The attack on Canterlot failed miserably, and has revealed the Changelings to all of Equestria. Now, they are hated creatures, often hunted down, and exiled from the land. Schism wakes, after the battle, confused, hurt, and alone. How will he deal with his position, and what will he do with what he learned from his brother? Can he finish what his brother started, or will he fail to finish what was started with that first pill?
Tags and Characters will be edited along the way, to better reflect the story as it progresses.
Chapters (1)
"and so he felt his body shutting down due to the trauma."
A bit of an odd sentence - "everything went black" would sound punchier in my view.
648233 So cliche
Criticism? Well. The start feels a bit packed with 'he'. But because I read it to enjoy, I rarely come across much else unless it's blatant
there's always one dislike...
good start. i am intrigued.
649036 It wouldn't be complete without one dislike.
Yet another changeling fic...
Wait a sec...Do I spy a romance tag?
TRAAAAAAAAAAACKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING.
Freaking love changeling fics. This one looks promising.
649279 You do, in fact, spy a romance tag. Although that won't be coming for a little while. Schism still needs to find a place to stay, and get himself some sustenance. And I also love changeling fics. I find that they are an under appreciated source of material. Anyway, I'll probably have another chapter up in a few hours, depending on how the plot develops in my mind.