Screwball is just like any other filly, but just a bit more...eccentric. Being the daughter of Discord can be hard just by itself. .But when other ponies starting pushing her around because she is different from every pony. She takes it out the best way she knows possible, with Chaos.But hopefully three other little fillies can help steer her the right way before any real damage is done.( this is my first attempt at making any type of story but hopefully it turns out okay)
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ooh! lovely little cute story!
wait discord has a daughter? that's a pony? who is the mother...
no no! not thinking about that!
Interesting
1560667 The mom is Screw Loose. I like this. Errors, but as always I look past them and at the content.
Great story so far! Can't wait for more!
Seriously, get to work, now.
MOAR!!!
Wow, Thanks for the feedback. I wouldn't even imagine that it would get such great reviews. A chapter should be up tonight.
I NEED MOAR
A thumb and a favorite from me :)
The second chapters up finally, and the third one will have some interesting developement.
And the second chapter actually has words in it so just ignore the "0 Words" thing
Ha Ha Screwball is a good pounder, Discorde will be proud.
Good story I love it
"Sometimes i wonder about that girl" He thought to himself " Now, back to more pressing issues, such as the function of a rubber duck, hmm..."
Hahaha
I'm wondering if Discord is gonna be mad at her for befriending an Element of Harmony.
Well, we will have to see
There was grammar issues, and this and that. I like the concept.
Dah
So cute and awsome at the same time
Glad you think so
It is not a bad chapter but the only problem I have with it is that it needs to be longer but that is just me.
I'm trying to work on that but sometimes i can't think of anything.
cant wait till next chapter
I really want to hear more of this storie!!!!
Im slowly adding more words to it as i go so hopefully there will be some long chapters
good scootaloo origin
Again, getting a little better with the grammar but it still needs work. There is one mistake.
When they had both died from an untimely car accident
There is no such thing as a car in Equestria (sorry I probably spelled it wrong). Anyway good chapter.
Yay more Screwball! I'm gonna wait till tomorrow to read it though. I need to sleep.
Too sad i wont be able to read for a while
im still wondering how screwball will tell discord about her friends
knowing the sisters of the six is one thing but living with applejack is to rich
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Okay, i fixed it. I hate to admit it but i might need an editor.
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Another great chapter!
It felt a little rushed and getting better with the grammar. It was a nice chapter.
Looked at the story. Saw that chapter 2 didn't have any words. Clicked it. Got confused. Marked to read later.
I fixed the 0 words thing in chapter 2. It must of bugged out or something
Oh No!!! That is a bad field trip...
Dun dun DUN!!
Lol I noticed a Rarity reference at the end there.
"Screwball was disappointed to find that their were no seats next to her friends and she had to sit down in her old street at the back of the room."
should she realy sit in her old street?
that was genius.
Haven't seen a good screwball story lately until I read this
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Okay, Discord's statue is in Canterlot, on top of a mountain, that is usually reached by train. How does she keep running there and back?
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I thought it'd be harder to explain her having the money to go on the train and all that so i just made it accessible by walking.
I don't alvays read Screwball stories.
/)(O3O)(\
But when i do i read "The odd life of screwball".
yep she started up the karma bomb
This story is just getting better an better.
This story has the good habit of getting better as it gets longer.
This is odd because most get worse over time, yours just gets better. Also,
DISCORD EEZ BEST (insert character type here.)!
There really needs to be a Discord emote on FimFiction.
Well, this story comes to an end. I've been trying to put it off for a long time but it had to be done. I'd like to thank Jet (my prereader) and Sneaky. I'm planning on a second story and this one will be alot better. (P.S there's a Castlevania 2 reference in there somewhere, props to whoever points it out)
I think that the line "what a horrible night for a curse" is from castlevania
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Correct. Good Job
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As i progressed in the chapters, I was reading Stephen KIng, so i kinda started using his writing style.
No do not continue
Haha thanks to me? All I did was critique your first couple of chapters.
I guess I'll write my onion on this one as well. The spelling errors did annoy me, but I liked the story too much for that to get in the way.
I see your writing in whole getting better and better with each chapter. It literally gets better each chapter lol.
And by the way, Discord is a terrible father. Who breaks their daughter's nose then turns them into stone?
Now that Discord is reformed, there is potential for a sequel here.
Discord is more interested in the function of a rubber duck than in his own daughter.