Either way damn good read. As it has been favorited.:twilightsmile:

Hmm it seems that the wrascally Wrabbit hsa made a sequel. Well now I have to say.
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Till Next Time Peace.

Liked, favourited and a comment to confirm your awesomeness :yay:

Pre-favoriting, can't wait till I get the time to read this.

IT HAS ARRIVED WOO!

God Damit wrabbit:flutterrage: It only took you one chapter of this story and I all ready love it.:pinkiesmile:

P.S. pinkie says hi :pinkiehappy:

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Well, I was going for the 80's, but okay. :derpytongue2:
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Thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:
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The salacious, sexy shenanigans are just starting. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Well, I can't speak for others, but I did it to separate it from the main narrative. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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You might. Then again, you night not. Let's just leave it at "it remains to be seen". dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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MOAR incoming. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Thank you kindly. Also, I am in love with your avatar. So cute! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
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Why am I reminded of this scene? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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I think I know what's going on... and I like it :pinkiehappy:

I must know now is the villain cannon or OC?

Are Trixie and Cheerilee in trouble?

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For the sake of not spoiling anything, I won't ask what it is you think is going on. :pinkiecrazy:
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Saying yea or nay either way could reveal too much information. Sorry, but you'll just have to wait and see. :scootangel:
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My friend, they are in the kind of trouble that many wish they could get into. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
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I hope you'll like it and continue reading (as well as the previous installments). dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png

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Very well, then I hope you don't mind if I giggle maniacally and shout out "Called it!" in the most fan-girlish way my Adams Apple will let me if I'm correct. :pinkiecrazy:

It would seem that a pair of mares have their switches stuck in the 'on' position.

Woo! Just finished with the opening story and now it seems I must turn my attention here. Too lazy to go back and comment on the previus one, but loved it and can't wait to see where this continues to take it.

1654653:rainbowhuh:.........:rainbowlaugh:........... I have no idea..... None what so ever

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Well, it's not exactly vital to the story; just a nice little aside really. :yay:
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Sorry, that's the way the cupcake crumbles. :pinkiesad2:
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Feel free to squee away. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Oh, you have no idea. The shenanigans have only just begun. :twilightoops:
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Thank you kindly. Always nice to hear from writers I enjoy. :twilightsmile:
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You gotta admit, Pinkie and Gir would make a dangerous pair. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png

Alright, finally got the chance to read this and let me just say :pinkiehappy: I like it :rainbowwild:
Although I just have one criticism. It's about Cheerilee's dialogue;

Other than that, please continue, I'm enjoying this immensely. BTW are you going to throw in clop chapters like the previous story or is this going to stay just saucy?

1654653 becasue Gir is that good?

By Celestia's beard, you truly are inexhaustible, aren't you?

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BTW, I feel like an idiot, but what is this: (\ /) supposed to be, because all I see is Cutman looking at his hands. :twilightoops:
( . .)
*(“)(“)

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Chyah dude, don't bag on a gnarly babe getting in touch with her inner glam. You be illin'. Can you relate? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
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I'll buy that. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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I wouldn't say that. It wasn't until this chapter was half done did I finalize the overall plot. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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It's supposed to be a bunny being a scene break indicator, but due to the formatting of the site, the extra wide space between lines. the effect is somewhat ruined. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png

You have no idea how happy i am to see this! I hope the CMC tracks you down and gives you a tackle-hug for writing this. :applecry::scootangel::unsuresweetie:

I'm calling the nightmare being the villian

Good start again but...who was that at the end...it is some time since I read the other but I don't really remember anyone it could be...looking forward to see what happens.

A/N: Wow, this one was a bit of a turn up, eh? I want to thank all of those who read my blog post about this chapter and responding so positively. Without you, this chapter might have been a lot shorter. As always, I own nothing in this but the arrangement of the words. All else belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and I thank them fro letting me play in their sandbox. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png

Alrighty. Glad to see this updated. Commence read. :scootangel:

I won't lie was wondering what the ummm... development would be like reading. All in all it's wasn't anything too radical, especially compared to a lot of the other stuff on this website. I do agree with Twi that the other needs to tone it down a bit (specifically Trixie and Cheery). Still it was pretty hot and a good read, though I just have to ask what is with Cheerilee and talking like she's still in the 80s all of a sudden?

1722384 I'm glad you listen to us. It really fit well with the story....now let me be the first to say THAT WAS HOT!
EDIT : damn second stupid iPad didn't load don't matter though

This was a good chapter, dood.

And finding some Futa-Twi in this si always a plus.

i knew it was gonna go futa when you mentioned the "spell" instant win :heart:
and im thinking its chrysalis that teamed up with the diamond dog. also trixie and cheerilee have become quite the horny ones. :rainbowlaugh: could they be replaced with changlings :rainbowhuh: we must wait and see

1722366 Daaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dude. I'm happy you didn't back out of the clop here. :moustache: approves

I agree with Twi there. There's love and then there's borderline public indecency, which might prove problematic for Cheerilee and Spitfire...

Still a good read however! :pinkiehappy: and hot to boot :ajsmug:

Can I be the first to predict the futa-twi :twilightsmile: from way back when she had the dream I mean come how else are they gonna sexily make a baby. Otherwise great chapter, but I can't help but think you got inspiration from Of Maid & Mistresses. Keep up the good work its really great.
Till Next Time Peace.

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Cheerilee's speech patterns will be explained soon. Be patient. :duck:
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Thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:
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Honestly, I didn't think that futa would go over so well with so many. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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There's a reason behind the insanity. Don't worry. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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Maids and Mistresses was a good story, but I've been a fan of the fetish long before coming here. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png

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Along with many others appearentlly. And to cheerilee and trixie's perpetual horniness as of late I think I might be simmering up an anwser.

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Yup, figured as much, time for the fan girlish "CALLED IT!" :pinkiecrazy:

Right, forgot to comment. Ok, so... I have nothing against futa/genderbending anyway, just wanted to say that.
Now, onto the real stuff. I feel like the story is spiraling into pointless clop. I want to think things will turn around and it's not going to be just, well... pointless clop all around, so no, I'm not going to say stupid crap like "you are out of my favorite list and into my 'to read' list" and shit, I just hope there's something more here. Or rather, that it gets to that something soon.

And... I still can't wrap my head around Cheerilee's dialogues. I figure someone (Trixie?) asked her to speak like that or something, because otherwise, yeah, why? (And given that she didn't speak like that in TSW) But that's just a minor gripe anyway. ;p

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