My name is Arc.
Ten years ago, I joined the gleaming order of the imperial guards under Guard Captain Shining Armour. I'm a unicorn who attended and graduated Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. My teachers call me lazy and said I never truly tried to do anything. It's not my fault I sometimes find Magic difficult. It just happens!
But something's happened, and I'm not sure I'll ever be the same after this.
(I don't mind if you guys don't like this fic, as is standard, but please, if you downthumb it, tell me what it is you dislike about it so maybe I won't stuff up in future fiction. It'd be greatly appreciated)
Thanks ever so much to Maelstrom for this image~ I chose this one over Dusty's because he's in full armour, so you get it. And this is a fic I'm working on whilst taking a break because my creative juices were dammed up working on already written storylines, even if I was adding to them. WELCOME TO ARC ANGEL! Oh, and I might have to up the rating at some stage, I'll let you guys know if I do.
(Warning, not canon to the Phobia story arc, things will be different)
Aw so sad so cute and so funny at the same time
Arc Angel Review by the Naval Brony
Hmmm, I read your first chapter and I can't say but I am impressed by it. However, there are still a couple of errors to correct.
Celestia's school for gifted unicorns
If it's the name of a place, it should be like this...
Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. No exceptions
Lightning
Lightning does not need to be capitalized unless it is part of a name of a pony, particulary pegasi. Otherwise, you can lowercase it to lightning.
Otherwise, very impressive story.
I'll be favoriting this story now. I expect big things
Hey, this looks pretty neat! :D
Keep it up!
I have a good feeling about this one.
My reaction to the end:cdn.uproxx.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/anchorman-well-that-escalated-quickly.jpg
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Sorry man, I don't actually have an editor, and I was doing it (for the first time) over fimfiction instead of on Microsoft word first.
1421574 Hmmm, if you want to make sure that your grammar makes sense, you can read your chapters aloud before publishing.
Also, I would suggest OpenOffice but however you can still stick to Microsoft Office.
i like it i'll be keeping track of this
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sounds like you need alawyer
Lol another chapter posted as soon as I favorited it.
I was surprised by his reaction to Cadence's unfinished proposal, but I guess that fits in with his character. I can tell this is going to be a real gut-wrenching story.
Aside from the grammar errors here and there its not bad. Keep it up.
you just made this story more addicting i look forward to the next chapter
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Hey cool! :D
Same happened to me when I favoured it too. :)
No regrets.
Furthermore, I got a bad feeling about this.
25% of me says he's being framed by Cadence.
50% says he was impersonated by somepony else.
And 25% says, well, shit just went down and he's in trouble...
Guess which is probably right...
Did anyone else really want this to be about Garris Right before the start of Mass Effect 2?
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Garrus*
Eheh i see where this is going
Wait...Prince Defender?
....Stalwart? But, aren't they confusing him with Aegis? I thought Aegis was Luna's Husband and Lover.
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Who is Aegis O.o
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WHOOPS.
WRONG STORY.
SORRY.
WRITING IS SO GOOD YOU CONFUSED ME WITH ANOTHER AUTHOR.
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hahaha, it's alright, and thanks for the compliment ^.^ just remember this isn't canon to the Phobia series storyline, this is a tale all to itself. I kinda forgot to put that there.
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Good thing I haven't yet read the Phobia series. Maybe later I'll do it.
... I really like Moondust.
I love it that you update so quickly! :D
Damn, this is getting exciting!
*puts on cap that says 'Official TWE Nitpicker'*
...
wait...
*removes cap*
This story isn't bad. In fact, I quite like it!
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
Keep up the great work!
Your picture looks a lot like Homage from Fallout: equestria. I will keep an eye on the story though as it seems interesting.
very nice. will be watching for updates on tis one.
You are the luckiest author, you have been on top of new stories for about a day.
I find this interesting, please go on.
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Pure coincidence
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Not my fault, but I'm not complaining ^.^
Continue.
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The Termite King demands it.
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So, when knocked unconscious he becomes a murderer?
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It's a large, complicated plot. You can only keep up as he can, since he can't see everywhere at once, he can only see and hear what's around him. More will be revealed as the tale goes along~
I ripped some of it off, and dipped it into the soup, swirled it around and ate it quickly. If you have never done this before, you simply must try it.
HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THAT!?!?!? IMPOSSIBRU! Nah jks, it tastes really good eh?
When's next chapter?
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Working on it now. have been for the better part of today.
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oh snap, interesting story keep it up.
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Awesome!
Update soon!
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wut
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I'm trying to update it as often as possible. I'm working on the next chapter now in fact.
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It's incredible that you update so fast and so well. O_o
I think the story so far is really cool so you understand why I want to see what happens next.
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The next is almost complete actually, I'm just finishing it up now. I'm glad you're enjoying it, this is my first try at doing an actual story in first person perspective. I've done journal entries before, but not first person perspective the entire way through.
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Can't wait!!!
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Wait no longer then!
BWAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!! XD
Fucking genius.
Bro hoof to you. /)
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Lol dat ending
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I tried to make it amusing.