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Valorousspectre


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Follow the adventure of the Great and Powerful Trixie after leaving Ponyville at the conclusion of her disastrous visit. Bear witness to her hardships as she faces the land alone, her trials, tribulations, past and present.

But lo, who is this stallion she meets upon the road? Who cares right? She hates him immediately. He's the only stallion so far who has refused to throw himself at her hooves, babbling in awestruck wonder. Besides. He's so boring! No emotion whatsoever.

But I suppose... Any company is better than none?

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 16 )

Consider this an apology for not having finished The Midnight Guardian just yet guys. I hope you all enjoy it.

Yes. Please use Trixie more often. It flows better.

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I'm not sure whether to take that as a compliment or an insult O.o

Solitude is but despair in disguise.

Quite beautiful, albeit short.

Damn that was some moving stuff :fluttercry: I enjoyed it thoroughly as is with all of your stories, keep up the amazing work my friend and I look forward to reading more from you in the future

That was actually very sad. I thought the story was pretty 'meh' until the last few chapters - Although I am glad that the feelgood ending is the actual one.
So I suppose this has earned the SUPER PRESTIGIOUS HONOR of a FAVORITE.

Because those are so damn rare.

Wow.. That ending. :fluttercry: Great story, thumbs up and a favorite. Thanks for a good piece of writing.

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It's definitely not Everyone's cup of tea, but I enjoyed writing it and was quite happy with how it turned out.

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I uh... ehe, I've written a lot of happy endings, but only two (I think) so far of unhappy ones and this one is the better of the two. The other 'sad' ending is part of one of my other tales.

This is actually one of the few stories where I enjoyed the sad ending as well as the happy ending. I mean, obviously the happier one was better :rainbowlaugh: but the sad one was somehow just as romantic. Well done, sir. Well done.

Hey I remember this being one of the first MLP stories I came across...back before I had a profile lol. Glad I found it again. It was very well done!

Not sure which ending I liked better....not usually a fan of the cliched happily ever after endings so it was nice to see you take a different route BUT....that ending is just so tragic:raritycry: after we've started to root for them two so I'm glad there a happy option as well :twilightsmile:

This is a beautiful story mate and while both endings are excelently written I prefer the proper ending to the tragic one... :fluttershysad:
Don't stop writing your story's because they are very well done! :pinkiehappy:

Necro time.

All I really have to say is that it felt like you got bored or felt pressured and rushed the end. The dialogue parts felt pretty awkward too, but that's just a result of that rush. Otherwise I quite enjoyed it. The awkward style of journal based writing seems to suit you, though I personally don't find it quite as engaging.

7473154 hehe, thanks

Early going, tried something different. To be honest, it was rushed a little, but This is an older piece of mine, so I'm not terribly worried. People liked it, so I posted it here when I migrated from fanfic.net. Thank you for your thoughts~ Look forward to your next comment!

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